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[Actuator] Oishiku Itadakimashita [English]

[アクチュエーター] おいしくいただきました [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2018-04-25 11:22
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:13.44 MiB
Length:21 pages
Favorited:853 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.36

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Posted on 25 April 2018, 11:22 by:   surma1412    PM
Uploader Comment
Typesetting:『 』NTR
Translator: Kiyo is my Hime

I am fucking free from typesetting this doujin
Posted on 25 April 2018, 12:26 by:   Ficfactor    PM
Score +126
Thanks! Always love some good moral degeneration.
Posted on 25 April 2018, 14:45 by:   Elizabeth Liones    PM
Score -100
The dumb girl with no future to get involved with this prototype of bandit who must have an QI of a chimpanzee
Posted on 25 April 2018, 15:06 by:   ThunderKurono    PM
Score +57
Poor Akira Fudo.
Posted on 25 April 2018, 22:21 by:   climacus    PM
Score -100
The guy is trash that only has to offer a penis, something that any man has, but offers no future for her. Miki is a candidate to live in poverty and sex does not substitute for the maternal needs of a miserable life.
Posted on 25 April 2018, 22:34 by:   Xhion Pime    PM
Score +42
I'm not entirely sure if you translated this from the spanish version. but that one has a lot of small mistakes (I can tell becaause it was my first translation >.< )... and since you commited almost the exact same mistakes...well...

There is a lot of stuff I lost in the translation, like Shougo's accent (which Miki starts to imitate); the biggest mistake on my part (and the reason I didn't want to upload an english version) was on Pg.16 when Shougo starts to talk about food...I'm pretty sure it's a pun, with a double meaning right there...

Well, in the end since the idea is the same, it doesn't matter that much :)

@surma1412
Yeah, no worries, actually I'm quite glad my translation received some love ^_^ . Yet, you should know it's far from perfect :/
Last edited on 26 April 2018, 16:05.
Posted on 26 April 2018, 00:08 by:   surma1412    PM
Score +12
@Xhion Pime

translation
Japanese => Spanish => English

I am not the one translating it, but a friend on discord is the one who translated the Spanish Version to English Version
Posted on 28 April 2018, 04:21 by:   Tetrofish    PM
Score +85
"First time I've ever seen Miki dressed like that"
dawg, she wears a 2 inch miniskirt to school everyday, you gotta be real dense to think hotpants are worse.

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