(C86) [Youkai Tamanokoshi (CHIRO)] Izana no Nagate Ikusei Kyoushitsu | Izana’s Nagate Training Classroom (Knights of Sidonia) [English] [EHCOVE]

Posted on 25 October 2018, 05:24 by: Red of EHCOVE

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update: corrected credits. No, the TL seems fine, I believe the TL that this is a good representation of the original works intent. As I said, if you disagree, provide both kanji and an alt TL in the comment; just bitching that it sounds strange is something that you can bitch about to the original artist (CHIRO) about, not us.

translator: pincluc
proofreading: me
editor: someguywith
raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/738856/1ec720d742/ (share by Ringoch, scanner not credited)

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Posted on 18 October 2018, 08:43 by: Marien

Is EHCOVE doing rewrites now? Because this sure as fuck reads like one. Also, your post says you proofread it but the credit page has someone elses name.

Posted on 18 October 2018, 10:15 by: sameguy

That was a very bizarre translation, almost like a lot of liberties were taken. Not that I can corroborate this though, so regardless thank you for the upload.

Edit: Eat a dick, knightmarepilot.

Last edited on 19 October 2018, 13:32.

Posted on 18 October 2018, 10:37 by: Red of EHCOVE

@Marien: that's because I didn't proofread the credit page, lol. It will get fixed when the editor wakes up (not that I care about being credited myself that much but the TL name needs a fix too, oops, sorry).

If anyone has issues with the translation quality, please post Japanese text and alt translation for review. TL pincluc has done many translations before, quite a few with =LWB=, and I've never seen his work called a rewrite, so I think this is just how this dojin reads in original. The inner monologue style is common for this artist, see https://e-hentai.org/g/965560/d81043ab4f/ for example

Posted on 18 October 2018, 11:24 by: annie69

50 years ago we'd have the translator upside down with a fork in his ass. throw his ass out

Posted on 18 October 2018, 18:25 by: pincluc

@Marien, @sameguy, could you elaborate on what you mean?
Which parts sounded odd?

Posted on 18 October 2018, 18:27 by: eighthgear

Thanks, I really enjoyed this! Izana is great.

Posted on 18 October 2018, 19:27 by: Marien

@pincluc: It starts off fine then all of a sudden it's like a 10 year old took over.

"tickles your knob"
"gobble on your meat for breakfest, lunch and dinner"

Starting with lines like this that sound noticeably unjapanese. Then there's the really childish sounding dialog:

-gunk
-gooey jelly
-poop canal
-poop hole
-goopy paste
-shithole

Seriously, WTF? And then there's the distinguishably vulgar style of an LWB translation:

-dick juice
-meaty cock
-fat beastly cock
-slame your fat meat up my asshole

It's no surprise you used to work with them. All these things are evidence of someone who had way too much fun in the translation process.

Posted on 19 October 2018, 17:12 by: pincluc

I see, I apologize. I'll make sure to have a miserable time translating in future. I forgot that this was a place for intellectuals to gather.

Posted on 19 October 2018, 20:09 by: Marien

@pincluc: Don't be miserable. Just be more professional.

Posted on 22 October 2018, 15:19 by: fapthenclosetab

The fuck is this tranny shit. Males only exists for a reason

Posted on 23 October 2018, 02:15 by: dickburns75

This was amazing, love the dirty talk... poop canal, poop hole and shithole all over a few pages. Thanks so much! Want to see more like this.

Posted on 25 October 2018, 17:06 by: redcoffee325

我们需要更多中午
we need Chinese

Posted on 26 October 2018, 02:15 by: thekiller2413

What's wrong with you people? This is porn not a medical text.

Posted on 26 October 2018, 04:36 by: ultimaflaral

Translator here. I can confirm the shithole/ poop hole stuff is legit, an extremely literal translation of the language here (kuso ana --> shit hole). As for gunk/jelly/goopy paste, these appear to pincluc's well-meaning attempt to reach for a thesaurus, since the Japanese uses "zaamen" (loanword --> semen) over and over and over and over again.

This is not a rewrite. Please don't shit on other people's work out of ignorance, Marien.

Posted on 12 November 2018, 13:58 by: killerv

More like knights of Sodomyie. Amirite?

Posted on 14 November 2018, 17:28 by: Marien

"As for gunk/jelly/goopy paste, these appear to pincluc's well-meaning attempt to reach for a thesaurus, since the Japanese uses "zaamen" (loanword --> semen) over and over and over and over again."

Like I said, that's evidence of someone who had too much 'fun' in the translation process. I know this because I've done it myself in editing and have seen other people (translators) do it through proofreading. Just call it cum FFS. That's not shitting on other's work out of ignorance, that's advice from someone with more experience.

Posted on 28 February 2019, 16:47 by: hk99226

ok，社保

Posted on 18 February 2020, 18:09 by: GeneralSky

Translation is good. Thanks!

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