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Posted on 17 May 2018, 04:12 UTC by:   centarion    PM
Uploader Comment
https://inkbunny.net/graymuzzle
Posted on 13 January 2018, 18:49 UTC by:   Havel The Rock    PM
Score +110
This makes my penis sad

HOW CAN YOU NOT HAVE IMPROVED AS AN ARTIST? I'M A FUCKING SIMPLETON AND I IMPROVED FROM STICK FIGURES TO BUSTY ANIME GIRLS, SO HOW CAN YOU NOT GO FROM EYE CANCER TO EYE CANDY

FUCKING HELL, WHY HASNT IT IMPROVED?,
Last edited on 22 March 2018, 01:07 UTC.
Posted on 17 January 2018, 21:18 UTC by:   PregnantWhoreFucker    PM
Score +51
This looks like what I'd produce if I was asked to draw autism.
Posted on 21 January 2018, 21:26 UTC by:   FarkyMac    PM
Score +20
This was bad wen Maximum Joe was posting it and it's bad now.
Posted on 22 January 2018, 02:39 UTC by:   Nintyfresh    PM
Score +35
God this is... hard to read. It's like everything is narrated. You know how they say show don't tell? Well he's showing and telling ,and I don't think the writing is all that complicated.
Posted on 23 January 2018, 08:12 UTC by:   Nintyfresh    PM
Score +33
This is the best worst thing I've read in a while. But it's really like an anticlimax, like literary blue balls. Ray is being fired for not playing ball with the commissioner, that's a good story, sure, and it lasts 4 pages. We never really see the outcome, it's just sorta stated as a thing that happens. Hell that's the kind of story that can drive an entire book but we get four pages and most of it's just narration telling us what happened later.

Also what's with all the God stuff? it's a comic about dogs fucking but there's a lot of really religious stuff in it that's kinda out of place.
Posted on 23 January 2018, 11:07 UTC by:   sissyliana    PM
Score +26
See you cant be critical with this persons work. Why? well because they suffer from the jilted artist complex where if you critique their work "YOU JUST DON'T UNDERSTAND!" beret in a mess wrists slit and their dramatic expressions reaching peak fay.

So to say again as always
The characters are bland and fucking mary sues getting everything they want for nothing at all
all characters that COULD have avoided this and have actual plot are ignored for the desire to show off sex like it's somehow dealt with maturely in this, it is not.
the writer is UNBELIEVABLY sexist showcasing off only failing women and successful men in their world and having all women choose sex over other possible things.
the art is terrible because the artist cranks this out so fast with no hesitation or planning making several mistakes and having many characters look generic and similar as a result.
The story is non existent.
all attempts at conflict are quickly resolved and ignored.

and god forbid you ever say this to the person's actual accounts because if you do, you get berated bullied by several hundred retarded fans who don't ask for substance which they CAN get they just refuse it and you're labelled some sort of troll for wanting something better of someone who clearly likes to tell a story but fails in telling a story.

So no, whomever you are reading this with spite in your eyes hate in your mind and malice oozing from your fingertips ready to type up the typical "if you don't like it dont read it" because trust me, there isn't much to read and there isn't even that much to like for yourself in the first place. No one here posting negative comments is a "troll" they're honest.

Do you remember that word? Honest? its where you act your age and tell the truth even if it's harsh? Free from deceit? course you do, you're just not it yourself.

To all who are being honest, and honest in some very amusing ways, I say to you continue being honest on everything not just the comics you see major flaws in. Be honest of the work you love, be honest of the works of friends, Be honest in your own works and accept honesty from others.
Posted on 23 January 2018, 12:25 UTC by:   Loki The Flameshield    PM
Score +45
This bullshit is still going?!
Posted on 24 January 2018, 06:11 UTC by:   Nintyfresh    PM
Score +11
So i've been thinking about all the things I hated about that dumb comic, and how it could be better, so here goes.

Ray has no conflict with anyone really. He's never in conflict with his wife, his dad, anyone, he'd be a Mary Sue if anyone noticed him.

here are some way he could be better:

Ray should have been an atheist. His dad's orthodox Jewish and that'd be a good point of contention between them. Similarly when his wife wants to raise their kids Jewish, it could bother him because he's culturally jewish but not religious.
Anything with his mom. She's basically non existent at this point. He should try and reconnect with her, but hasn't. Abe (his dad) might as well be a widower.
Ray should have really freaked out about having kids because he got Tina pregnant the first time they had sex and so their relationship by this point is only 4 months old. Is he really sure she's the one? He's never been in a long term relationship before, so is he going to regret it?
There should have been some conflict about buying a toy poodle, when his wife is a toy poodle. I'm not really sure but something.
Ray's conflict with his boss should have been more than four pages. It should have been set up before hand as well. It should have had him get fired, sue, draw it out, strain his mental health, and so on. He should have won but it should have been more interesting.

Love how Newbe103 downvotes everyone who disagrees with him, what an asshole.

"those who cant respect the artist don't have to read it
some people like this art-style like me
and the most important thing in this comic is the story
so don't complain about it"

Fuck your shit you little dick. The story is the worst thing about this whole thing.
Last edited on 30 January 2018, 01:53 UTC.
Posted on 30 January 2018, 10:24 UTC by:   blunt005    PM
Score +43
Can you not disagree with anyone here?
This art is objectively bad, and you don't need to be an artist to see if critique bad art. Similarly, you don't have to be a writer to be able to see convoluted mary-sue trash.
And to the people saying "if you don't like it, don't read it" how are people supposed to know that it's garbage without reading it first?
Posted on 01 February 2018, 05:14 UTC by:   Nintyfresh    PM
Score +8
Don't you know blunt005, you can't criticize these snowflakes because their feelings will get hurt and they can't help it because they're perfect and you're a big meanie for suggesting their shitty plot has no real conflict and its religious themes are weird combined with the pee thing.

Which I don't want to suggest you can't both have in a story, but the story has to be appealing enough to work both angles.
Posted on 01 February 2018, 15:59 UTC by:   ChaosMarine40k    PM
Score -20
What many of you are doing is being a dick and my gramer is bad and spelling may be even worse but this is not about me so dont bother commenting about it. Rather than try to help the artist most of you just post negative things calling the art bad and story garbage how is that helping anyone thats called being a trole straight and simple. Some of you posted some decent points sbout the story like how the part where Ray gets in a conflict with the boss could have bean longer and a good story arc but at the same time they constantly called the art trash and other rude thing that are completely unnecessary at all. The comments section is for the artist to communicate with the people and post critiques not criticize the other because you think the work sucks witch is your opinion that you are initialed to but you dont have the right to bully and abuse others so if you dont have anything nice to say then move on its as simple as that.
Posted on 02 February 2018, 06:54 UTC by:   Nintyfresh    PM
Score +55
Chaos, I try to be civil, but this story isn't good, and it's okay to call it garbage trash, it's okay to be mean about it. If someone puts themselves out there and can't handle it, well there's really no hope for them. People need to be able to take criticism well and bad criticism in stride. Be the grown up if someone else won't.

PononimousScore: Don't act like people can't criticize things. You're basically saying if you can't make a movie you shouldn't call it bad. But hey, you know what, maybe I will rewrite this garbage with a cohesive plot and compelling characters.
Posted on 03 February 2018, 01:57 UTC by:   sissyliana    PM
Score +7
ChaoseMarine40k

The artist doesnt want help and the writer doesnt want help so fuck them :) Hi Newbe103 I'll take that negative 8 comment score you like handing out cause you cant handle criticism of someone ELSE'S artwork and story. Kthnxbye
Posted on 05 February 2018, 00:31 UTC by:   FarkyMac    PM
Score +26
Honestly, her face in the final panel of the first page is all you need to know about this comic. Everyone involved in creating it is smug and self-important, and such people, and therefore any creations they produce, are subject to no improvement nor even initial quality.
Posted on 09 February 2018, 19:42 UTC by:   ChaosMarine40k    PM
Score -23
I never said you can't call there work bad or criticize them. What I can not understand is if you have no intention of trying to make constructive criticism and clearly not going to fap to this then stop wasting everyone's time and go finde something to fap to this is a god dam porn site not an art site piss of
Posted on 10 February 2018, 02:46 UTC by:   Karnoffel    PM
Score +9
ChaosMarine40k

If this is a porn site and not an art site, piss off with your complaints about "not appreciating the art" because this isn't an art site. ALL the criticism is technically constructive since you can only go up from rock bottom, pointing out something is bad to the creator who is completely unaware or ignorant IS taking a step in a constructive direction. In addition people have even been pointing the specific reasons for why this is bad (being constructive). Your spelling and grammar can be bad sure, but if you don't even have the basic understanding of how to read other's posts and see that they've already met your complaints, you should just quite frankly shut the fuck up.
Posted on 10 February 2018, 13:21 UTC by:   sissyliana    PM
Score +6
Chaos your points are moot because AGAIN the artist and the writer on even an art site, DON'T WANT CRITICISM. they've said so and blocked everyone who gives it.
you're defending the defenseless by trying. I feel bad for you. you're jumping in front of the presidents bullet when he's pointing the gun at his own foot at this point.
Posted on 11 February 2018, 21:12 UTC by:   ChaosMarine40k    PM
Score -7
And yet for some reason you guys visit this page just to wast your time to talk about something you say you hate and what i said would be the same thing about any other guys like you who seam only interested in puting people down. You can reply to this if you want but let me think its going to be negative and poitles fot you if what you said about the people making this blocking people then why do you bother. So like the saying if you dont like stop reading it and finde somthing else or somthing like that right
Posted on 12 February 2018, 08:20 UTC by:   Nintyfresh    PM
Score -2
I'm not sure I understood any of that, is your brain okay?
Posted on 13 February 2018, 18:21 UTC by:   Bhaal29    PM
Score +2
Dude, just...just walk away from this thing. The artist and writer on this thing is currently in his "I reject your reality and and substitute my own" phase. He goes apeshit every time someone poke a hole in his numerous plot hole and refuse ANY sort of comment. The story was interesting but it soon turn out as some hipster existential crisis (Its quite litteraly Hipster life: The furry drama). Don't bother with that crap, just hang a sign with the "Oh no, its retarded:" meme and move on.

Not a good fap, not a good read.

I give this shit a 3/10 and I'm just glad its not vore, diapers or worse...
Posted on 15 February 2018, 03:13 UTC by:   cornelius_4    PM
Score +8
Is there some way to expunge this...thing -I hesitate to call it art- from showing up... here?

Getting very tired of seeing this shitwork every time I browse the site.
Last edited on 15 February 2018, 19:35 UTC.
Posted on 15 February 2018, 07:24 UTC by:   Nintyfresh    PM
Score +4
Maybe Bhaal, but it's so fucking weird it demands attention
Posted on 24 February 2018, 07:19 UTC by:   SeaWolfTx    PM
Score -41
Dude, I really liked this, the whole thing. The stories, the art, the yiff. Fuck these haters. Funny how they can all "do it better" but none have, lol.
Keep up the work, I cant wait to see what Tina has in-store fur that slut cat.
Posted on 27 February 2018, 10:56 UTC by:   sissyliana    PM
Score +5
XD Seawolf, no one here has ever said "We can do it better". if anything we're saying "at least we can't do anything as bad as this" and happily going about our merry way without anything to prove.
Posted on 27 February 2018, 19:01 UTC by:   Lordeathwolf    PM
Score -12
I really enjoyed this comic, it had a nice feel to it and it flowed out well. I wasn't reading it for the sex but the story that you were making, and it hooked me fast. Please don't stop making this wonderful story.
Posted on 01 March 2018, 07:06 UTC by:   Nintyfresh    PM
Score +4
Wow, Tina's being a real bitch to that cat.

I can do it better SeaWolf, but I won't because i don't want to because it's not good enough, and i have better ideas.
Posted on 06 March 2018, 23:47 UTC by:   sissyliana    PM
Score -22
awwwww pononimous, you do care, sorry we stepped on your god's toes. and thanks for letting us all know you're twelve. Someone will be sure to tell a mod you lied about your age on the internet. Thanks again love X Mwah.

Seriously though you did like the porn equivalent of the hilarious navy seal comment XD
Posted on 12 March 2018, 21:49 UTC by:   Nintyfresh    PM
Score +36
using the word faggot? Wow you really are 12. Listen, it's the internet, peopel are gonna talk shit, especially about something that is, let's all be honest, is by and large, shit. If you like it that's fine, but don't get pissy when everyone else is kinda weirded out by the strange hodgepodge of bad writing and mediocre art.

Also i wouldn't assume anyone who criticizes it can't write, or at least couldn't write better than this. I have a feeling most people have tried their hand at fanfiction at some point, and this isn't much better than the worst fanfiction I've read.
Posted on 13 March 2018, 19:55 UTC by:   Pononimous    PM
Score -40
@ Nintyfresh

Going on and on without taking even a split second to realize that this entire thread was trolled and no one, including you, realized it even after I made it perfectly clear that that's exactly what had happened.

10/10

would read again.
Posted on 21 March 2018, 23:23 UTC by:   FarkyMac    PM
Score +6
Bruh, you gotta realize that this comic is going to be terrible no matter who uploads it. o3o
Posted on 25 March 2018, 19:13 UTC by:   carter14    PM
Score -2
I support you and I encourage you to continue your comics even me, I've been insulted even more for free, I've been removed from my photo galleries, "It's crazy if they don't like one not pursuing " It's simple, but as most are deaf.. Keep sending your galleries and many other good luck and courage
Posted on 26 March 2018, 06:49 UTC by:   Nintyfresh    PM
Score +46
I actually agree with carter here. Don't be discouraged that people think your work sucks, is uncanny, is incredibly odd, out of place, unfocused, has terrible writing, lacks conflict, glosses over several important plot points and combines fetish art with religious diatribe in a very heavy handed way. Those may all be true and they aren't a reflection of your worth as a writer or artist, and they aren't a reflection of who you'll grow into. I've read this entire thing, and it's not because it's very good. I read it for the opposite reason, because it's bafflingly bad. In my own way I enjoyed it, and it may not be how you wanted me to enjoy it but you should be proud of having made something even if it is... really something.
Posted on 27 March 2018, 11:02 UTC by:   sissyliana    PM
Score +24
Ninety you beautiful bastard
Posted on 11 April 2018, 19:44 UTC by:   Dongs McGee    PM
Score +7
This comic was (WAS) previously funded by the taxpayers of the state of Connecticuit. Chew on that for a hot minute
Posted on 12 April 2018, 05:38 UTC by:   Nintyfresh    PM
Score -2
Naw, Dongs, naw, how? You gotta be shitting me.
Posted on 13 April 2018, 06:45 UTC by:   Ysmen    PM
Score +6
Terrible fucking shit popping up every single week/day on the front page.
Posted on 24 April 2018, 01:36 UTC by:   Dongs McGee    PM
Score +4
t Nintyfresh, the writer/commissioner was a CT politician, until his opponents found his furry fetish profile and saw that he was into rape-play and used it to tank his reputation lol
Posted on 26 April 2018, 07:51 UTC by:   ganada1234    PM
Score -3
What was the damn writer thinking?
Posted on 03 May 2018, 02:02 UTC by:   samaran123    PM
Score -6
END IT END IT END IT END IT

MY EYES MY EYES MY EYES

END IT END IT END IT END IT

MY EYES MY EYES MY EYES

END IT END IT END IT END IT

MY EYES MY EYES MY EYES

END IT END IT END IT END IT

MY EYES MY EYES MY EYES
Posted on 03 May 2018, 13:03 UTC by:   andyching168    PM
Score +4
其實這本並沒有那麼糟吧,劇情方面還是很不錯的
Posted on 04 May 2018, 17:08 UTC by:   Pononimous    PM
Score -8
I'm liking this comic more and more. The plot gets better and better and the artist is slowly improving. Keep up the good work and fuck the trolls, they're not worth the time it takes to read what they post.
Posted on 07 May 2018, 07:41 UTC by:   Nintyfresh    PM
Score +2
Holy shit, Dong's is right! Gray Muzzle is Councilman Scott Chamberlain of Connecticut. Now I don't think that necessarily means there was any embezzling going on but goddamn, you'd think he'd be better at writing. Might explain all the really weird shit like the pee and the religious shit, and why the characters work at the DMV.
Posted on 11 May 2018, 23:26 UTC by:   sissyliana    PM
Score -5
at this point i'm not surprised of Gray being a shit councilman he's a shit writer who doesn't understand plot structure or stories at all , thats all he'll ever be to me.

OKAY WOW honest to fucking god WOW Gray has the fucking audacity to try and include rape as a topic in his comic again after how FUCKING badly he fucked it up the first time? not only that he's doing the same thing with it again, curing the rape with sex, because that's OBVIOUSLY how it works!
I'm literally shocked at how fucking stupid this man can be right now. I thought Chrischan was the bottom of barrel of lolcow autism spectrum but HOLY FUCKING SHIT was I wrong.
Last edited on 11 May 2018, 23:42 UTC.
Posted on 13 May 2018, 01:54 UTC by:   Pononimous    PM
Score -27
I notice every time I post a comment I always get a -4 on my score. ALWAYS! It's never different. What that tells me is that, out of all the thousands of people who use this site, there's only four who don't like my comments and always downvote me. I find that encouraging.
Posted on 15 May 2018, 05:21 UTC by:   JinzoCrush    PM
Score +3
This reminds me of that meme where a guy named Andy gives Princess Peach a cheap come-on line lol.
But, it's not the worst comic on here. I think it's probably taking more heat than it deserves, though the problems some of you mentioned ARE indeed problems.
Posted on 17 May 2018, 05:26 UTC by:   Protectos    PM
Score -1
what kind of turbo autist can recite on-demand exactly how long they've been working for their company, to the day

jesus christ the thing the author does with dolls and plushies terrifies me
Last edited on 17 May 2018, 06:36 UTC.

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