Link to original: https://e-hentai.org/g/1174229/fdda83bf44/
This is my second hentai doujin. I ended up having to clean it twice because after I went through it once, I found the much nicer scan done by the Chinese group here: https://e-hentai.org/g/1173283/a10eeea446/ and decided it was worth it to redo everything using that scan. Anyway it's good porn.
I had previously prided myself on using very loose translations that skewed closer to natural English, but some of the dirty talk in the original here was so good I had to keep it literal. You'll see what I mean when you read it. It sure as hell isn't natural English, but some of it had me laughing my ass off so I kept it.

Have fun.

AL Shoukaku is a miracle

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ANOTHER AYA SHACHOU TRANSLATED?!
I thought Christmas is still a month away?

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seems like the pubic hair stuck on the girls face is becoming a new thing in a lot of quality art. I think there should be a new tag for it for those of us who enjoy it.

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Godly ass, tits, and pubic hair! Many thanks for the splendid translation.

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Rest is for the weak if you have a sexy ship-girl like Shoukaku taking "care" of you...

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Is there a special reason why up to page 9 all pages are in 1280 downscaled resolution and the cover even in lower one? In the chinese version you linked as your raws they were all in 3000px vertikal

@Epistaxis Bloodnose
Thanks for the explanation.

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@Ancient-Alien
The first nine pages I worked with some grabs I got from another source while a torrent was downloading very slowly. I didn't notice the resolution difference. That's my bad. The cover also came from another source (some doujin marketplace, I forgot) since the Chinese put their credits on the cover in that gallery. Just problems of working with another scanlation as your "raws".

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good aaaaaaaaa

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The Chinese translation just used a denoise filter and a leveling filter to modify the images. In my opinion I would even say that they have lost some details in the process. Its easy to do so you can learn and do it even better in 5 mins.
Just something to keep in mind for your next work.

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God bless this artist.

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Bless this artist, I noticed Sakura Empire ships to well in pairs so I was hoping one with Zuikaku.

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What a fuckin' tease. I love that, uh, ship!! Amazing artist. Really captures womanly wiles well!

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