Bounty from atomicpuppy
https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=18186

raw https://e-hentai.org/s/e3fb5e8867/761741-169

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luv 2 get the horn

Base +6, darienkd +9, UWin +11, MazinK +6, italicus +15, noname31 +6

>look well and depict
>i was shoving sausages in their since i was a kid
wat

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Some really bad translation here.

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This is almost laruffii-tier

Base +7, johj333 +6, -Shun- +23

Would you like to have a sex? XD

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now if only this could happen in real life with real hentai/porn artists

Base +6, darienkd -9, whitetears -6, Nichter -6

Just so we can upvote the "poor grammar" tag... Numbers stated are page.panel:

02.4) "heard A gossip" . As far as I know gossip is uncountable, so it ought to be "heard some gossip".
02.5) "have A sex" (x2) -> Should be "have sex". "Have A sex" means "having a genital organ" so true for both of them. In hentai-land, even angels have a sex...
03.2) "sketch of real penis" -> "sketch of A real penis
03.3) "you have to take off like me" -> "you too, take off your clothes". Only planes take off by themselves.
03.4) "you got the horn" -> "you got a boner"
04.5) "Yuna's pussy look like" -> "Yuna's pussy lookS like"
05.6) "does real cum tasteS like this?" -> "Does real cum taste like this?"
05.6) "but I doubt" -> "but I don't think so"
06.2) "mouse" -> "mouth"
07.5) "it has weird, pungent smells" -> "it has a weird, pungent smell"
15.2) "my pussy is so dampened" -> "my pussy is so wet"

This is a non-exhaustive list, there are multiple other instances of odd-sounding phrases that I skipped.

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Adding to the poor grammar list

02.3) "you can get idea without experience it" ->"You can get an idea without experiencing it"

Base +6, isno +6, BlueThree +8, UWin +11, Saint_Cyril +6, gdwfhgsshyrn +7

Always nice to see a Gotoh Juan work translated :)

Thanks for this.

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Mouse and pussy, women are quite the zoo

Base +6, isno +6, Black Jak +6, -Shun- +23, UWin +11, noname31 +6

This is for you Aang!

Base +6, isno +6

What's with the translation on this? Was english the translator's 2nd or 3rd language or something?

Base +7, isno +6, anonymus774 +7, UWin +11, Saint_Cyril +6, RefinedFapper +6

tfw a gotoh juan work is translated, but the translation is less than stellar. Bittersweet.

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I'm laughing about the "mouse" typo because there's a comedian who has a bit about making fun of the local Asian food clerk who tells him to "shut his mouse" on top of other various racial things. So now I can't get a boner because I'm laughing too hard.

Base +7, UWin +11, somercet +7, Saint_Cyril +6, noname31 +6

There is going to be second douj about them? Still waiting for the "mouse" part.

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I could point out the inconsistencies with the English, but someone made an extensive list already. Someone's more invested in Juan Gotoh's translation than I am. XD

Base +7, Lunarry +6

Yeah, it's a pretty shaky translation, and the list of errors that JukanX has pointed out is good — but I'm almost willing to give "mouse" the benefit of the doubt as a slurring from having her tongue out. Try saying "mouth" with your tongue on a dick, you'll mess it up too.

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>"It's so goood..."

>"Awoo"

Kek

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