(SUPERKansai23) [Kagirinaku Ai. (Aoi)] Doutei o Sutenai to Derarenai Heya ni Tojikomeraretara Happy End ni Natta Hanashi (Fate/Grand Order) [English]

(SUPER関西23) [限りなく愛。 (蒼井)] 童貞を捨てないと出られない部屋に閉じ込められたらハッピーエンドになった話 (Fate/Grand Order) [英訳]

Doujinshi

Posted:	2019-01-22 02:16
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File Size:	82.71 MiB
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Posted on 20 January 2019, 07:54 by: Lucine

I'm... really sorry, I appreciate your attempt on this, but this translation really, really barely makes any sense.

Posted on 20 January 2019, 09:37 by: Chen Nyan~

The fact Romani is gone hurts my soul.

Posted on 20 January 2019, 10:20 by: Fate Averruncus

Welps. Another story scrapped for the ages because there is now an existent 'translation' (I use this term loosely). I don't mean to be a dick TL-san, but before you submit a translation, please get a QC, Proofreader, and maybe someone who can actually translate without using GoogleTranslate. Your editing skills seem fine, and aside from the actual text being shoddy as a TL, your cleaning skills seem good. Consider joining an established TL circle as an editor/cleaner instead of doing... *this*….

EDIT: Okay so you reupped this, but made no real corrections and it still reads terribly... Okay... ._.

Last edited on 22 January 2019, 18:01.

Posted on 22 January 2019, 18:26 by: brandivolgio

Too soon...

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language:	english translated
parody:	fate grand order
character:	gudako romani archaman
group:	kagirinaku ai.
artist:	aoi
male:	sole male
female:	impregnation ponytail schoolgirl uniform sole female