The next artist I've set my sights on is Kenpi! Problem with tentacles in your neighborhood? No problem! Reimu can take care of it! Probably...Maybe...
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Here's kenpi's artist page:
https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=228225

My blog where you can contact me for commissions:
http://robypoo.blogspot.com/

Damn, pretending to be Marisa to ensnare Reimu? What a tricky tentacle monster.

Great doujin. Pretty much everything you could want from a tentacle fuck. Lots of different types of tentacles, great oral, anal, vaginal scenes... The pseudo-pregnancy and eggs scene was surprisingly hot as fuck, and generally I tend to not enjoy those parts as much, so really good stuff because I enjoyed the hell out of it. Unfortunate moire patterns on the scan, but other than that, it was pretty much perfect. Thanks a bunch for the TL robypoo.

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@aleden Thanks for the comment. Kenpi is a pretty special artist, he somehow makes things generally unappealing appealing.

Edit 1: @ Zakuzelo Thanks for commenting, compared to last time I prioritized making every sentence sound natural to a native English speaker over relaying the meaning of literally everything from the original text. About the SFX, I actually spent a longer time than I probably should have wondering whether or not I should translate them at all. In the end I decided I would because the SFX combined with the smaller text makes up a good 50% of this work. It seemed like Kenpi was more focused on that than the actual text lol.

Last edited on 27 June 2018, 21:30.

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Better. Still some issues, but nothing like the last. Improvement is good, so don't stop doing that. Gonna need that shaping up if you choose to tackle Kenpi's longer series.
I'm not sold on these SFX translations. I find them really distracting. That's entirely subjective, though.

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I liked it, though I agree the translation of the SFX was pretty distracting, didn't really feel like it added a lot and made it a little confusing trying to read the inner thoughts text next to it. I can usually infer what the SFX is conveying anyway, though that's just me.

Keep up the good work.

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