+2 and a 1/2 stars for 5+ pages +1 star for a logical plot that can be followed clearly. +1/2 star for decent art +/- 1/2 star for lack of color. [opinions of taste may vary] - 1/2 star for ending requiring an in comic end or to be continued note on last page or page dedicated to end if you don't want the art cluttered so you don't have to tell everyone in the posting of the site that the comic is finished.
4 Stars total. d_o.o_b Nice work.
Base +6, BL_TS +3, UnrealFox +7, zaulderk -6, SSSdriver +9