Improvements:
Consistent art style
Better attitude towards critique
Fixed spelling errors on page 3

It's certainly... unique.

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Who's the artist?

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"futas are kinda rsre nowadays"
"principle" (should be 'principal')
Typos and spelling errors. Ugh. As a former scanlation proofreader, I weep.
Cool ideas though. And who is the artist?
I do like the casualness of the dialogue where it's spelled properly. It sets it apart from a lot of other comics.
Dank memes are also fun sometimes.

Over all, feels like a porn version of "Tails Gets Trolled." I like that.

(edit: thanks for fixing the typos/spelling errors)

Last edited on 01 June 2018, 01:07.

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Thank you for reading and giving feedback on my work. I'm not sure how to tag myself, since it seems to not be working the same way I put the other tags for some reason.
Any more errors that you noticed and informed me about will be much appreciated.

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Ahhhh....Masterpiece *Videogamedunkey voice*

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To tag yourself, you need to go to the forums and request that your name be added to the 'artist' namespace.
This thread.
https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showtopic=199295

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This is so horrible that it's good.

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That must be the first time I've seen Patrick in a futa comic, hopefully it will be the last time as well.

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