Just gonna leave a few notes here...

1) My boy WK obviously has some issues with race. At least this one isn't about how American slums are filled with roving packs of dark skinned rape gangs. It's definitely problematic, but I think we can just acknowledge that and move on.

2) He really dropped the ball on the next to last page (to be fair, he dropped it when he opted not to have an anal scene, but whatevs, you can't always get what you want). That choice really should've been "fleshlight or I kill YOU", not "fleshlight or I kill HER". It would fit so perfectly with his claim at the beginning that he'd risk his life to protect her! At least make it "kill you BOTH" so he can still think about how she'd rather be dead! Ugh... you have no idea how many times I checked and rechecked my translation of that page, hoping I was being an idiot and misreading it...

3) I have taken the occasional minor liberty with this translation. Nothing at all plot or character altering (if I was going to do that, you can be damn sure I would've fixed that next to last page), just taking a couple of Aina's generic "no"s and "stop"s and punching them up a little. WK's dialogue is better than many hentai artists, but it's still dry as fuck a lot of the time, especially his women. If you're a purist that really wants the version where Aina spends literally a good twenty of her dialogue bubbles shouting "stop!", "no!" and/or "ow!" JWPce and Paint.net are free downloads, have fun.

I fully agree on your second point. I was confused too when I read it in japanese. Really feels like that's what it should've said there.

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Fleshlight? wtf is that? I never heard of that word... I just went to check japanese text and it was onahole so translation shouldn't be something else?

I also went to check that word and actually exist in wikipedia... well a new word i learn but people tend to translate onahole for other words, that one was the first time ever i seen it xD

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@subz3ro Fleshlight and onaho are the same thing. I originally translated it to 'fucktoy', because I feel like hentai often overuses the term 'onaho' (not as much as they overuse 'toilet' though, geez), but I ultimately decided that in this case the original word really was the best fit. 'Fucktoy' implies something that he's going to pay attention to, interact with on some level, even if it's just in ways that make her miserable. 'Fleshlight' has a better sense of treating her like an inanimate object. In my head canon, he doesn't care in the slightest about her well being, not even in a sadistic sense. She's nothing more or less than something he can stick his dick into without having to go anywhere.

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page 4-5
Imagine being this level OPness, beating a guy while wanking your junk after spouting anime's villain line

RAW:https://e-hentai.org/g/1344858/406da57c80/

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When I saw the thumbnail, the hair+guy combo makes it look like she's getting fucked by a mind flayer.

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A good translation Torwyn, and absolutely agree with your 3 points in your OP, mixing up some of the exact verbage to avoid endlessly repeating the same phrasing helps a ton. You've shown far more restraint than I would have with that issue in Point 2. Just because it's porn is no reason not to add depth and poetry.

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Thanks for the translation. Another good netorare to the collection.

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Blaaa this is just NOT for me but whatever no judge

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Damn, Japan's police must be really incompetent if they couldn't catch a brick wall of a man running around in a red thong furiously masturbating as he chases down girls.

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@Torwyn: I just never seen that word before so that's why i questioned. I went to check the japanese text to verify and also check the meaning of that word in english out of curiosity since i never seen it. If you doubt what to translate onahole then leaving untranslated would be fine too since people are used to seeing that, i think... i know the pain of translating where some words can have so many things >_<
I am not saying to you change that word, you know... it is just english it isn't my native language so of course i wont know all kinky words there is until see them xD

Anyway, thank you for the fast translation and keep the good work and happy new year ^^

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I came in here believing he was eating her head zoidberg style. I haven't been this disappointed since that not-centaur girl.

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@subz3ro Sorry if anything I said came off as aggressive, mate, wasn’t my intention. Just trying to explain the reasoning behind my word choice. I spend way more time than necessary thinking about that sort of thing. ;)

@Noreally I had to stop thinking about all the plot holes, because there’s just too many. There’s the magic punch that effectively paralyzes the boyfriend so that he can’t just run for help. There’s the fact that they’re in what seems to be a normal residential area that’s somehow so completely deserted that the villain feels no fear raping someone the street. And of course, how offscreen he somehow picks Aina up and carries a beaten up and naked girl all the way back to his home without anyone noticing.

Meh, whatever, it’s porn. At least it’s not as bad as “I hate how this girl’s personality changed after I hypnotized her, so I have no choice but to throw her away, but not before CHANGING HER PERSONALITY AGAIN BECAUSE THE HYPNOTISM LETS ME DO THAT.”

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I thought this was going to be Mind Flayer porn... I was thoroughly disappointed.

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@Xarkana Thanks! I write smutty stories as a hobby, so I care much more about dialogue than the average hentai artist seems to. It may not be as flashy as the art itself, but good dialogue can easily elevate a story, just as bad dialogue can easily ruin one.

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@subz3ro
Please tell me you're trolling

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Could you translate any of WK other works? honestly i thought this like the others would never be translated so you are like a shinning ray of light in the darkness xD

Edit: https://e-hentai.org/g/880846/28cb655887/ and https://e-hentai.org/g/749240/f783c597bd/ there are others but well they are as long or longer than what you mentioned, at least these 2 are short (compared to 200 pages xD)

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@Adrian_V I might or might not do some of them. The biggest issue is length. I liked his wrestling story from last year, for example, but it’s nearly 200 pages, which means probably over 20 hours of work. This one being so short was the biggest reason I went ahead and translated it.

Are there any in particular that you’d like to see translated?

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@Haborym: About me not knowing what fleshlight meant? Sincerely, i never heard it... it is not a word you learn at school either anyway. And not being from a country that talk english even less.
It is fine, we are always learning new stuff every day :p

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@subz3ro

Fleshlight is the name of a brand of onahole, it isn't a word itself but works in context.

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this cg isnt really my thing but damn the comment section is getting my hog all riled up

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@torwyn any will do :)

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It's fun but veeeeeery generic and simple.

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This seems more of strait rape than NTR, the girls not being unfaithful she's forced into a situation she doesn't want to be in. I mean I know the guy gets the girl stolen but the girl never wants to be with the rapist and at the end she isn't with him of her own volition, but rather she's been kidnapped and is being tortured daily.

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I hate to ask this, but... the guy was hard and exposed before he hit the boyfriend.
So... what EXACTLY did he hit the boyfriend up with? I'm guessing not his hands.

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@Torwyn WK is one my favorite artists, and I've always lamented the lack of translations. If you're actually asking for candidates I'd vote for the below link. I know it's long and all but it's been a favorite of mine since it came out.

https://e-hentai.org/g/919818/841cfacd06/

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@Drworm301 I think right now I’m actually leaning towards doing his other superhero story, the sisters one. It’s only about 80 pages, it’s got a couple very nice scenes (though the first half is way better than the second), and it’s got opaque text bubbles that are easy to edit. Plus, I get to write the narration boxes like it’s a comic book! ;)

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@Torwyn That's totally understandable, and I'm already beyond thrilled that more might be coming. I'd just kick myself if I didn't throw that one out there.

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I see
What happens to Japanese girls in India

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The cuck deserved it

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Essa puta teve o que merecia haha

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Fuck that was great I love this story

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fucking *****

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and now you know what happened to Balrog when shadaloo fell.

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This reflect low moral justice of the artist, I can't imagine how a normal mind human enjoy this kind of story

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Now that is a fucking monster. Poor kids.

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Tbh i dont know what i was expecting clicking on this but man, how does one even get enjoyment out of this, this is just genuinely sad 😭

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