Front Page
Watched
Popular
Torrents
Favorites
My Home
My Uploads
Toplists
Bounties
News
Forums
Wiki
HentaiVerse

[PunishedKom] Monster Harem Feverish Absolute Passion! Ch. 1 [Ongoing]

Western
Posted:2018-07-17 20:45
Parent:1256269
Visible:No (Replaced)
Language:English  
File Size:37.31 MiB
Length:25 pages
Favorited:963 times
Rating:
271
Average: 4.30
This gallery has been replaced; tags can no longer be added on this version.

There are newer versions of this gallery available:

[PunishedKom] Monster Harem Feverish Absolute Passion! Ch. 1-2 [Ongoing], added 2018-08-09 12:34
[PunishedKom] Monster Harem Feverish Absolute Passion! Ch. 1-2 [Ongoing], added 2018-08-11 16:34
[PunishedKom] Monster Harem Feverish Absolute Passion! Ch. 1-2 [Ongoing], added 2018-08-23 00:28
[PunishedKom] Monster Harem Feverish Absolute Passion! Ch. 1-2 [Ongoing], added 2018-08-23 21:17
[PunishedKom] Monster Harem Feverish Absolute Passion! Ch. 1-2 [Ongoing], added 2018-08-24 18:21
[PunishedKom] Monster Harem Feverish Absolute Passion! Ch. 1-2 [Ongoing], added 2018-08-25 17:22
[PunishedKom] Monster Harem Feverish Absolute Passion! Ch. 1-2 [Ongoing], added 2018-08-25 21:04
[PunishedKom] Monster Harem Feverish Absolute Passion! Ch. 1-2 [Ongoing], added 2018-09-05 01:09
[PunishedKom] Monster Harem Feverish Absolute Passion! Ch. 1-2 [Ongoing], added 2018-09-05 18:21
[PunishedKom] Monster Harem Feverish Absolute Passion! Ch. 1-2 [Ongoing], added 2018-09-06 01:21
[PunishedKom] Monster Harem Feverish Absolute Passion! Ch. 1-2 [Ongoing], added 2018-09-06 16:39
[PunishedKom] Monster Harem Feverish Absolute Passion! Ch. 1-2 [Ongoing], added 2018-09-07 02:28
[PunishedKom] Monster Harem Feverish Absolute Passion! Ch. 1-2 [Ongoing], added 2018-09-07 16:14
[PunishedKom] Monster Harem Feverish Absolute Passion! Ch. 1-2 [Ongoing], added 2018-09-10 02:18
[PunishedKom] Monster Harem Feverish Absolute Passion! Ch. 1-2 [Ongoing], added 2018-10-12 22:00
[PunishedKom] Monster Harem Feverish Absolute Passion! Ch. 1-2 [Ongoing], added 2018-10-13 12:57
[PunishedKom] Monster Harem Feverish Absolute Passion! Ch. 1-2 [Ongoing], added 2018-10-24 18:53
[PunishedKom] Monster Harem Feverish Absolute Passion! Ch. 1-2 [Ongoing], added 2018-11-17 16:59
[PunishedKom] Monster Harem Feverish Absolute Passion! Ch. 1-2 [Ongoing], added 2018-12-06 15:08
[PunishedKom] Monster Harem Feverish Absolute Passion! Ch. 1-2 [Ongoing], added 2019-01-10 15:48
[PunishedKom] Monster Harem Feverish Absolute Passion! Ch. 1-2 [Ongoing], added 2019-01-14 16:00
[PunishedKom] Monster Harem Feverish Absolute Passion! Ch. 1-2 [Ongoing], added 2019-01-20 16:13
[PunishedKom] Monster Harem Feverish Absolute Passion! Ch. 1-2 [Ongoing], added 2019-02-11 18:47

Showing 1 - 25 of 25 images

<1>
01
02
03
04
05
06
07
08
09
10
11
12
13
14
15
16
17
18
19
20
21
22
23
24
25
<1>
Posted on 10 June 2018, 18:41 by:   makutamon    PM
Score +4
... just when you think you’ve seen it all.
Posted on 11 June 2018, 07:34 by:   hoigoigoi    PM
Score +11
Don't fly away birdie. Grow tentacles and plug those mouth pussies.
Posted on 16 June 2018, 22:12 by:   fag1234    PM
Score +6
Colour me intrigued and welcoming of tentacles.
Posted on 18 June 2018, 21:31 by:   zenith45    PM
Score +1
Dicks ruin everything: the comic.
Posted on 19 June 2018, 00:57 by:   igmas    PM
Score +6
I can't help but read the uppercase man as 112.

This made the first two pages incredibly confusing.
Posted on 20 June 2018, 22:18 by:   Siteviewer    PM
Score +23
oh please dont let this be one of those "hey guys there is toots gonna be teh fcking and teh sexy times......... for realsies!" then its like 3 years and 15 chapters later and its just been nudity, and jokes about how they almost do it but then something "WWWWWAAAAAAACCCCCCKKKKKKKKYYYYYYY!!!!!" happens so theres never any actual rub-rub-pokey-poke ever through out the history of the story accept maybe some implied off panel happy times. I....I just can't be hurt like that again :(
Posted on 20 June 2018, 23:01 by:   PunishedKom    PM
Score +143
I'm the author! Don't worry, there's gonna be TONSSSS of sex scenes. MHFAP is about a single guy building up a magical harem, having constant sex with all the monster girls in his way and collecting fun magical sex artifacts.

None of that will they won't they shit.

Also I agree about the font issue with the first 2 pages. I'll try to redo them when I have the time.

Not sure what the policy is on promotion here, but here's some places if you want to support MHFAP and follow me. I'll also be setting up a site for MHFAP soon!

https://www.patreon.com/mhfap

http://www.furaffinity.net/user/punishedkom/
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/user/PunishedKom/profile
Posted on 21 June 2018, 03:30 by:   BeReasonable    PM
Score +6
@PunishedKom
This is a interesting comic series. A world only populated by sexy monster girls and one human male that will turn the entire the monster girl's world on it's head. I hope that the magical artifacts of the monster girl's world are really just ordinary objects from our world like a T.V., a old computer, a gaming system, hentai comics, etc treated as ancient magical artifacts. And I wonder will the hero will try to mold monster girl's society to something similar to his world? Like him building his home and decorating it with the magical artifacts to make it feel like his old home and like him teaching the monster girls stuff from his world like how prostitution is use to buy for things even though the monster girls don't have concept of money but they do like the idea of using sex to trade for things of value then soon all monster girls have started using it and adapted the concept of using sex as currency and making it as their main monetary. And will there a nerdy monster girl that loves to learn about the culture of human males by studying old artifacts from human world but due to her artifacts being hentai comics and animes most of her information on human males culture are misinterpreted wrong like thinking that most human males penis is so big that they use it as a weapon or that human males can grain magical powers through sex. And don't forget to add a link the comic's website when it is done.
Posted on 21 June 2018, 03:52 by:   PunishedKom    PM
Score +74
Thanks for your comments @BeReasonable ! You're sort of right about what the magical artifacts are going to be. They are relics of the old world, but they're... putting it bluntly going to be pretty obviously just be ancient sex toys with magical powers. I don't want to comment on too much of what you're saying though, as I have plans for a lot of them and I don't want to reveal stuff too early. Also, it's not going to get too heavy into the world building as you're expecting. Like there will still be a good amount of it, but not so much delving into his relationship with this current one vs the old one. I want the focus to be on lighthearted, comedic and at times romantic magical sexventures first and foremost. Also, things like economy and such vary differently from Monster to Monster. Some monsters have small societies with currency while others, typically beast girls, just stay out in the wilds.

I will say you've correctly guessed that the relics of hentai manga and such have led to modern day monsters having a... very misinterpreted version of what men used to be like. That one is indeed going to be a plotpoint.

Hey guys! Two things. I fixed the font in the first two pages as was requested. Secondly, and more importantly, I spent two days making the official MHFAP website and now we are fully live! As of the time of me writing this, not all the pages are up yet. But they should be soon. There's going to be tons of bonus content and commentary from me over there, so I definitely reccomend reading MHFAP there directly in the future. But no hard feelings if you don't!

http://mhfap.com/
Last edited on 23 June 2018, 05:24.
Posted on 23 June 2018, 21:19 by:   BeReasonable    PM
Score +1
@PunishedKom
This comic series kinda remind of this manga that is call 12 Beast. I can see the monster girls thinking that man are Gods that have their penis being the source of their magical powers. And I like to do suggest some ideas that you could use for your comics:
1.One of the magical artifacts could be a living sex doll like here that was brought to life by a magic.
2. A monster girl could be a living sex doll.
3. How about a sex robot monster that is powered by sex and she can transform into a form of transportation like sexualized motorcycle like here.
4. A mummy monster girl(not a undead corpse but living hot girl with bandage wraps as her clothes.
5. A ghost monster girl.
5. A pumpkin-head theme monster girl. 6. How about a monster girl that house a pocket dimension within her body which can access through her vagina and butt that is use as hammer space and the human could live within her body.
7. How about a monster girl that is a living fursuit that can be worn and the human can wear her to hide inside her and she have two personality that are completely the opposite of each other and change when is turn inside out the outside being a feline monster girl the other is a canine monster kinda like here.
8. A Anubis monster girl.
9. A demon monster girl that is a nun that get off on getting taken advantage of.
10. A monster girl that is a living sex knight armor with the nipple part of the armor is her eyes.
11. A ditzy green skin space-girl monster girl that looks like she is from a old sci-fi cheesy porn movie that have two antennas on her head and wear a sexy spacesuit and fishbowl-like helmet and she have the alien stereotype laser-gun.
12. A huge minotaur monster girl that is from a minotaur tribe with a society that revolve around cheerleading due to a minotaur from along ago discover a artifact and learn about ancient forgotten civilization of special warriors from along ago that are call cheerleaders that mastered this ancient art that is call cheerleading the monster girl minotaur think that cheerleading is a old ancient fighting-style started learning the arts of cheerleading and adapting it as a fighting-style(that involve moves like a butt bumping and shouting while striking a pose and attacking with cheerleading moves) and soon she started teaching other minotaurs that form a tribe the revolve around the teaching. The minotaurs wears ancient clothing that are from the ancient time that have been pass down from generation to generation which are small girly cheerleaders uniforms that are a little too small to fit on their huge body fitting tight on their body like a small miniskirt that does nothing to hide their small cute girly panties that are forming a camel-toe and rides up on them.
13. A how about huge cave-orc monster girl.
14. A giant mountain monster girl like here https://www.furaffinity.net/view/10311630/.
15. A tanuki monster girl that wear a small leaf on her head and she can turn herself in a stone statue and she can mold her boobs into the shape of anything like moving her boobs down from her chest to crotch making it look like they're balls.
16. One of the magical artifacts could be a old school style RPG hentai video game that pulls the players into the game and the only way to escape is to beat the game.
Well, that all for now. But if you like those ideas and want to see more just ask.
Posted on 23 June 2018, 21:45 by:   PunishedKom    PM
Score +85
@BeReasonable

I appreciate your comments but I don't really use suggestions, MHFAP! is just for me to have fun and I like to come up with things myself. Plus when you're drawing porn people give suggestions all the time and I can't make everyone happy. So instead I just ask that people try and enjoy my ride for what it is.
Posted on 07 July 2018, 00:34 by:   RabidTanker    PM
Score +14
It's not bad, tbh. Can't wait for society to collapse at the sight of him.
Posted on 07 July 2018, 01:27 by:   hoigoigoi    PM
Score +24
I'm jealous. I want to be captured by a random attractive horny woman.
Posted on 07 July 2018, 08:52 by:   Banatine    PM
Score +13
For some reason, I find it amusing that her fingers are dextrous enough to flip through the pages of a manga, but not to diddle herself or give a guy a handjob :)
Posted on 07 July 2018, 20:48 by:   PunishedKom    PM
Score +74
@Banatine

Haha, good observation! When she picks up the book in page 3, I don't show her fingers flipping through it really. She kind of just holds and lets it fall open on its own. Of course, for reading you could either imagine her using her wrists to try and turn the page, or, if you find it more amusing, imagine she changes the page with her tongue hehe. Though honestly she probably just sits down and uses her feet xD
Posted on 09 July 2018, 06:35 by:   babybombs21    PM
Score -3
@BeReasonable, pls make one of the artifacts impregnate the girls with eggs, don't ask I just think its hot
Posted on 10 July 2018, 16:46 by:   Moglos    PM
Score +7
more dragon sex
Posted on 11 July 2018, 22:15 by:   babybombs21    PM
Score +3
wrong address sry @PunishedKom
Posted on 11 July 2018, 23:15 by:   PunishedKom    PM
Score +7
Haha sorry, I'm not into that personally. No hate to you though @babybombs21 !

I can however confirm that there will be dragons @Moglos
Posted on 13 July 2018, 22:53 by:   qinlongfei    PM
Score +6
So I guess this is a inside-out reversal of Monmusou Quest? Good for dudes who aren't masochist, and it actually made me laugh with the humor here and there.
Posted on 14 July 2018, 06:05 by:   PunishedKom    PM
Score +7
@qinlongfei
Very good way to put it! I didn't set out to intentionally invert that specific series, but it's very much from my own desire for there to be less femdom monster girl hentai. I like a good femdom now and again, but I wanted the Hero to the opposite of the usual monster girl protagonist.

If you like the humor you're going to be really happy with the plans I have! Ch. 1 barely included any humor honestly and I am going to be working a lot more of it in starting next chapter.
Posted on 18 July 2018, 00:02 by:   ssj782    PM
Score +6
How is her lust only 3 hearts when the first thing she did was drag him off to rape him?
Posted on 18 July 2018, 05:51 by:   PunishedKom    PM
Score +2
@ssj782

2 things, the stats are for her species as a whole. Tali herself is probably 4. But imagine it this way, if she's a 3 then what the fuck is a 5???
Posted on 18 July 2018, 05:55 by:   JediMage    PM
Score +6
@PunishedKon
Did you read a certain manga about certain dancing club? Because first image in this gallery reminds me of certain manga about certain dancing club...
also
Somehow with 3 monstergirls you missed any i like, lul. Make next monstergirl we see an elf and, after that an angel, and throw in some vampire; and you will collect every disliked by me monstergirl!
and
I hope there will be udders on holstaurs! Just because~
Last edited on 18 July 2018, 06:13.
Posted on 18 July 2018, 06:57 by:   PunishedKom    PM
Score +2
Can confirm no elfs, angels or vampies @JediMage, and I'm not a fan of udders xD

The title page was inspired by this, not the dancing club thing I think you're reffering to. I generally don't use other illustrations for reference ever but this was a small little goofy reward to myself. https://i.imgur.com/hUHEVgl.jpg

Now get the fuck out of here if you don't like harpies smh OUT I SAY I DON'T WANT YOU HERE
Posted on 18 July 2018, 16:49 by:   Rico Masaki    PM
Score +2
I'm so hyped for chapter 2 of this.
Posted on 18 July 2018, 17:09 by:   PunishedKom    PM
Score +2
@Rico Masaki

I'll be working really hard to get it out as soon as possible! If you'd like, I wrote out the roadmap for Ch. 2 and beyond on my site.
http://mhfap.com/comic/mhfap-ch-1-title-page/

But the TL;DR is I don't have a script and I need to design a character who appears. Ch. 1 was just made to get it out there ASAP, and I'll be writing the next couple scripts all at once so we can make sure there's no down time like this in the future! But that means it might take me a tad longer to get Ch. 2 started.
Posted on 19 July 2018, 08:29 by:   JediMage    PM
Score +6
@PunishedKon Anything with wings is either a birdbrain, a pest or a bee, and out of those categories bee is the only one i am okay with )
I like spiders and arachnes though so hoping to see one here :3
Posted on 19 July 2018, 20:40 by:   Minstrelofmoria    PM
Score +12
This is kind of reminding me of Under(her)tail, and honestly, I am 100% okay with that.
Posted on 19 July 2018, 22:18 by:   PunishedKom    PM
Score +2
@JediMage

Of course you like the hardest to draw ones lmao. I have plans for Arachne but not any time soon! I do share your enthusiasm for insect girls though and one will be joining the main harem eventually!

@Minstrelofmoria I have not heard of this thing you're speaking, but color me more than intrigued haha. Will have to look into it!
Posted on 20 July 2018, 10:20 by:   qinlongfei    PM
Score +6
I think Minstrelofmoria meant the first two backstory exposition page with the faded ancient paper look, because I was thinking the exact same thing when I was reading those two pages. The rest of the art style isn't like Under(her)tail (it's a western style doujinshi of Undertail that makes all monster female) at all.
Posted on 20 July 2018, 18:23 by:   PunishedKom    PM
Score +2
Ah ok, thanks for letting me know @qinlongfei . As I've said elsewhere my inspiration for those two pages was the intro to Wind Waker! I haven't read Under(her)tail yet, but maybe when I take my obligatory fap break today I'll check it out lmao.
Posted on 09 August 2018, 22:41 by:   PervyNeko    PM
Score +7
No doubt its based off the game Breeding Season.
Posted on 10 August 2018, 04:07 by:   PunishedKom    PM
Score +8
No it's not, @PervyNeko. Not even a fan of that game! I didn't base this off of any one thing in particular. Not sure where you see any similarities besides 'has monster girls'.
Posted on 28 August 2018, 02:24 by:   babybombs21    PM
Score +3
page 35, what I was thinking the whole time(in a good way)
Posted on 05 September 2018, 23:48 by:   dejalwm    PM
Score +6
Why's the lizard girl an actual furry and not a monstergirl?
Posted on 06 September 2018, 00:06 by:   PunishedKom    PM
Score +10
@dejaclwm Both types exist, but specifically she's a kobold. I'm going by D&D style rules for this so Kobolds are short lizard people. I'm trying to keep the anthro characters to a minimum but I know not everyone will like them, but my audience right now is mostly furries. There will be a few bones I throw to them in MHFAP. There will only be 2 girls who are more anthro in the Hero's harem out of the planned 10 or so, so I'm hoping people will respectfully understand that.

But this is the internet and I know people will just tell me to yiff in hell despite the anthro girls being incredibly small part of the cast lol.

Plus there are furries in pretty much every main monster girl series. Just like me they're in it, but they take an incredibly small part of the roster. MGE has Cait Sith, Kobold and a few others while Mon Musu has Polt. There's just some overlap between furry and monster girl!
Posted on 06 September 2018, 02:30 by:   babybombs21    PM
Score +3
@PunishedKom bork bork bork?
Posted on 06 September 2018, 03:22 by:   PunishedKom    PM
Score +8
@babybombs21 OWO whats this? *notices your bork*
Posted on 06 September 2018, 06:39 by:   Mach565    PM
Score +5
@PunishedKom The MGE series only has 2 furries, the Cait Sith and Cu Sith, and their Kobold is a dog girl (The reason for which is a mistranslation back when D&D was first imported to Japan IIRC, same with the orcs being pig people).
Last edited on 07 September 2018, 07:04.
Posted on 06 September 2018, 07:18 by:   PunishedKom    PM
Score +50
Thanks for clarifying @Mach565! I'm aware of the mistranslation thing, it's pretty funny. But regardless, I'm trying to say that although this is primarily a monster girl hentai there will be a few anthros here and there but they will be far from the norm except for the two who join the main cast. I'd like it if people could just skip the parts they don't like and enjoy the overall story but I know some people won't be able to, so whatever, I'll keep making the kind of story and characters I want to tell haha. Monster girls as a whole are an incredibly diverse fetish and not every single monster girl is for each individual.
Posted on 07 September 2018, 01:32 by:   qinlongfei    PM
Score +6
Haha, love the jab at masochist male protagonist in monster-girl genre. I obviously can't speak for most people, but I'm honestly okay if you just do a funny spoof comic featuring a more grounded male character making fun of all the common monster-girl tropes. I think your more exaggerated and cartoon style lands on humor more than fap material.
Posted on 07 September 2018, 02:30 by:   PunishedKom    PM
Score +63
Give me time and my art'll be on point for both, @Qinlongfei ! Plus I can't speak for everyone but I find exaggerated cartoon style really sexy, often more so than realistic art. I don't want it to just be humor, it's got to be the best of both worlds heh. Also he's going to be anything but a grounded male character. It's going to go way past that for comedic reasons.
Posted on 07 September 2018, 04:37 by:   harem_coven_ledr312    PM
Score +6
Let's see...

Furaffinity https://www.furaffinity.net/user/punishedkom/ check
HF https://www.hentai-foundry.com/user/PunishedKom/profile check
Twitter https://twitter.com/PunishedKomics check
Gumroad https://gumroad.com/punishedkom check
Pictaro https://picarto.tv/KOM check
Discord https://discord.gg/3muYQdw check
Patreon https://www.patreon.com/user?u=789955 double check

brb fam gonna make sum popcorn and see how this plays out...
Posted on 10 September 2018, 01:41 by:   qinlongfei    PM
Score +73
It's probably because 18+ monster girl genre tend to either have the male protagonist be a complete doormat like Luka, or a complete asshole like Rance (can't think of anyone iconic enough in the genre itself, but there are demon girls in Rance universe so I guess he counts). Your male protagnoist certainly comes off as the more grounded one by comparison. Regardless this chapter is really entertaining so far.
Posted on 14 September 2018, 03:46 by:   NeoDarklight    PM
Score +13
...The fuck did I just read? I couldn't stop laughing. Or fapping. It's rare that something makes me do both. Keep it up, man! Can't wait for the rest!

P.S. It looks like this is a comic about a crazy man sticking his dick in the crazy monster girls. Methinks that the setting's background is even more fucked up than the prologue leads us to believe. Like, rather than all men being rapists, most monster girls were actually the rapists, and men basically got raped into extinction, and the queen had to break physics to keep the monster girls from becoming extinct due to a lack of men being around, and the men being all killed by the queen was just a lie to make sure that any men that may have survived don't get raped to death by the perpetually horny monster girls. Possibly because the queen wants them all for herself.
Posted on 13 October 2018, 00:42 by:   fatjoe400    PM
Score +27
Very fun comic. Look forward to following the updates for the foreseeable future.
Posted on 13 October 2018, 15:44 by:   WalkerHen    PM
Score +6
Loving it!
Posted on 13 October 2018, 17:54 by:   PunishedKom    PM
Score +72
Thanks for all the comments for the new pages guys! I'm really happy everyone's enjoying my little adventure haha.
Posted on 13 October 2018, 20:00 by:   buddahec    PM
Score +6
I definitely like the art but the dialogue isn't very down to earth.
Posted on 13 October 2018, 21:10 by:   PunishedKom    PM
Score +93
No shit @buddhahec lol. It's really campy and over the top on purpose, it amuses me. I am very much not aiming for down to earth.

If you're looking for romantic and natural dialogue my comic sadly will not provide for you very often. If however you want over-the-top dumb hentai dialogue then you'll enjoy your time a lot better here!
Posted on 17 November 2018, 17:24 by:   william1024    PM
Score +17
Now this sort of balls-to-the-wind campy bullshit is what a harem comic ought to be about. Keep having fun, Kom. :^)

(posted at p. 49) Hope Our Hero gets a chance to recharge his own balls soon.
Posted on 17 November 2018, 22:28 by:   WalkerHen    PM
Score +6
My fave sex hungry duo~!
Posted on 18 November 2018, 04:43 by:   TheHand    PM
Score +6
[Hello World]

Way to put a programing 101 joke in a porn comic.
Posted on 18 November 2018, 06:13 by:   Alucard_Brony    PM
Score +6
I dont know if it's the art, the plot, the writing, the cute (and sexy) girls. But this is one of my favorite things I've ever read. Random question, is there a way to sub to artists/galleries. I'm assuming not but if there is can someone let me know
Posted on 06 December 2018, 18:39 by:   ravidouk    PM
Score +7
Damn, I was hoping for a threesome.
Posted on 07 December 2018, 10:21 by:   PunishedKom    PM
Score +70
@Ravidouk next scene! You're crazy if you think there wouldn't be an obligatory threesome upcoming, haha.
Posted on 10 December 2018, 17:33 by:   NotSwordfish    PM
Score +5
Birds do technically have the bones for the equivalent of fingers. It’s just all but one of them have fused together to make the outer span of the wing’s bracing. There’s a vestigial little thumb-analogue that still exists. It’s not inconceivable Tali would at least have opposable thumbs and potentially one other finger. It would have a distinct evolutionary advantage to be able to grasp things, especially when you consider she’s sentient as are all harpies. Without a beak and the associated long tongue, she’d have very little way of manipulating her environment otherwise.

Also, considering she’s most likely a mammal given her humanoid anatomy, her birdlike features are simply convergent evolution. It would make mor sense if her wings’ structural anatomy was more like that of a bat’s and the feathers are just superficially similar to a bird’s. They could also have gone with the pterosaur route where only the pinky is the base for the wing and all the other fingers are free.

Regardless, having her ‘hands’ at the ends of her wings is anatomically weird as shit. ALL winged vertebrates have wings that use the finger bones as structural components of the wings, with them controlling the tips of the wings. Having them at the ends makes her arms ridiculously long and bulky. More accurate anatomy would’ve been to have normal upper arm length, stretched forearms, large hands, and elongated fingers that are an integral parts of the wings.
Posted on 12 December 2018, 06:14 by:   PunishedKom    PM
Score +73
@NotSwordFish

I am actually aware of a lot of what you just said. In a lot of my earlier sketches for Tali's design I actually tried some of the things you were talking about but decided I like this current design as it allows me to be extremely expressive with her hands. The older designs just didn't look all that good in my style. Although I was very closely going to go with a three fingered pterosaur design at one point!

I appreciate all the actual biology comments and it's fascinating and all but at the end of the day I was more concerned with creating a fun and memorable, expressive design than scientifically accurate lol. My best friend is also a biologist and he helped teach me all about wing structure, so I don't want to sound pompous or anything but I am actually well aware regarding wing structure. I just chose to simplify it drastically.
Posted on 10 January 2019, 17:10 by:   Alucard_Brony    PM
Score +6
I don't know what it is about your comic but it is probably one of, if not, my favorite works of pornography. I am looking forward to more.
Posted on 11 January 2019, 09:27 by:   PunishedKom    PM
Score +73
@Alucard_Brony
thank you so much for that! It seriously means a lot. you're more than welcome to join the Discord if you'd like to be a bigger part of the community, just figured I'd throw it out there. https://discord.gg/3muYQdw
Posted on 21 January 2019, 11:23 by:   hoigoigoi    PM
Score +21
Beat the queen... I bet she's a futa.
Posted on 11 February 2019, 19:04 by:   ravidouk    PM
Score +13
So what happened to the pages containing Bio on the various species types?
Posted on 14 February 2019, 08:03 by:   Alucard_Brony    PM
Score +6
@ravidouk they're in the version I posted almost 2 weeks ago

[Post New Comment]

Front   LoFi   Forums   HentaiVerse   Wiki   Twitter   ToS   Advertise