Sakura is written サキュラ, which I'm 99% sure is a pun on "succubus" except it doesn't really translate well without completely garbling the look of name. So, noted here.

Yes, the name is very very long. I'd been waffling on this one for a while, but when it got posted here it reminded me to dig it out of my in-progress folder... might do other ones by this artist but not sure which.

To be more accurate, the title is probably something like "My train commute to school had too much free time", but this I think gets the point across and the first page clarifies anyways...

Artist page (RAW): https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=91029
E-H gallery (RAW): https://e-hentai.org/g/1356509/89566e9805/

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Zakuzelo - The "Torture" tag is really hit or miss for that sort of thing because it could be a number of things (closer to Ryona, which is sort of a whiff)... You might want to look at this artist's other works (esp on Pixiv), at Sakura Romako's stuff (which is usually consensual) like https://e-hentai.org/g/1040419/ba71428ac2/, or at Tomoshibi Hidekazu & Kazeuma.

That "H e l p m e..." at the end is pretty intense. I like it. Are his other stories of a similar level of cruelty to this?

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I actually think I would enjoy this story more if it had stayed a somewhat grounded tale about an ultra perverted girl getting off to her fantasies while commuting via train and finding new ways to do so. Once the witch and supernatural elements got introduced, it got patently silly.

It doesn't help that the writer was clearly going for a "I Have No Mouth, and I Must Scream" type of ending of sexual desperation, but didn't have the writing chops to properly describe it, so they went with the lazy "needing 10,000 times the pleasure to cum" explanation. How does the witch or spell even calculate that? Whenever you want to describe how a character feels, but you explain it by writing "ok this character feels this feeling but multiplied by *insert number*" you've failed as a writer. Using words not numbers in narration is storytelling 101.

Last edited on 01 February 2019, 21:24.

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Huge thank you for the translation!

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I honestly thought the succubus was just a delusion when she showed up. I would have preferred a girl masturbating or doing self orgasm denial on the train personally.

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@zakuzelo check out Tickzou for more doujins about extreme despair

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