English? Huh

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"Our ball must be on full power producing semen"

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language: """"""""""""English""""""""""""

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After seeing this I'm kinda surprised about how few and rare Hotaru's rape doujin is.

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Page 4 typo
Koharu instead of Hotaru.

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Added the poor grammar tag. Given that the wiki says "A gallery comment MUST detail the mistakes otherwise the tag is invalid.", here it is.
As for the details... there's no page with proper grammar. The... "translator"... doesn't appear to have grammatical person and tense concepts, and plurals and the like, not to mention, as @kinoshita_tokichiro said, even Hotaru's name is mistranslated in one page.

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@a1414585

You need to point enough grammar errors to make the tag valid.

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Why do non-english speakers repeatedly try to translate into english?

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Take my sperm (child)

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Who is Koharu? "when I'm a kid I often eat shidari company sweet" The poor grammar tag applies and it is sad that they didn't even bother to Google and find out how to spell hotaru's first or last name correctly. Not to mention she has no dialogue at all. This would have been better if there was no text at all. Though the art is only average. Bonus points for being fully colored though.

Art 5. Plot 4. Sexiness 4. Translation 3. True to character 2. All out of 10.

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Some spelling/grammar issues:

[p1]
"when I'm a kid I often eat" -> "when I was a kid, I often ate"
"we should thanks" -> "thank"
"sweet" -> "sweets" (or "candy")

[p2]
"is talented slut" -> "is a talented slut"

[p3]
"it feel" -> "feels"

[p6]
"he pour" -> "poured"
"this tit" -> "these tits"
"it gonna [...] Hotaru-chan milk" -> "it's gonna [...] Hotaru-chan's milk"

[p8]
"cant" -> "can't"
"how many times I've cum?" -> "how many times have I cum?"
"our ball" -> "balls"

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Fun fact: Gallery moderators have to comment to fix a veto by other gallery moderators on the worst tag in existence.

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It is definitely a mess, because of the overlap between 2 serious issues:
-Being heavily misused just like Nakadashi, meaning an unusually high percentage of it won't fucking die without a veto. (which the comment requirement along with needing MP15 has kinda fixed but not retroactively)
-Being designed to be a temporary tag like Incomplete. (despite wiki not mentioning it as such) or anything slapped on an ongoing gallery without very high presence at the time of tagging.

Last edited on 26 June 2022, 00:45.

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