Sick SIblings [English] [Rewrite] [EZ Rewriter]

Posted on 14 June 2018, 01:29 by: ezrewriter

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this is a rewrite not a translation

raw https://e-hentai.org/g/679872/9de2681460/

English translation https://e-hentai.org/g/700513/415fc3de35/

Posted on 14 June 2018, 01:51 by: Fate Averruncus

Why? Why do you still fucking exist here? NOONE WANTS REWRITES! THESE ARE NOT IN DEMAND BY ANYONE!

Posted on 14 June 2018, 02:12 by: Krstina

Why again and again ...
If you were requested by fans then use private gallery, share the link to your fans and done, no more complain!

Posted on 14 June 2018, 02:32 by: @Inkblot

...Is there a particular reason you felt a need to slather your particular brand of garbage all over a comic that already has a proper English translation?

Posted on 14 June 2018, 04:11 by: Caixos

Yep, I think he's a Masochist who gets off on the insults and low scores his work gets, that's the only logical explanation, as he reads your posts I'm sure he is wildly ejaculating onto his keyboard.

Posted on 14 June 2018, 04:37 by: fogpet

I just click on rewrites for the comments section.

Posted on 14 June 2018, 04:43 by: Bufuman

If y'all hate his uploads so much, just put him down as an excluded uploader in your settings. Or exclude English rewrites on the Excluded Languages list.

The fact that he's been at it this long and some of you still haven't done that tells me you just like to spit venom at him more than you hate seeing his "work", garbage though it is.

Posted on 14 June 2018, 05:05 by: BL.Kunkka

There are some typos here and there, but the quality is pretty good. I don't see any problem, why so much hate?

Posted on 14 June 2018, 05:50 by: sovietwarpig

Reading his rewrites the same way you would watch a "so-bad-it's-good" movie kinda makes for a fun experience. This one in particular, when compared to the original, is so hilariously dumb that it's funny. A few that stand out:
"No silly! You just made me cum."

"I just freaked my sister out by the size of my cock! This is what happens every time a girl sees it."

"Jiro watch my tits bounce!" "Wow" "Do you like watching my tits bounce?!" "I love watching them bounce! I'm going to make them bounce even more!"

And the chick says "OH GOD" like 7 times while riding him. I've never heard a chick say that so frequently during, but now I want to.

Posted on 14 June 2018, 05:58 by: sonictmp

Reminder that no one wants rewrites. Take your shit elsewhere.

Posted on 14 June 2018, 09:30 by: M0M0E

For frack sake, stop doing this crap. You do realize you're actually making things worse with your half assed atttempt a 3rd grade grammar and piddle stick narration? Furthermore when other translators come around and plan their next piece, they're going to skip over these because at half glance, they probably assume a COMPETENT person did them and then were stuck with your garbage.

Shove this shit in your dropbox and keep it there for your wimpy friends (if any) to share amongs their little club house.

Posted on 14 June 2018, 11:17 by: princepyre

I dont mind rewrites but I guess the reason why they hate it is because it is old?

Posted on 14 June 2018, 11:23 by: Sweet Breaker

@sovietwarpig I'm not going to read it so I'll have to take your word for it but it sounds a lot like western porn dialogue which is known for being especially bad. If that's the case then I can see why people in general hate this stuff, seeing as the site is primarily used for perusal of eastern works.

I'm part of the group who dislikes his work but not because it's a rewrite, it's because he went from uploading like every week to every day and I can't open the home page without seeing minimum two of his galleries every time (and I'm not going to filter this shit 'cause I'm not a little bitch). Like god man tone it down, did school let out for summer and now you have nothing to do but churn out rewrites twice a day every day or something? Take it easy, my dude.

Posted on 14 June 2018, 18:24 by: Zweihaender

Shit/Writer. actual title

Posted on 16 June 2018, 02:04 by: Naruto0116

Not gonna lie. These comment sections are more entertaining than T.V.

Posted on 26 April 2021, 01:57 by: Azperez

I ACTUALLY read this out of sheer curiosity and to be honest, it's not that bad granted I haven't read the "Official translation" but considering that translations aren't always 100% accurate and that nothing jarring was present in this rewrite, I have to say, this was a nice find, thx.

Posted:	2018-06-14 01:29
Parent:	None
Visible:	Yes
Language:	English RW
File Size:	14.76 MiB
Length:	16 pages
Favorited:	160 times

language:	english rewrite
artist:	ogura shuuichi
male:	sole male
female:	breast feeding defloration kissing nakadashi sister sole female
mixed:	incest

Rating:		215
Average: 1.45