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[Kipteitei] No Lunch Break !

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Posted:2019-01-13 18:32
Parent:1344793
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Language:English  
File Size:35.76 MiB
Length:191 pages
Favorited:1282 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.40
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Posted on 23 August 2017, 00:49 by:   NotSwordfish    PM
Score -100
I'd ask what is it with American's obsession with fat girls, but it's rather obvious. You lot don't really have a choice, given 60% of your population is obese
Posted on 30 August 2017, 22:19 by:   Coldfinger    PM
Score +105
Garfield on pg 52 is relatable to her situation.
Last edited on 30 May 2018, 00:45.
Posted on 26 October 2017, 23:13 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score -100
Comic continues to go nowhere. 69 pages in, and one character has gained like 25 lbs. I'm glad I'm not one of the morons paying for this tranny to produce this stuff.
Posted on 26 January 2018, 12:39 by:   Gillyfins    PM
Score +136
Sandy is best girl.
Posted on 22 March 2018, 10:25 by:   vouz    PM
Score +66
weight gain isn't my thing. the characterisation and expression is pretty decent, though, and the tina/sydney plot is nice. i think sandy is too over the top and would've been much better as just sorta blunt and dense.
Posted on 24 April 2018, 02:10 by:   Dxessfggv    PM
Score +31
Why was there a reference to steamed hams in the latest update?
Posted on 22 June 2018, 02:01 by:   MazokuMael    PM
Score +25
"Christian Manga" cm was the best shot! 10/10
Posted on 23 June 2018, 02:15 by:   Lazulitus    PM
Score +38
Damn this is getting on all my points for a good weight gain story, likin' it!
Posted on 07 August 2018, 10:27 by:   El pato    PM
Score -48
page 141 is a great set up for an unbirth comic
Posted on 08 August 2018, 17:20 by:   Xsoteria    PM
Score +161
Cool, got a new fetish. Let's just add that to the fucking archive of fucked up shit I've got crammed in the closet.
Posted on 21 September 2018, 15:46 by:   blue76543210    PM
Score +76
I was wondering when people would finally upvote the yuri tag.
Posted on 19 November 2018, 07:17 by:   El pato    PM
Score +58
this is getting good
Posted on 03 December 2018, 00:00 by:   SSparks    PM
Score +5
T I T T I E S
Posted on 29 December 2018, 21:04 by:   Red Meat    PM
Score +2
I love a dance class teacher!
Posted on 14 January 2019, 00:10 by:   Bomb Square    PM
Score +9
Definitely one of the weirder things i`ve read on this site, then again i checked it out more for the characters then anything else.
Something is deeply wrong with that Sandy chick...
Posted on 26 January 2019, 18:41 by:   Mrmanandu    PM
Score +7
I don't quite get her reaction on page 194. All the way back on page 23 it was already caught on her thighs, presuming we are talking about the same size when she mentions "My old size"
Posted on 03 April 2019, 02:27 by:   Anthony810    PM
Score +36
I think Sandy is gonna make her blow up even bigger than she is now.
Posted on 30 April 2019, 13:39 by:   Decimus66    PM
Score +38
Oh my! The plot thickens!
Posted on 02 June 2019, 15:47 by:   objectionnow    PM
Score +15
Page 12. KEK, it's just like /v/
She just got double cucked at page 192
Last edited on 08 June 2019, 16:53.
Posted on 06 June 2019, 06:09 by:   metsubushi    PM
Score +14
Bit too much ''story'' for my taste but it's nice to see a feederism comic with good art!
Posted on 19 July 2019, 01:31 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score +31
This has gotten so boring. Why don't they just overpower Sandy? There are 4 of them, one of whom is a guy. It's just stupid.
Posted on 20 July 2019, 06:15 by:   biu man    PM
Score +6
very good!!!please,quickly
Posted on 23 July 2019, 06:22 by:   M0M0E    PM
Score +8
Torrent update pls
Posted on 30 July 2019, 04:41 by:   SSDJL    PM
Score +6
我也喜欢这样的女孩
Posted on 02 August 2019, 12:29 by:   NyxGlacierWaif    PM
Score +67
Honestly this is getting really stagnent. Doesn't help they can literally just yeet Sandy.
Certainly doesn't help that Kip just decided to plot-dump Sandy's "sympathetic backstory" instead of actually putting it in the story.
Posted on 20 August 2019, 01:39 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score +77
Lol, good lord has he drawn this thing out. And now Sandy is apparently the Incredible Hulk, who - for reasons unexplained- can lift two girls, each twice her weight, under each arm. This is what happens when someone is too arrogant to vette their contrived plots prior to putting pen to paper.
Posted on 23 August 2019, 09:11 by:   GWZ-KTS    PM
Score +62
Aight.

I'm bored.
Posted on 27 August 2019, 02:53 by:   bbwadmirer    PM
Score +46
Alright page 253 is just stupid. How could she pick up both of them like they weigh nothing yet draw them with huge bellies. Sandy has magic super strength? She shows no indication have having any muscles so how is she picking them up. There are 5 character to one and making a ton of noise. No cops have been called yet? The author has written themselves into a corner and doesn't know what to do next.
Posted on 31 August 2019, 19:23 by:   KytuzuEX    PM
Score +21
I want a happy ending for them. No more Sandy, the unstoppable she-hulk. I love the fetish but she burnt it.
Posted on 05 September 2019, 08:56 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score +46
Lol. So Sandy just surrendered to two guys with guns? I thought she was all powerful. And she's not going to get fattened as payback? The promise of that as the payoff was all that was keeping me reading. Boo. BOOOO!

The clown just shut down all comments on the latest page due to so many negative reactions. He has encouraged people to "send him a private critique" if they have issues in the future.

Ah, criticism - you tempestuous bitch. It's always comforting to know that if you do a bad job and people start hurling fruit, you can institute marshal law and squelch all dissent.

*Edit* He's started banning people who criticize him. That's hilarious. What a precious little LGBTQTWTFBBQ.
Last edited on 23 September 2019, 16:33.
Posted on 26 September 2019, 12:01 by:   Hakuwu    PM
Score +9
Damn this is good *_*
Posted on 26 September 2019, 13:00 by:   Joklet    PM
Score +43
More anticlimactic than Mass effect 3 ending. Sounds like he's just writing bullshit to rake in more Patreon bux. Like he started this two years ago. T W O Y E A R S and he managed to write himself into a worse corner than Miura. No wonder his own patrons are booing him
Posted on 26 September 2019, 20:45 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score +4
Welp, it's over. And while I want to say I'm let down, my expectations were so low after about the roughly the 100th page of pure bullshit, that I was left kind of chuckling knowingly to myself at the complete lack of a payoff. To put it in perspective, this was a TWO HUNDRED AND SIXTY-FOUR PAGE fetish comic with about 10 pages of very tame sex. That's... not good.

I'd suggest that Kip should be embarrassed, but I'm pretty convinced that he's a shameless, pandering, Patreon-driven clown bereft of a soul. The story was bad, the eroticism was bad, the characters were - at best - hollow, and at their worst completely nonsensical, and the art, while decent, was certainly not the best thing we've ever seen by a long shot. The icing on the cake was when people started falling on the guy with attacking comments in the last few pages and he whipped out the ban-hammer on Deviantart and removed all the critics. That, right there, is damned telling.

I sincerely hope that his pending "break" from creativity is permanent.
Posted on 30 September 2019, 08:24 by:   FFFFFACK    PM
Score +42
Why does this fetish have so many cancerous tumors for artists dangling idiots for money on Patreon while being so full of themselves that they think anyone who gives them criticism isn't making a valid point?
Nothing but emptyworded asspats remain in the comments on Deviantart. This isn't shocking knowing the artist is someone who shat on everyone who wasn't giving him free money from behind the safety of a paywall: https://imgur.com/a/yKVfDeY

Discussing the comic itself? I found most of the Main Characters [MCs] unlikable bitches. The only one who's not a shitty person is Sarah and that's probably only because she had the least exposure of the main four.
The other likable character was [past tense] Sandy, back before she was very quickly turned into a "villain" by making her main motivation being romantically interested in Gothdyke solely to cause friction with the MCs. Some background on that: Sandy was more popular than the rest of the characters at some point, probably due to her initially just being a random cute weirdo side character and the bitchier MCs didn't like her. It was predicted that she would be turned into a poorly written "villain" via character derailment by several people as a hack writer reaction to this popularity when she started becoming more of a regular. For those unfamiliar with this shit in storytelling: Shit creators will do this to make their preferred characters look better by comparison, usually a protagonist that's having their thunder stolen by a side character. This is why Shydney has her little "protagonist talks about morals" nonsense at the end. This is lost on most readers because few take life lessons from a character who early established herself of wanting to be a golddigger.
Despite Sandy having super powers at random which doesn't fit the "it's like real life but the characters have wings growing out of their heads" shit, she's easily defeated in the end by two hired generic fuckos with guns. The story essentially boils down to a clique of bitches bullying a mentally broken girl who lives in poverty to jail, who had to recruit corrupt wealthy business fucks with their own mercenaries in order to do it.
Who are we supposed to be rooting for here?

Stay tuned for an aftermath of Gothdyke and the self-insert lesbianing that's only happening because even the fools shoveling money to this on Patreon complained about it.
Just remember: The real treasure were the blue balls you had while you were reading this slowburning dumpsterfire.
Last edited on 01 October 2019, 03:44.
Posted on 06 October 2019, 05:25 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score +24
Great post, FACK.
Posted on 02 January 2020, 00:33 by:   Anonymous737    PM
Score +27
@FffffAAACK

People are usually less rational when they're angry and stressed rather than calm, so Kip responding this way is understandable if the comments like the first one in that IMGUR link was common to see, even if in my own view the characters and plot were forgettable to the point where I stopped reading years ago and still haven't gotten back into it (plus memories of it just being generally negative and depressing theme-wise played a big part in that). Maybe if or when he calms down with this, he'll take the criticism more to heart and will realize that he went to far in deleting (supposed) criticism. That big detailed response he made doesn't seem like someone who doesn't care about his work and only cares about money, as if it were, I doubt it'd be even 1/3rd the length.

But really I don't know what to think, as before going on here, I was only someone who just casually read his comics for a time and I didn't know there was this entire web of shit happening between his viewers, his patrons and him. Maybe he's the asshole, maybe the ones insulting him are assholes, or, VERY LIKELY, every side is asshole-ish to some degree here.
Posted on 25 May 2020, 13:12 by:   AnonLoliLover    PM
Score +6
Page 182 got me good.
Posted on 20 August 2021, 23:54 by:   Anonymous737    PM
Score -12
What i'm surprised nobody has commented on, is the constant little bits of negativity spread throughout the comic. References to shallow friendships, not loving up to beauty standards, anger, embarrassment, social status being lost, like DUDE! I don't look for social commentary or dramas in my porn, I look for sexy people doing sexy things, the thing PORN IS ALL ABOUT! It got to where I was randomly jumping tens lf pages and there was always something negative going on! How in the hell am I supposed to find this sexy when you keep bringing in un-sexy things into your fucking story?!

And, looking back on his standalone art and other comics, they very often have things like this in them too. One of them is an entire comic based on Incest. Same principle, WHY YOU PUTTING THIS SHIT IN YOUR ART?!

Maybe it's the same thing with shit like Netorare/Cuckoldry, you need to have a certain negative mindset to either find that thing attractive, or at least tolerable. Then again I'm completely guessing there, I don't know why Netorare/Cuckoldry and a lot of toehr fucked up things are popular at all.

A damn shame, Kip draws great stuff, but for some reason he gets off to general negative stuff so I ahve to be hand picky with what pictures of his art I favorite because of it.

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