I love Kiliu works, because they're just random acts of sex on clueless women that barely say no. Yes, he might not be the best storyteller, and they might make no sense, but that's what makes them fun. This is NTR in a mild way, because it's not so much in-your-face, but nevertheless, NTR-haters will cry. I'm working on part 2 after this, so... uh... dibs.

This artist has a nice style, of round figures - round head, nice round ass cheeks, nice roung boobs, even round shoulder blades (p. 17). I like this, good upload, thanks for sharing.

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nice another kiliu tled! ty very much!

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Thanks philoer, can't wait for chapter two!

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Eh, you only have to do what someone tells you to if they're paying you.

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Holy shit I was just reading the raw yesterday thinking "Wow this is pretty hot, too bad it won't ever see a translation" and here we are. Thank you guys!

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Here's some mistakes I noticed, if you're willing to correct them. Looking forward to the sequel.

Page 1
>We're the Arai's.
Just go with Arais? Arai's is possessive.

Page 3, Page 6, Page 19
>Breakfeast
It's breakfast.

Page 7
>If mom were stil around
'stil' should be 'still'

Page 11
>So in her place I will work in her place
Omit the first 'in her place' there

Page 13
>It must be because I tire myself out
Change to "It must be because I've tired myself out"

Page 14
>By not wearing any underwear you keep you body nice a beautiful
Should be "you keep your body nice and beautiful"
>Have you becomed accustomed
Change "becomed" to "become"

Page 15
>I might be used to take care of things as if I was your wife
Change 'take' to 'taking' and 'was' to 'were'

Page 16
>I tought you quit smoking
'tought' to 'thought'

Page 20
>Everyday
Should be 'every day'. Everyday is only used as an adjective.

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He is just pointing out typo. Why so serious?

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@philoer

Yeah, how dare he try to help. I know you do this for free and you don't have to do it perfect (I think that too, actually), but that's not an excuse to insult a guy who was just trying to advise you. Geez, you even deleted the entire gallery.

P.S. You did the same thing in another of your galleries because you received harsh comments, but, in this case, you overreacted to a polite comment.

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@philoer I noticed that you updated the gallery but there's only a single page in here. This kind of behavior can get you reported and possibly get banned (idk, ask the mods if this is bannable). Brodon was only correcting your grammar and spelling mistakes. Calm your tits.

To other people, you can still access the gallery before it was updated. Beside the cover preview image, there's a number 1326711 next to the word "Parent". Click that link. Looks like the gallery is back, and so does the T H I C C

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People throwing stupid tantrums on the internet: Even better than porn.

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Can't see shit, captain.

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EternalBankay: Where were Brodon being "condescending and pretentious"? He hasn't edited his comment, and I can't see where he was pissing on the OP. I've seen worse comments on my translations.

Also, this wasn't OP's first attempt at a (English) translation, but by the looks of it, the only one that actually got commented with editing suggestions. I get them all the time, and I'm thankful for them, since my translations can be quite horrible.

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I see people complaining about him saying that hes only doing this as a hobby and how he doesn't care about trying to trying to fix all the little issues but I don't get how nobody brings up when he says that artists don't need your money and only need you to share their work.

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That feeling when I legit commisioned this to be translated last week, then it's uploaded here by someone else. Not gonna lie, it sucks feeling like I kinda wasted my money on getting a commision since it was put here by someone who translated it for free.... I didn't think coincidences where this specific but it seems so.... Guess it will just make me think twice before getting anything commisioned.. I've a question for the guy who translated this and uploaded it, do you plan on translating the second part? Or any other of kiliu's works? I don't want to get one commisioned then you upload the same one that you translated for free. xD

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The uploader actually complained about translation improvements?

@philoer You're misunderstanding the situation. This has nothing to do with putting you down. That people bother replying and that the gallery has 100's of favs is testament that it works. On e-hentai though, people point out if something could be better. Correcting the mistakes would take 15-30 mins and then you've provided the site with a better gallery for it.

Noone is perfect and noone is saying someone who's bothered to learn 2 languages as different as Japanese and English has to be flawless in both. If you're Japanese I'm sure you know what I'm talking about. Many of Japanese only speak rudimentary English with an accent so thick you can cut through it.

As others have mentioned there are examples of people being disrespectful, cursing at the translator in the comments, this is not very helpful, but also not what happened here.

@Infamous333 Why don't you ask the translator if he can translate something else if he isn't done? Giving money back probably won't happen, but asking them to work on something else for the fee you've given might be possible.

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@AtotehZ this was the first time I got something commisioned and they have just finished it today. That's how I found out someone else translated this also as I was looking up something to get translated afterwards then found this... I don't know If I have the right to ask even for a discount on a follow up translation commision, since like I said this is my first time doing anything of this. It's just a little disheartening. Do you think I would be over-stepping my boundries when asking for a discount on a follow up one since this was translated by someone else, or because it was already translated I got what I paid for... :/

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@infamous333 Too bad about your commissioned work, I wish there was a way to tell who's doing what, I just did it because I like Kiliu, if you're gonna get the second part commissioned then go for it, as you can see, my work is not professional. I just sit on my computer around midnight on a weekend, fire up photoshop and do the translation directly, so I forget to spell check or do any QA on it, since, it's just fap material.

And if anybody was wondering, my native language is spanish, I learned english, and now I'm learning japanese. A good way to practice it is to translate things on the fly. And yes it hurts to post something to share for free, and then have someone with 0 uploads tell me what to do.

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@Infamous333 Don't count on any discounts. Translators don't make a killing as it is.

@philoer That you're Spanish just makes it more impressive to know those 2. All 3 of your languages belong to different language groups. I know 4 languages, but they're all Germanic and 2 of them very similar, which makes it simpler. Been thinking about learning a roman language. Think it'll be Spanish since it makes it easier to travel in Southern America.

Also people aren't telling you what to do, they're pointing out the mistakes so they're easier to fix for you. It's all meant as a helping hand to you.

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@Infamous333 you can still upload the translation that you've already commissioned. It doesn't break any rule in here. There are lots of gallery that have multiple English translations done by different people or groups, and none of them are expunged.

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Now that I understand what's going on, I don't even know what to think about this.

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@philoer I'm going to pass on getting the second part commisioned, so you can work on that if you want. I just commisioned https://e-hentai.org/g/1326285/19749d19b5/ so just posting here so someone else doesn't either get it commisioned or translate it. xD

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It’s both funny and sad everyone in the comments is walking on eggshells because uploader-kun acts like a bratty 6 year old if you dare prod his safespace. As The Who said: my generation.

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@philoer, please, senpai, translate all of Kiliuu works! I love this mad mangaka too) And then i can translate you translations to russian language) arigatou gozaimasu, senpai!

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@Rido911 the most recent posted work by Kiliu ( https://e-hentai.org/g/1326285/19749d19b5/ ) is currently in the process of being translated since I commisioned it a week or so ago, so you've that to look forward too. I can't speak for the rest of Kiliu's work but I agree with you his work is brilliant!

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@Infamous333, thanks! Same feel, bro. Check your PM on forums.

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"Rapes me". You wish, thot.

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