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[Hanamaki Kaeru] Kaisoku Man Kan Zenseki | In the express train - full course gang & bang (COMIC TENMA 2005-11) [English] [Sling]

[花巻かえる] 快速♡満姦全席 (COMIC 天魔 2005年11月号) [英訳]

Free Hentai Manga Gallery: [Hanamaki Kaeru] Kaisoku Man Kan Zenseki | In the express train - full course gang & bang (COMIC TENMA 2005-11) [English] [Sling]
Posted:2007-11-28 12:39
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Language:English  TR
File Size:3.11 MB
Length:19 pages
Favorited:447 times
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Average: 4.68

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Posted on 26 September 2010, 06:26 UTC by:   Tiniuc    PM
Score +210
Whadya bet the train car was "Women Only" yet somehow he snuck on.
Posted on 01 December 2012, 16:14 UTC by:   stark86    PM
Score +98
This, believe it or not, was the first hentai comic I EVER saw...*tears up* Ahhhh, the memories...automatic 5 stars!
Posted on 24 March 2013, 08:39 UTC by:   Ninex    PM
Score +136
Happy ending with no twist. Heart warming.
Posted on 05 April 2013, 05:02 UTC by:   TheChoy    PM
Score +228
These girls must be saints looking for lonely virgins that have trouble with their sexual life. Damn they are good girls.
Posted on 06 October 2013, 03:02 UTC by:   KamikazeShooter    PM
Score +94
This is much better than having a group of men gang bang a single person!!! This is much more cuter and unique without the whole mindbreak thing
Posted on 28 October 2013, 19:38 UTC by:   scrappy135    PM
Score +23
This is one of the few straight titles from Hanamaki Kaeru, while the rest of them are traps. Makes me wonder if something...happened--to change their preference.
Posted on 29 June 2014, 17:45 UTC by:   gend    PM
Score +6
KamikazeShooter, sexist :D
Posted on 22 January 2015, 10:41 UTC by:   PureEnergy    PM
Score +110
Some corrections to spelling, punctuation and simply 'awkward' sentences.

pg 3, upper right: Awkward: 'Mister, you know what's masturbation, right?' How about: 'Mister, you know what masturbation is, right?'
pg 3, upper left: Incorrect Expression: The character for emotion?..motion? is translated as '(aback!), but it should be: (taken aback!)
pg 4, top center: Awkward: 'I was not sure, so I kept quiet.' More natural would be: 'I wasn't sure, so I kept quiet.'
pg 8, bottom right: Awkward: 'Yeah, this semen is too tasty!' How about (slang):'Yeah, this semen is so tasty!' or: 'Yeah, this semen is tasty!'
pg 8, bottom center: Awkward: 'Such thickness is not seen in an experienced lover!' How about: 'Thickness like this isn't seen in an experienced lover!' or shorter: 'Such thickness isn't seen in an experienced lover!'
pg 9, bottom right: Awkward: 'Hey, I only said to touch...but you're already sucking them!' How about: 'Hey, I said touch only...but you're sucking them!' or: 'Hey, I said touch only...you're sucking them!'
pg 10, bottom left: Tense and Punctuation 'Isn't this getting out of control? If this continue they are going to end having sex.' Should be: 'If this continues, they are going to end up having sex.' or: 'If this continues, they're going to end up having sex.'
pg 11, upper left: Awkward: 'Getting all excited on sniffing girl's armpits...' Could be: 'Getting all excited by sniffing girl's armpits...' or: 'Getting all excited sniffing girl's armpits...'
pg 13, middle right: Awkward: 'Eh? It didn't go in, but you already went off?' Why not: 'It didn't go in but you came anyway?'
pg 14, top left: Redundancy?: 'Haha! Mister, you're making cute sounds with your voice...' It may not be redundant, but 'with your voice' sounds redundant, how about: 'Mister, those are cute [sounds] [noises] you're making.'
pg 15, middle right: Awkward: 'Ah...since I gave you that kiss...your cock...has grown that big.' How about: '...has grown [big again] [bigger] [so big].'
pg 15, bottom left: Redundancy: 'H-Hey...Mister...won't you try thrusting from under?' He's beneath her, so 'under' is redundant...how about: 'could you start thrusting?'
pg 16, top left:Awkward/Slang?: 'Such a nice feeling...It's a total waste to not use it!!' 'It's a total waste' could be modern schoolgirl slang...if so, then the ending would likely be: 'not to use it!'
pg 16, top right :Bad grammar and awful statement: 'It fills in and scrape nicely inside...' - it should be 'scrapes' to match 'fills'
and only a masochist would say something 'scrapes nicely'. Better would be: 'It fills and rubs me nicely inside..' even though 'inside' is redundant.
pg 16 middle right: Awkward?: 'Ahem...I'm about to ejaculate soon.' I know the Japanese are polite but this is... silly, given the guy's condition. Better (still in 'polite mode') is: 'Ahh... I'm about to ejaculate!'
pg 16, bottom left: What?: 'What impertinence! Hurry and cum inside!!' Is this one a...pun or mis-translation!? Is that what a girl would say to an complete stranger about to fill her with sperm...?!
pg 17, middle: Bad spelling: 'Cum with all your strenght!!' Should be: 'strength' 'Cum with all your strength!!' is awkward, but given the situation, acceptable.
pg 18, middle: Literal Translation?/Very Bad Pun?: 'We are going now because we've arrived!' I didn't see any indication that the girl meant this as a pun, so I have to assume it's a literal translation. With all due respect to the translator this is the sort of hilariously funny thing that only a child or drunk would say - not an intelligent schoolgirl.
Given that some of the girls are leaving the train, and one girl is waving 'Bye-Bye', a more appropriate statement would be: 'This is our stop!'
pg 19, middle: Awkward: 'Come on, straighten up! You are no more a virgin now!' Better would be:'[Get] [Pull] yourself together...you're not a virgin anymore!'
pg 19, bottom: Awkward/Bad Pun?: 'Come in this train at the same time tomorrow, 'kay?' Given that the poor fellow has already 'come in the train' more than once, a better line would be: 'Be on this train at the same time tomorrow, 'kay?'
Posted on 20 October 2015, 02:37 UTC by:   Biodeamon    PM
Score +12
what a twist on the old classic hunh?
Posted on 27 November 2015, 20:57 UTC by:   smoothoperator    PM
Score +9
In the express train - full course sti & std

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