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[Lemon Font] Sensitive Subject [Ongoing]

Western
Posted:2018-06-25 21:03
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:11.47 MiB
Length:12 pages
Favorited:601 times
Rating:
191
Average: 4.12

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Posted on 26 June 2018, 01:44 by:   M0M0E    PM
Score +6
This amuses me greatly
Posted on 26 June 2018, 02:14 by:   Kamo1    PM
Score +31
Ongoing? Really want to see what's next, it is interesting. Lemonfont loves his transformations
Posted on 26 June 2018, 03:38 by:   dsadsadsadsa    PM
Score +54
Looks like a split personality situation or something
Posted on 26 June 2018, 13:23 by:   tytran    PM
Score -16
Looks like the character was originally a male, whom sister by some voodoo shit possessed and changed his body. This feel like the beginning or prologue is missing.
Posted on 27 June 2018, 01:29 by:   Darth Mario    PM
Score +9
almost looks like Faye's older sister as she was learning about her abilities? want to see more!
Posted on 29 June 2018, 10:39 by:   hentailover6983    PM
Score +81
This story intrigues me for several reasons.

Starting with the art, the story progresses in still images rather than created in a clear manga/comic style. This presents the main character and their biological changes as the main focus, although it doesn't allow all of the same storytelling/action elements that are found in traditional manga/comic styles. However, I believe the journal-entry narration works and the still images are like the illustrations that sum up each journal entry. The nice quality of the art is also a thumbs up.

The real meat of the story though is the concept. Body modification on a character is nothing new. Neither is gender bending, and there have been stories, if fewer than most other genres, that feature two people/souls sharing one body. These concepts are also brought together in stories in some form or fashion, but I can't remember any that have all three together to make up the story and these aspects being the driving force of the storytelling.

I really like this element, as there is internal and external struggle in the main character. We know from implication and narration that the main character was once a male and is a brother to the antagonist, his sister. However, it seems that both share the same body, meaning the sister somehow possessed her brother, which makes the question of how, when, and why this happened. There is also the stakes of what would happen should the sister fully take over or if someone sees the main character in their naked changed form.

The use of hormones to make sense of the biological changes is a nice touch, as it brings a sense of creative realism. I'm rather curious to see what happens next.
Posted on 24 August 2018, 23:50 by:   D u b b y    PM
Score -20
Correction for page 9:
It's not testosterone and estrogen (estradial) it's estrogen and androgen. Testosterone is also the libido hormone.
Posted on 08 February 2020, 13:52 by:   RigenZ    PM
Score +11
Honestly...This needs a sequel.

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