RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1340044/611585acaa/

Man I love this doujin so much and Chisato is portrayed pretty canonically here.

On page 12, one of the fans uses the word "ノンケ", nonke, which is Japanese LGBT slang for straight, lol. I actually learned a few new words from this doujin.
On page 15, Eve literally says seppuku, but instead in katakana (she does this to names in-game and many other words too, from what I've heard). So yeah.
Page 21, Chisato's 5th speech bubble: basically just telling Aya to be more considerate about her privacy and not be her dorky "I want to be noticed" self.

This should be marked non-h

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pg 21, "I'm not going look after you" should be, "not going to look", missing "to"

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OMG! Kanon! Don't tell me you were the one who! Okay, one more thing, idols are human too. I know why fans might be upset, but if you are fans then cheer them on.

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I would be grateful if someone can translate the afterword because I suspect the author may want to get Kanon and Kaoruko involved as well. That’s pretty messed all Chisato’s ships up.

@secretsurprise thank you

Last edited on 23 January 2019, 07:09.

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@Spinningfox, done.

@kamuda02: Yeah, the author mentions they will draw AyaChisa next time too, but is also interested in whether she should put Kaoru (Kaoruko) or Kanon into the mix too. And how they're interested in Misakoko too but they'd like to hear the buyers' opinions/reviews first. Sorry for not typesetting it because I was afraid of butchering the whole page (((╹д╹;)))
I should've just released it in a new blank page, lol.

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That font is difficult to read.

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