Hey guys, heres my second doujinshi.
I tried to do something better than the previous one, i hope y'all like it :)
Thanks again to JackRockHardt, Jellcaps and Arqa for their guestpages, heres their pixiv links
Jack : https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=16263745
Jell : https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=16396574
Arqa : https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=2689691

If you're interested to support me, maybe grab some cool stuff etc, i'm asking you to consider supporting me on my patreon, greatly appreciated (and will help me to work more on tricky financial stuffs like doujinshis)
>>> https://www.patreon.com/Kidu <<<

Thanks for reading all of this :)

Dunno why, but that style reminds me of ShindoL.
Nice work!

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Faces, especially lips and eyes, really do look like ShindoL. Hope you do more.

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Really really good art for a westerm artist, and this is your second doujin? I'm impressed. This is one of the better depictions of Jeanne Alter in a doujin I've seen. Looking forward to more of your work.

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Absolutely love this doujin! Viewing each page one by one on your Patreon, and finally seeing the complete product brings me so much joy. Really proud of your work and effort and I hope all the Jalter fans love it even more. <3

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H O L Y S H I D

Amazing artwork right up with the best Japanese artists.

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这老外有点强啊，画风还有点像新堂

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Suspiciously similar to ShindoL. Maybe a bit beyond suspicious.

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Having too much waifu will destroy your laifu.

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Damn. Those art are something.

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That Western tag must have been satisfying to put up

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Artist also did a good one on Himiko (from My Hero Academia) too. Can't wait until your take on another series.

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Nice to see that western tag on something as nice as this.
I hope to see more from the same artist.

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This is looking really good. Kinda remind me of Bear Hand and ShindoL.

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Great doujin！hope i can see a translated version

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This is western? Holy this is among the best Japanese doujinshis, and not just because of the art-- --but also great plot too!

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Wow, this is really amazing. Ton of effort in story and presentation, and I really like how you go "off model" to emphasize impact. Page 24 is like an all time favorite for me.

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just hope this don't get FAKKU'd

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Wow did you seriously make this? It's fantastic, looking forwards to your future works.

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You're Jalter is great, but hot damn that Xuanzang... And Nightingale always needs more love.

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Footjob on p30.

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Impossible. No western art can be this good.

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great. Now do one for S'Alter and make it a perfect loop.

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What's your first language? Whoever you got to clean up the script aren't native speakers, I have to say.
Otherwise, nice work.

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There are way too many parts of this that feel like they were taken straight from a ShindoL doujin than just inspired from.

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this one is really strong for being tagged western, keep up da good work

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Jeannu I love the name.

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holy shit, I hate almost every western doujin but this shit is a master piece. The West finally achieves greatness

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Excellent work "Kid". Quite impressive by any standard, even more so considering this is your second comic. The writing was great and the characters believable.

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Sequel when?

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i promise, soon c:

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这画风……禁毒先锋既视感啊。

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Footjob on p30.

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Im starting to wonder if there should be some kind of anime tag for western category

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Im a fan of Chad Ritsuka. Wish more dj artist made him as one

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