Part of it might be because I find Romi's voice really off-putting (I know she's fairly popular but the only show I liked her in was Kaiba) but what an odd character to pick. That aside though, the art style is nice.
This is the only artist I've ever seen draw fellatio/ejaculation from the inside of the mouth, like the top left panel of pg. 9. I'd love to see more of that.