Snice a lot of people pointed out abaout the translation, I made this textless version so the translation can be done again or translate the doujin to other languages.
Firts time doing this, so I hope you like it.

English version:https://e-hentai.org/g/1258308/77a4292e6c/

Idk if intentional or not but you missed "daa..." on page 16 "ah" on page 22, and the two moans on page 23. There's also the cum dumpster text on the last page

Base +6

Thanks for pointing out the mistakes, I didn´t see them at all. If you see some other mistake please let me known.

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