RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1241335/da38e25c03/

TN: I probably screwed up the translation on Page 6

@Sickjerker: Dude, that would apply to basicly anything that's Rule 34

This Tomoki Tomonori doujin is great; the art is quite nice. Really like the character design for Alice and the futanari is done great too.

Thanks for your translation of this, q91.

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why is this about alice in wonderland?

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@Sickjerker

Why isn't more from this artist about Alice? They draw the cutest, yet lewdest Alice I've ever seen and I love it!

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@ktaguri13

this is a lewd girl dressed in alice cosplay, nothing except her being dressed similarly to alice says that this is an alice in wonderland parody of any sort
i mean, i get that this is a dumb thing to be irritated over, but you cant just slap "alice in wonderland" on a generic porno
if youre not gonna put in the effort to actually use that concept just make your own generic anime girl

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@Sickjerker

Actually, you can slap Alice in wonderland on a generic porno... Why?

Cause rule 34 is a thing. Not to mention porn doesn't need logic or story... at the end of the day, it's just fap material

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@ktaguri13

ok, so ive just got a hate boner for this thing cause i keep coming back
but nah, i get your point
but why tho?
there's tons of porn out there that's used alice, most of which actually use that fact
there's so many alternatives to this in so many ways, this just seems really dumb and cheap

i guess im trying to say porn should have standards??
which is a really dumb thing to say, especially coming from someone constantly coming back to argue about futa alice porn,

but this particular piece of hentai just really irks me i guess, since it's so unoriginal??? i guess that's my main point.
if youre gonna make a generic thing featuring a character, but having nothing at all to do with that character in the slightest, dont try to sell it on the name alone

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That is one pointless futa dick lol

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