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i learned from doujins to never trust fat people

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This translation could really use some tweaking, but good job nonetheless.

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@Blackcloud288 Feel free to go into more details about what you mean. Constructive criticism is always welcome!

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@iambobokay
There are some places where contractions seem more appropriate (things like I am becoming I'm)
The biggest thing taking me out of it was some dialogue that seems a little awkward or stilted. Like for an example, on page 5, the line "Yes it is. It seems to be a trend right now..." might sound more natural like "It is! Apparently, it's trendy these days..."

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The sequel cant come soon enough

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@Blackcloud288 I see. The thing with that is that both of them talk very formal during the entire work. Even the "horny" I used on page 13 is already very informal and "vulgar" compared to the original. I can see your point, though, but I think it also comes down to personal preference. Thanks for going into detail, though!

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Awesome, I've been hoping this would get translated.........ah, Mikan, one of my all-time favorite hentai gals, good stuff, good stuff :D

Thanks a lot to all involved, it's a great one :)

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Where can I get me some of that trendy ass incense?

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Its rare to see Mikan in a maid outfit, definitely a valued piece right here...

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I hope we will see sequel with sex

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i am ready for the upcoming sequel of ktok series

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Good Mikan. Don't go back to that stupid brother of yours.

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Guess the sequel isn't coming.

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thought the author was working on the second part at some point, he even shown draft on twitter, did he just drop it? What a shame

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I always come back to this one, the slow brainwash is just perfect, also Mikan's thighs!

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The second part is to be released. Seens it will also contain all the works of the "To Love-ru" he has done so far.

https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/announce/=/product_id/RJ01045993.html

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