[hrd] Manatsu no Setsuna (DARLING in the FRANXX) [English] [Lonely Hikikomori]

@Lonely Hikikomori
You did slightly better than some other "translators" here.
is english your first language? I noticed some mistakes made by non-native english speakers, unless that's how that character is supposed to speak.
i.e.
"you wanted to see boobs?" it should be "Did you want to see boobs?"
"then I go topless" can be either "then I'll go topless" or "then I'm going topless"
"I made sure no one comes in" "I made sure no one will come in"

Posted on 30 April 2018, 01:20 by: a35240

Hiro's wife is very cute.

Posted on 30 April 2018, 07:32 by: Lonely Hikikomori

@The Mike
My native language is a very small language, so I learned both Japanese and English. Thank you very much for the feedback, I'm always trying to improve!
PS. The word order in Japanese is really different from English and actually is a lot closer to what I got used to in my native language so sorry in advance for these and any future mistakes ^^

Posted on 01 May 2018, 01:13 by: tj911

@Lonely Hikikomori
What is your native language, anyways?

Posted on 01 May 2018, 01:16 by: Lonely Hikikomori

@tj911
I'm sorry, I have really bad memories with it and I don't even use it anymore. I try to have absolutely no connection to it anymore. Right now I use English the most so it's pretty much my native language ^^

Posted on 01 May 2018, 04:47 by: The Mike

aw, don't be ashamed, mine's spanish and yes, the order of elements in a sentence is different from both english and japanese

Posted on 23 May 2021, 21:27 by: KoiFishFace1

*ichigo rushed in five seconds ago* damn she was also inside if she rushed in before she washed his back

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language:	english translated
parody:	darling in the franxx
character:	hiro zero two
artist:	hrd
male:	sole male
female:	big breasts bikini horns sole female swimsuit
other:	full color