https://www.deviantart.com/borba/art/Born-To-Be-Alive-01-766176628

Part 1 https://e-hentai.org/g/1069672/b8e6cad1bc/
Part 2
Special (Part2.5) https://e-hentai.org/g/1694535/4ff0add991/
Part 3 https://e-hentai.org/g/1856389/4621f032ee/

If you've read the prequel to this story, you know it's gonna be a humdinger.

Artist Afterward

"The last page, finally.
I love happy endings!

I would like to thank all those who have supported me and my fan comics in the last few months. Things would have been a lot less easy without their help.
Once again I would like to thank Megumisguy in particular. His novelette was essential in my decision to accept that I Will Survive needed a sequel.
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Oh, yes, I almost forgot: I Will Survive and Born To Be Alive are, respectively, the first and second part of a trilogy named TRILOGY OF LIFE. The last installment, titled Never Say Goodbye, should be published in the last half of 2019 or in the early months of 2020.

However, Never Say Goodbye will only be posted on my own website, williamborba.com. More info can be found in a future journal entry."

There you have it guys, stay tuned for the final chapter! XD

3-13-2019

Added teaser, wip page for the upcoming chapter 3 of this..."Trilogy of Life". Aren't you all excited! XD

Here we go again.

Edit:

CH a P tER ThE E

oH n O o

Last edited on 14 March 2019, 07:56.

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A continuation?
My body is ready.

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Oh great, more shitty abortion memes in the making because people can't read context.....

-EDIT-
LMAO AT ALL THE DOWNVOTES. Truth hurts I guess.

Last edited on 26 December 2018, 00:17.

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I hate it when comic creators continue stories that ended perfectly. Hopefully this one can reach the same level as the last.

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BOI not This guy Again

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This is going to be A-mazing.

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Made an account just for this. But there was a fanfic as a continuation of this that I feel would've been better. At least better than seeing Nick as a blubbering mess pounding on Judy's door. Still hoping this turns out to be another good one. I thought borba quit making Z-comics after IWS though?

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The Ship has already sailed. Borba if your reading this, Nobody wants to read your shitty "Judy decides to get an abortion" story. Write and Draw something better with Zootopia.

Give it up. You BLEW it.

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Let me guess, the artist changed their mind. If so, congratulations you have regained your humanity. If not and all of this is a ruse; please stop doing what your doing.

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Itty bitty baby itty bitty boat

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Dude, Borbs, bro. You gotta quit while your...behind? Being neither a woman or anywhere NEAR at risk of finding one to have sex with me, I won't have to be a decision maker in an abortion any time soon. And if I'm being honest, those conversations are best left up to people smarter and more informed on the subject matter than myself. So from an exclusively creative standpoint, your comic was decent. You gave both characters a fair amount of depth and reasoning for their opinions. And in the end, wrote a tragic story where both people stick by their stated morals and that tears the relationship apart. Good, you made a creative decision, and though I may not agree with it, I respect it. But you gotta know when to stop. After such a heavy ending, doubling down now is only going to piss off more people, and likely cheapen your original message. By contrast, if you have Nick change his mind, it's gonna come off as pandering. Either way, I doubt I'll prevent your ill-advised decision to continue, and at best, I hope I'll be able to light a joint off the dumpster fire you are about to drop on us.

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The Ship has already sailed. Borba if your reading this, Nobody wants to read your shitty "Judy decides to get an abortion" story. Write and Draw something better with Zootopia.

Give it up. You BLEW it.

@BovineConfection. Agreed. That was the point I was trying to make. Its just ponderous for Borba to continue going down this tainted rabbit hole(no pun intended) of a pretentious piece of shit plot like IWS.

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@JackMorrison I wouldn't call the plot a "piece of shit". The author...maybe. However, Borba's IWS is a stand alone work that does what it intends to do and is true to the universe that it creates. So in that regard, the work is fine. What I was pointing out was that by making a continuation, Borba risks leaning too hard into their own opinion, thus creating something that hits too hard on the nose. Should they chose renege on the ending of that original work (given the reaction to it) it would seem as if they were uncomfortable with the majority opinion, and so thought to do something that was more favorable.

Fuck ALL I'm verbose.TL;DR Story was okay; Borba/MouthPieceNick don't like abortion; BovineConfection has opinions

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Oh shit, did they reopen the Arby's??

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@Anieu I don't believe it!

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The prequel was an interesting statement. 3 Pages in, this comic already feels like the author caved to peer pressure and will back-pedal out of it. Judy was the villain in the first one and now it's Nick. This is just sad. 0.5/5

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nick and judy cant have kids lol, not unless judy uses rabbit semen to inseminate her

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Well if they haven't spoken in a year, wouldn't that baby already be aborted? Or maybe it's there. This is so strange >_<

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5 bucks that she actually kept the baby but is growing it in secret in fear of shame

also You're a Big Apartment Door, 4U

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If you guys get bored in this gallery, there's a picture of Judy going knuckles-deep in the shower in the Miles-DF gallery a few pages down.

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@gerberlauncher Lucky I'd just swallowed my coffee when I read that, you bastard.

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@Trig_The_Purple_Fox
Rabbits and foxes don't talk or have opposable thumbs, either.

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I await the memes

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party rockers in th

e house tonight

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My moneys on vital organ transplant, taking all bets here, do I hear a second? Possibly cancer? Taking all bets here folks!

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lol first page has a baneposting reference

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"Born To Be Alive" is a weird title. The opposite would be "Killed To Be Dead". I'm assuming it may be hinting towards her not having gone through with the abortion?

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Can everyone stop complaining and let the artist do his thing we can judge the story when its done.

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@ZeroZi

NEVER!!!

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Arby"s We Have The Meats™!

Also get ready for the thrilling conclusion of this saga. I Will NOT Survive part 3: Nick commits double homicide! Coming to an Arbys near you!

Last edited on 18 January 2019, 08:27.

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After the last comic.....I went in therapy with severe traumatic symptoms.
I saw this, there is not one panel serious. But I know I am going to call in tomorrow for an extra year of therapy......

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@PornFilter
A great man once said, "People die when they are killed."

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This surely is a thing.

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He's clearly just trying to get Judy to help him open an Arby's franchise.

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The artist acknowledged the Arby's jokes in a page. Hilarious. This guy is the Neil Breen of furry.

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huh.... so one distressed and frustrated at the others decisions becomes over-dramatic and says alot of heavy hitting things and leaves for soul searching while the other is left to ruminate on their decisions and frame of mind still opting to follow their ambitions as at this point there isnt really much of an option from their perspective. the partner returns far more level headed but finds the one left behind has a wound that was left to fester and their presence now is for the moment no more than an irritation that while could lead to beneficial healing is not particularly pleasant to sit through

this was post when p9 was posted

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I'm not too sure but I think it's something along the lines of "Everybody dies, but not everybody truly lives."

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Page 10 - she did it! The bunny actually went ahead and did it. Can't wait to see Nick's reaction and the Internet explode.

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Just dawned on me that one of the most popular furry comics about an animal known for multiplying is a story about it getting an abortion.

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How much until PewDiePie makes a video of this comic too?

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I feel like she's lying through her teeth, her big stupid rabbit buck teeth

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the biggest problem with this is, we've got an abortion story, when the abortion in question is probably terminating a child that would've probably be a mutant freak living in permanent pain.

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I agree with shtzandgiggles, this is Judy hustling Nick as a way of getting back at him for leaving her but now if he truly wants to be a dad then he better not leave again

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Aw c'mon man, stick to your guns, that bun just killed your kid.

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I'm not even here to read it, I'm just here for the ensuing drama.

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Yeah that last page might lead into nick doing something like killing her.
forgive me.
Why would he ask for that. Unless he was about to do something drastic.

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Strange how Nick is suddenly asking Judy to forgive him. I'm assuming he's going to do something dramatic, or the next coming pages will at least be dramatic.

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Borba: Good art, shit story.

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sweet mother of lord not this shit again

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Nick isn't desperate enough, he must summon his inner Dr. Wily.

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Not only is it some sort of bizarre soap opera version of the characters; the writer also doesn't seem to have the slightest idea what they actually talk like.

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I actually wanted Judy to keep her child. Edit: (How stupid of me to claim this when I didn't know who I was dealing with.)

Edit: Yeah, I believe It's time for me to stop reading. Because I have a strong feeling on how this will all boil over... I honestly won't be surprised if he actually goes down that road. He's shown on multiple occasions he feasts upon the negative comments and enjoys creating something more absurd just to piss people off out of his own insecurity. In all honesty, Page 18 actually made me do a double take and now it's just become even more redundant. After spending an hour and 30 minutes going through Borba's journals and other older artworks I've immediately lost interest.

Last edited on 14 December 2018, 02:17.

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I guarantee you that the next page will be Judy basically being a "strong independent woman that don't need no man" more meme fodder.

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This sucks.

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This attempt at damage control is unnecessary and only makes matters worse for Borba.

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I keep coming back to this train wreck. Fuck it, I'm doing a rewrite 😡
Call me an dick, call me an asshole I don't care. It's so painful to read...

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I love how how the artist just rektalhurt everyone on both sides. I'm still interested to see how this plays out.

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I don't like where this is going, I can only see two possible outcomes here. And it looks like the worse of the two will happen.

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She with Jack and the fucked and they have a baby probably, fuck this story so hard

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The drama is fucking real holy shit

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i came to tbe comment section to talk about the comic but there's so much shit flipping over fictional characters that i just had to go make some popcorn and grab a soda to watch this instead.

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Borba didn't even bother drawing Nick as a fox for the sequel anymore. He clearly just drew him to look like a huge pussy.

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This is really playing out like a spanish soap opera. When is Ricardo the evil twin once believed to be dead in a plane accident over the pacific gonna bust through the front door shouting I object?

Edit: You know what, I think I would've preferred the evil twin subplot more than "I'm gay, strong, and independent. Deal with it". Not so much that I'm triggered but more why? I'm beginning to think this is all just one big elaborate troll to get us riled up. And its working!

Last edited on 26 December 2018, 23:21.

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This just looks like a major backpedal from IWS. Everyone crapped on Judy for killing her and Nicks kid. So in order to make Nick the bad guy his entire personality has to be rewritten to be the complete opposite of who he is, and do the same for Judy. Gotta say this is a huge dissappintment, was hoping for something more than "I know I killed your child, but you should've sucked it up and been a REAL MAN and stay with me to watch me kill your kid!"

Also I bet 100$ that Jack is going to show up, and chastise Nick for daring to leave Judy after she killed his kid because "muh career". Might as well have made this a completely seperate universe, since they don't even act how they did in IWS and that was also WAY off from how they are normally anyway. This comic seems to become more and more of a dumpster fire every update.

Also an edit: the whole "shameful coward" attack from Judy... fuck that noise. He said he wanted a child with her, she said no and he left. Now she's throwing a temper tantrum because she didn't get her way and wants to berate Nick to make herself feel better. Yes, let's just turn nick into a cuck, that's definitely a smart choice.

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That's my limit I'm done the author obviously wants Nick to kill himself at the end and I don't wanna be here to see it
Nick has lost Judy, his kid, hes a drunk, Judy has moved on and thinks of him as a coward and has no respect for him if this ends with anything other then Nick killing himself I'd be surprised
All of this just seem so mean spirited I don't have it in me to see a character I love destroyed like this

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I live for this melodrama and the weird occurrences of famous paintings in the background

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It looks as though Nick is going to go off the deep end, especially if that's who I think it is speaking from off screen (Jack) in the latest page. With the angst levels of this comic constantly escalating, I don't think Nick will suicide -- more like he'll kill Judy or Jack in a fit of homicidal rage.

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After seeing the latest page on DeviantArt (which at the time of this writing is page 18), I honestly don't know what to think anymore. Head on down there to see what I mean. Good luck on giving us an ending, one to remember for the ages, Borba.

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Not gonna lie before i even saw page 18 i guessed the twist its why i didn't say she found another man i said moved on just because I felt it was going that direction

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She found someone else and move on, i'm guessing. If Nick would have stayed, mayyybe she wouldn't have went through with it. I'm guessing this by the last page. So Borba Troll strikes again.

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10 bucks that Judy went Lesbian

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is there gonna be make up sex in a threesome?

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when you abort so hard to turn into a lesbian

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@sigfriedo when do you want those ten dollars?

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@Undeadcynic97 when I'm old, retired and have nothing to live for

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plot twist. that's nick sister:v

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Oh boy, time to see whether or not this is a dig against homosexuals.

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In case no one said this this direction makes perfect sense!!!! Judy loved Nick but the reason she left her family and went through so much trouble was to be an amazing police officer and when Nick expresses a desire to start a family with her hes essentially saying to priorities something else more than her work which is near impossible for her as even her relationship with Nick is rooted in her career so she obviously refuses. the fallout of this leads to her being afraid of this ever happening again so in order to avoid the whole possibility she just needs to date women which if thats how the story really is going then its..... a mirror image of how gay men create the facade of being straight in order to avoid persecution for who they are except in Judy's case her desire to pursue her career will ultimately hurt any relationships she has as she will not yield to anything that takes her way from her work

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We are reaching a whole me level of rage inducing stupidity.

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@ verse jumper

to be fair while the the consistancy of the characters' personalities between this series and the movie can be debated were the iterations of the characters are going kinda makes sense.

-Nick knew that if he made his visit seem like an imirgancy Judy with her desire to become a great policeman would answer the door

-Nick attempted to play it cool and gauge how Judy had been since he left but upon having the conversation settle on abortion he immediately breaks down cus he knows that he messed up and from his perspective has now put Judy on edge against him

-Judy while still having feelings for Nick doesnt take him back A:because he left and more importantly B:his response to her wanting an abortion was flat out saying how she was planning to live her life was wrong, that she shouldnt have pursued her career above all else and because her career and her pursuit of it were the most defining thing about her both to herself and everyone she knew this was heartbreaking and him not being there meant she lacked any emotional support (or at least any on a level to which she would consider it more than just sympathy)

-with such a terrible experience under her belt Judy will probably be wholeheartedly against having kids and will seek a relationship without that both lacks the pressure to have one and the risk of pregancy by accident ie lesibian

to be honest its not like Judy is evil or anything as a women has the right to chose what to do with their body but what Judy is saying is that her job is more important than any relationship as such if you take this thinking to its logical conclusion the only reason she was still with Nick up to that point was because he wasnt a detriment to her job and while that is a rational reason to end a relationship no-one likes the idea of being compared to a job

also Judy should have lead with the fact that she was in a knew relationship as that would have prevented Nick from blowing up (at least in the way he did)

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The old "My last relationship with a man traumatized me so much I went gay" cliche?

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@uploader

.....i-i mean if you want reduce it down to the most basic and totally not socially accepted due to how these decisions occurred without the bells and whistles of a conventional drama then yeah she got burned by the D in pursuit of the C and now tries to compensate with the V

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@SyriasX

Pretty much. There was no backstory, so that's all you have to go on.

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@SyriasX

If you are insinuating that Judy became gay because of what Nick did. That's not only wrong it's pretty offensive.

You don't turn gay because someone of the opposite sex hurt you, if you are so traumatised by something like that you just swear off a relationship. It's thinking like that, which leads to peopel thinking you can turn gay people straight.

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Alright, I can't follow this comic anymore for the fact that this is going into more predictedable mess after the other. The fact that the author is trying so hard at "realisim" has turned this comic into comedy instead of drama, and not in a good way. Despite that this is a sequel, only Judy seems to have retained her personality from the first comic, while Nicks personality went a complete 180, and not acting the way he was before to make him seem like he is a piece of shit, but despite that, I hate both Nick and Judy in this comic, for how out of character they are on he first place. With the new entry being introduced, to prove how predictable this garbage is, it's going to be Judy's new "lover" and Nick is going to freak his shit, once again being out of character btw, and he's going to point out that she's a fox just like him, and Judy is only using her to replace him, yada yada. For how well drawn this comic is, with the linework and everything, even looks like some Disney artist made the artwork itself, you would think the story wouldn't be as predictable, but sadly, that's not the case for this. All in all, this is trying too hard to be "realisim" and ultimately being a bad story with amazing artwork, sad to say, but I will say this, if the author changed the story around without zootopia story world this would be in, it would probably more likable, but probably end up as another LOSS by Buckley.

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people get upset at that one where judy gets drugged and fucks a bunch of guys, but that one isn't trying to be serious. This one is, and it's less believable.

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"It's too late now. You've turned me gay. Turned me gay."
-Ryan Stiles

So we explored how abortion is bad and evil and the devil etc etc. Now we discover how her being gay cab be equated to Nick's past if his mom was gay?

I'm not here for the art or the plot. I'm here because it is difficult to look away from a train wreck.

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@ Roboshi

Dude im not saying that Judy turned gay cus she isnt shes Bi at best. what i am saying is that Judy is now trying to avoid what destroyed what she considers to be the most important relationship of her life up to this point. it just takes the form of a gay relation as she literally cant have kids also its likely she is also perfecting Nick onto this girl as she probably was comforted by her and she was close to what she had.

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imagine if men went gay in order to " avoid what destroyed them". It would be considered supremely transparent, unhealthy, and not genuine to prefer to fuck men out of a fear of relational pain. It's not realistic, you're retarded, and the artist is a hack trying to incept shock value.

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So I'm not the only one who wants to believe that the artist is fucking with us am I?

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To say that I am confused would be an understatement.
This story didn't need to be continued, much less exist at all.

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so when is someone going to tell borba he cant write stories for shit?

his art is fine, but he should really get someone else to write his stories.

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I should clarify

i never said she shouldn't get shit for doing what the story implied in fact i want her to get shit on im just explaining the possible rational for her actions and yes if it was a guy theyed get shit on super hard especially if the person they shacked up with happened to resemble their ex. my main problem with the story is that its not even the second act and the author has shoved half a novels worth of drama in already like there should have been more buildup longer spans of time to get to this payoff.

also Judy is just portrayed as a shit. like yeah she has a right to choose not to have the kid but unfortunately she put her job security over her relationship. she could have easily said that now wasnt the time for children and that they should wait a little longer but instead she postulates the idea of giving birth to a mutant and how that will hurt her career and at that point its a "fuck you Judy" from the readers. Nick was basically her emotional comfort to help her do her job better at this point and thats unfair to Nick.

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HOLY SHIT SHE WENT GAY TO AVOID THINKING ABOUT BABIES

Oh man. This just made the leap from preachy to pathological.

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And... there it is, another gender politic driven comic. Expunge this shit.

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Only one thing to do now. Rape them both. It's the only way to redeem this shitfest.

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Good for her.

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Rape neh. Either get over it and move on or Kill his-self

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Personally I think that borba , consciously or not, is doing a sort of parody of what these sort of comics or stories. In first case is brilliant, in the second case is funny (in sad way).
There should be at least an attempt to anlayze this in this sense rather that whine like he is forcing any of us to read this.

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So much judging going on for a porn site that simultaneously contains snuff, gore and vore erotica and yet the prospect of a character having an abortion raises your hackles? WTF? Enough of your triggered emotionalism and go jerk off to something else that you like. @core1991, @anonann8, @gerberlauncher, @Deep Fried Jesus, @fizzlebottom

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So, just to backtrack on the anti-abortion comic that triggered progressives, Borba triggers conservatives by making Nick backtrack on everything, make the abortion a good thing, and also put Judy in a lesbian relationship.

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Borba never stated a preference towards anti or pro abortion fyi

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How the hell did Nick get painted as the bad guy here when Judy was behaving like a cunt to him in the first chapter? She completely brushed him off and didn't even want to give the situation some thought at least for Nick's sake. Suddenly, she's gone lesbian and Nick became a blithering simp?

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honestly Nick isnt a bad guy its just he was focused on taking the relationship to the next level and judy wanted to squat where they were. these two extremes on how to handle their relationship (at least in the stories interpretations of the characters) would inevitably destroyed the relationship without a form of moderation and it just so happens that pregnancy isnt what you'd call a moderate solution so now they have to put their hearts out with an all or nothing conclusion and in the end they both chose nothing.

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@XChronicX
Just in the first chapter? She never stopped.

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well at least in a porn site people are criticizing for the writing unlike Tumblr where borba is being criticized for not being gay or understanding gay because he isnt one. rip tumbr no one will miss you!

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lol keep being mad, jackoffs.

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Just curious, but can someone explain why this has so low score? Is it because there's no sex? Too much drama? Is it because it's simply Zootopia? Or do people hate the artist?

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@Capt

I'm sure lots of people hate the story. But it's like a train wreck, they can't look away. XD

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pBrU9laptGI

This is all I can say about this whole comic and its development...

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"Carrotholics".
In any other situation I would find that pun hilarious.

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its funny that the story goes as far to say that Judy doesnt have anyone in her corner besides some rando who was unassociated with any part of her life up to that point because it goes to show that Judy not only handle things poorly but she also didnt know how to make it right so she just stopped communicating.

also Christianity a great scapegoat for both personal and familial relationship problems.

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Okay now it went so deep of into the cliche end that it´s not longer worth it.

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@captaindope Read Fizzlebottom 's comment and you would understand. It is a strange clash of drama and overwrought adult situations in a story world that is not built for it in the slightest. The juxtaposition is so jarring and narmful that you can only laugh at it. The no sex part is forgivable, since this was not meant to be posted on this site, but wound up here for posterity reasons.

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Carrotholics? Like Catholics or alcoholics? Because my mind jumped to carrot-holics first and it's probably the only redeemable part

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ok so i just read Fizzlebottom's comment and he basically conveys what my multiple comment attempt to in one post. i think its just because i read the first part and the idea that Nick was so invested with in their relationship that even he viewed a surprise pregnancy as a chance to prove he wasnt the shitheel his father (probably) was planted me firmly in his corner. this kinda made me blind to the fact that well.... HIS FUCKING HEEL TURN IS THE MOST GARBAGE THING EVER.

like the author plays it cool at first showing that even after so much time apart Nick still knows how to work Judy to let him in but as soon as the get to THE ONE THING THEY NEED TO TALK ABOUT he starts fuckin balling and trying to roll it back. this shit turns the story into a joke Nick should have come in and tried to hash things out being the bigger person because Judy in this series of stories is not mentally equipped to be the bigger person with this given her mindset she will sacrifice everything for her job so Nick having nothing to lose could have tried to get her to meet him half way saying that should she reach a higher position and start doing more training and paperwork instead of field work that could have a kid and Nick could be the one raising them ya know actual communication but intsead they make Nick look like the sad ex who didnt know what they had and Judy look like some sociopath that snatches foxes up drains them of emotional support and tosses them out like used tissues when they want something more substantial.

Base +6, Glimglam +2

Where my Arby's edits at?

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"Carrotholics"

Carrot-Holics

CARROT HOLICS

Yeah we lost the thinnest strands of any kind of integrity there.

Judy hopps parents have a religion and it's Carrotholisism.

Is this madlibs?

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So, about Judy...

- First rabbit to be a cop
- First rabbit to date a fox
- First rabbit (and mammal) to have a prey-pred pregnancy
- First rabbit to have an abortion

Is there anything she's not the first off? I'm starting to understand why many so dislike the comic.

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So she didn't want the kid in the first one because she wanted to focus solely on her job while Nick wanted to keep the kid and it was her way or the highway. Now she is guilting him for sticking up for his beliefs and not being part of something he sees as awful and saying he should have been there to support whatever she wanted, while doing the "maybe I wouldn't have done it if you were here" nonsense as well? Can that be any more emotionally manipulative?
Having the female fox replacement thing just feels like trying to spite the character and it's predictable what is going to happen going forward.

The first one was preachy as fuck and seemed to have Nick be in "the right" in the story while this one is making him the villain for not doing whatever she wanted making her be in "the right" while having her have done nothing to actually try to mend the relationship herself in the time between. I just don't get the point of this at this point outside making it as emotionally manipulative as possible. The characters are all shit heels at this point and the story seems to be depressing for the sake of it in a fictional world that isn't really conducive to this type of plot in the first place. The art is nice though.

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Wow Borba, you mother fuck! I came here wanting to watch the "train wreck in slow motion" after the ending you left us with in the last comic, but you seem to be making something that draws us back in with it's heart. Good luck dude, I hope it keeps up with the happy!

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PLOT TWIST. Girl fox's "stressful breakup" was because she was an abusive lesbian lover. Gotta hit all those talking points for the next conservative-oriented Borba sequel: "No Mo' Homo" where they discuss some of the things the LGBT are NOT very prideful of.

That's followed by its more progressive-minded sequel "Ain't No Race Of Mine" when Judy finally decides that these larger privileged predators have been taking advantage of their positions of power over her love as their prey, so she finds a rabbit lover instead.

This accumulates to the series' grand finale "Zootopia: Civil War", where everybody dies because all this highly polarizing politics are just causing unnecessary rifts between communities resulting in mass unrest and violent confrontations. The citizens of Zootopia have forgotten the lesson that a spry rabbit and her sly fox friend has taught society about learning not to unfairly judge others.

The final countdown begins as revolutionaries within the city goes for the nuclear option as the final swansong of a once great city. As she struggles with her own fatal wounds, Judy holds Nick, missing his legs and dying in her arms. She goes through the chain of events that have led to this situation. The rising interspecies tensions. The major legislative reactions to overblown issues. The spread of mass distrust among once close peers. All of which because of a rabbit that bit off more than she could chew. She saved the city once, but she shouldn't have forced it thinking she could keep doing it again and again. All because she slapped the fox she loved.

The nuke detonates. Time slows. Her mind is clear but one thing still stands out. Something she should've done long ago. Her one deepest regret that would've changed everything and prevented her from making all the decisions that led to this specific moment: "I should've just invested in Arbitch's".

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oh wow i didnt even read the latest page i just was responding with what i remembered from the last few pages. this.. this both makes sense in a bubble but in the greater scheme of things just makes me not like Jud- no it makes me not like the AUTHOR more. like yeah people can bond over past issues and hangups but given we see why Judy is were she is and her rationalization of her actions it just doesnt really endear her to me. she is literally running away from everything to do the one thing that makes her feel save and gives her purpose being a cop. after all the other shit that ive already said about her, her decisions, her frame of mind, and how she views things like relationships at this point it makes me view this new fox as the 'ultimate comfort' for Judy that I dont think she deserves. this girl has everything Judy needs to make herself feel better and confident she just got out of a messy breakup, she isnt a guy which if they got further in their relationship could become a problem, shes a fox as most likely Judy now has a predisposition towards foxes, and most likely she is someone who wont have much overlap with the police keeping her relationship and her job further separated. Judy couldn't ask for a better rebound.

while Nick, the utter heel that the story tries to make him out to be didnt have anyone and was left to question his actions and his relationship and the conclusion he came to was..... forgo everything you desire and wish to achieve in service of one person and their selfish ambition. Nick doesnt get a new relationship or even a child of his own all he gets is a slap in the face and a guilt trip that makes Judy out to be a cunt and him a wuss.

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I love how much this triggers right-wing crybabies

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@ rapeshit

first with a name like rapeshit i wouldnt tout you as the cornerstone of forward thinking much less higher level thinking and second what is primarily going on is a question of the characterization of to characters and how it frames their relationship from their individual perspectives.

no-one is (or should be) arguing about whether Judy can choose to have an abortion the problem is that the way its presented she makes her relationship with Nick out to be just a comfort of work. the story makes their relationship out to be something Judy can fall back on when life gets rough but at the same time she is unwilling to compromise herself if it negatively effects her career and she doesnt even try to reason with Nick about maybe having the kid later instead opting to instead turn herself into a grand symbol that must sacrifice everything to her work (it should also be noted that with her self admitted social standing and the possibility of the first prey-predator hybrid the would probably have substantial access to doctors and medical treatment to reduce risk so Judy has actually shot herself in the foot). this means her relationship with Nick was not something of equal measure. Nick valued Judy and his life with her more then she did in kind which hurt Nick and in a flurry of emotions he left leaving Judy to pursue the only avenue left as she had no interest in having the kid.

this in it of itself sets up a great drama so long as the author nows were the characters stand and if the reader response (at least on this porn site) is any indication they did not. Judy pins her the blame on Nick even though he didt have the final say in the abortion and all the complications were a result of her actions. Judy getting together with someone was obviously going to be a plot-point as with most dramas but the problem lies in WHO she ended up with. A female fox in the hospital who was coming out of a messy breakup its literally just Judy in fox form or at least given the story up to that point thats how it feels and thats the problem. her new relationship looks less like someone trying to deal with there personal problems and more like someone who ran away from people whos opinions and criticism she didnt like until she found one that gave her the positive confirmation bias she craved.

Nick isnt much better as the two things that save him from being completely awful are the fact that he was the one more invested in the relationship and wanted to build something with Judy that was just for them but found himself playing second fiddle to Judy's career while the second thing is that Nick isnt the main character as he is more of a vehicle to get Judy to talk about the stuff she did and this function is what facilitates the worst part of him in this story.... his heel-turn. At the start of this he seems like a guy who has gotten some fresh air and thought about stuff. he uses his knowledge of Judy and to get into the apartment (much to her annoyance) and just tries to catch up slowly building to trying to get back together. then he just fucking breaks down submitting himself to Judy saying he was 100% at fault and thats just sad because it shows that he was even more invested in this relationship then previously alluded to and also it give Judy the chance to act above it all doing an equivalent of "you dont know what you had till its gone" even though Nick thought he knew but Judy wasnt interested in that vision

edit:

ok so this might be the monochromatic color tone OR me being racist but that girl fox basically looks like the stereotypical cartoon gender-bend of Nick.... and yes i know thats what its supposed to look like but it also looks like his mom... which is also a cartoon stereotype

Last edited on 03 January 2019, 19:08.

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I dont know where there's more DRAMA!!!!
the comic or the comments section

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...this hurts

https://i.imgur.com/E16NrHS.jpg

so please Borba...

https://i.imgur.com/Kb0RDKG.jpg

Last edited on 03 January 2019, 14:27.

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@ sigfriedo

HOW DARE YOU >:(

I hope your entertained :)

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"First rabbit abortion." Man, just when I think this garbage fire can't get any worse, the author does not fail to prove me wrong.

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Geez, Judy is a bitch in this comic lol

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9sKRrEtTRCU

This is how much I'm laughing right now XDD

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>Judy: Things are not just black and white
>Also Judy: Nick being against my abortion is absolutely bad

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once Judy tells tells Nick that it's not only a hustle but to teach him a lesson, then do they get back together before or after make up sex but with the vixen added it will be a threesome?

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So I suppose the lesson Nick learned here is that he should have never forgiven Judy for her racism and starting a race war, since she would have never have done the same for him.
At least not in Borba's twisted and poorly written world.
Also, all I can do is laugh at the artists attempt at sounding deep and profound with "things aren't black and white". Making a jumbled mess of a story doesn't mean it's "grey" or whatever you're shooting for.

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I'm not happy with this.... Don't misunderstand me, the comic is OK... It's.... Complicate to explain (more for me I'm not English speaker) but I'm try

In the first comic Judy and Nick... Are Wrong, Their completely wrong booth!!

First Nick is wrong about leaving Judy...
Second Judy is wrong about doesn't taking care about Nick feelings, also the reasons about her choise are egoist and racist! DAMM! SHe is scared about the baby was a hybrid! In his words... An aberration! All because the baby was a half blood...
That's racist!

I don't try to say he or she was right

I'm trying to say all of two are agoists and this (now broken) couple They should have talked a lot earlier about this issue and try to reach an agreement

About the new comic, his main topic, is about a broken couple and as one of them went ahead, while the other stayed anchored in the past...

But Im very sad about Nick and I think it's a little unfair that Judy rethinks her life as if nothing had happened (the rupture, the abortion, his consequences...)
I'm happy for his new happiness.... But.... Its sad for Nick

I do not know if I've expressed myself well... Sorry in that case

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I hope this was just some kind of nightmare scenario that Nick mind thinks will happen the instant he heard the word pregnant because I can't see Nick acting this way in page 23 and especially 24

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Yes, this is a totally believable and in character way for Nick and Judy to act. /s

This writer is such a hack.
Does he know ANYTHING about the characters he's writing about?

Last edited on 22 January 2019, 05:36.

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Dude what had this comic become, honestly. This totally isn't Nick, same with Judy. Use other characters then, but this just does not make sense in any way.

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10 bucks says she hits her head when she falls and dies. This seems like that kind of train wreck.

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Imagine...like having long paragraphs of 1 page reviews of a fucking sequel to a Zootopia abortion comic. Like ya'll need to chill lol. Did you expect some like deep shit or epic writing? My dude just enjoy it for the trainwreck that it is by the mere concept that it is

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this is like a Spanish soap-opera decided to copy an Indian soap-opera after blowing 4 lines of drain cleaner

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And the parody keeps on giving. This turns more and more into something you find on south american TV around lunch hour.

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@ Zeruaargi
I expected some hot makeup sex that would lead to the creation of another child, not El Loco Dramatica Finale: Parto Dos.

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I decided to give it another chance and what does the author do turn nick into a homophobic, woman beater this is so outta character it hurts.

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Okay, they're both being bitches....

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It’s Official. The Borba IWS sequel has turned into a Gigantic FAIL.

Borba has also turned into a pariah.

He brought this on himself. And has nobody but HIMSELF to blame.

This is SHIT. Complete SHIT.

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This comic screams Snowflakes

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Kind of figure he would go in that direction.

Base +6

I got nothing else to say... Except repeating my previous comment:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9sKRrEtTRCU

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One wonders if the artist them self has issues and tries to cope by creating this depressing mess of a story.

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Shay! You Shay! Ok?

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see here's the thing, you wanted to go with one characterisation with the previous one. But now they've all flip floped just to have more drama.

you change the story to fit the characters, you don't change the characters to fit the story.

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@Roboshi you nailed perfectly the main sin of this damned comic and the big clue that is just to get attention.
in the previous story every panel was a shift in characterization, not excessive but you notice it. All over the place and confusing for the most part. If wasn't for the very expressive dragins the whole plot result in a complete confusing unfunny mess.
Here things are flipped over, and the character act like complete moron too. Why Judy opened to Nick, or kicekd him out once she saw he was ok? Why Nick got so fucking worked up to point of violence too? No reason other than shock value...Because and these comments are the proof, shock value is the only thing that generate attention. BEfore deciding to become the bad guy of furry porn toon(well porn there is not a single istance of sex...)he draw regulr stuff but little attention, now he draw this. AND HE IS THE GODDAMN CENTER OF ATTENTION! Comments,VIEWS(even if hate reading is still reading, BTW!)...And this is what he wanted.
In some perverse way is admirable

Last edited on 25 January 2019, 21:43.

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I think we can all agree that this has turned into a complete fuck up of a train wreck in story telling. The biggest issue is that this ISN'T the Nick or the Judy we know from Zootopia personalities. If this story would have been unknown characters the artist made up, it would still be Jerry Springer drama worthy but at least not dragging characters we know and love through the mud. I give the style of art an A but the story a F-. In the realization of the author coming to terms that this story for the characters is trash rate, one can only "hope" he pulls out a Dallas move and make this all a bad dream Nick is having at night... =P

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Damn Nick is an Asshole in this comic....

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@Nightmare_Knight Uh, it's a fan comic. The author does not need to get their personalities Exactly right. Though I agree with a lot of the other comments that this has gone from possibly comical to straight out character overkill. Last comic, Judy was the bad one because she wanted to make this very important decision without Nick, but she knew she needed to tell him. He got pissed, understandably so.
Now this comic, Judy has gone ahead with the process at risk to her life and then luckily survived and met someone to fill the void that Nick had left. Then Nick shows up and he becomes the bad guy because he thinks he can just waltz on in and make it like he never left. The shouting, the grabbing and now the assault just cements him as the one to hate. Because a followup was kinda sorta needed.
Both main characters from Zootopia have been turned into bad folks in the two comics. That's just the way the author wanted to write the story that was in his head.

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Leave it to Borba to make you feel that all is for nothing.

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roll credits

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omg they fuel the memes. NPC shit are not ok.

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Dear fucking god, did he ACTUALLY have the main character randomly say "I was born to be alive!" in a bold font?

Like, there's fanfiction written by 10 year olds. Then there's this.

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"I was born to be alive!" Roll credits! Please...

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Then he takes a shotgun. Murder Judy and Shay and blow his brains out. The end!

Last edited on 01 February 2019, 18:02.

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@CompleteWeirdo

Judy: "I was born to be alive!"
Nick: Stops letting her pull him "Like our baby was suppose to" he leaves her to wallow in her murder.

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JackMorrison- then stop reading it, you dumb shit.

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And here i thought the worst fanfiction i ever read was the first Grey NIghts codex written by Matt Ward.
Darn Borba trumps the degree of jerk off drama by lightyears.

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@Airogrup. Yes please. I would LOVE for Borba to go that far. This failure of a Zootopia Fan Comic has already jumped the Shark. Why not Hover the Shark 🦈 over the Fucking Moon?

Murder/Suicide of BR Nick. I want to see it. Its the only way to redeem this piece of Shit.

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I had to look up the comments on the original posting of this page on Deviant Art. It was as much of an enjoyable dumpster fire as I suspected it would be.

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I'm still here waiting for the "It was all a bad dream" kind of ending. But that's not going to come... is it?

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I'm guessing no one got the CinemaSins reference I made. Oh well... I wonder if this is the last page or not. Not sure what can happen next, aside from a full out assault scene.

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“The only way for me to solve this crisis is to become Superman IV, the Quest for Peace.”

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Just what has happened here? Is this really the continuation of i will survive?
All the chars decided to turn into the exact opposites of what they were, judy suddenly becomes a strong lesbian who needs no man and nick loses his backbone and becomes an unstable mess?

In the first story Nick had his hearth broken after Judy decides to once again let her fears control her choices and makes the "greatest" choice of her life to abort her kid to save her career (kill a baby for a cop job, eh?) and ruined a good relationship. Nick decided that he will not be part of such process and left the place as a broken but strong men.

Both chars were mostly acting as how would you think they would act in the sceniario but this one here is a mess. First we have nick who is now an alcoholist (?) mess who has thrown away his diginity to get her love back. Judy comes into the picture and calls nick a shameful coward something whats ironic to hear from someone who out of fear of losing her career decided to abort also makes the claim that nick was the worst in the whole act as if she was not the one who decided to do it no matter what and would have tried to convince him on this is the best for him (or more like her.).
She also decided to not tell her family since they are against such things and apparently being without support is nicks fault too.
After this we also find out that judy from now on is a lesbian, im not an carrotholics but im pretty sure they are against that one too.

The whole thing "currently" end as Nick gets thrown out by a strong, independent lesbian while he acts like hes not even the same person from the first pages or the first comic or even the movie.

Honestly i wouldnt be suprised if this story ends up in either Nick commiting suicide or he becoming gay. Might aswell say that its such an obvious ending, i can literally see it before my eyes.

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Im calling it, next story someone dies tragically probably either Nick by suicide or the fox girl by a car crash for extra drama what will leave judy mentally fucked up.

Last edited on 11 January 2020, 19:02.

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What the f*ck a Carrotholic is?? They pray to a carrot putting in a cross??

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"bore to be alive? what about our child?"

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I've no opinion on the comic as like literally every other fan comic on this site, it's just up to the author in how they're depicted, but it's just fun to read the comments.

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Please tell me this page is the begining of 360 turn around in the history, and is actually become better again.

Last edited on 28 February 2019, 05:49.

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"I was born to be alive."
Can't say the same about your unborn child.

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This shits ridiculous
Nick broke off his relationship with Judy because she was pregnant with his child but she wanted to get an Abortion, for fear of a cross species, predator/prey hybrid. Nick points out to Judy that she can’t be sure because there’s never been a prey/predator baby before but Judy didn’t want to take that chance. Nick was opposed to the idea of abortion but Judy stood by her decision, and in doing so, Nick decides to leave because he couldn’t be with someone who’d want to kill there own child. A few months later, Nick returns, realizing he cannot live without Judy forgives her for the abortion and asks to take him back. However, he soon finds out that Judy has another lover, who is also a Female Fox. Nick is shocked and Judy explains that she fell into a deep depression after Nick left because of her selfish decision for aborting her baby because she didn’t have the strength to love him/her if the child was a hybrid.
Nick is in denial and asks Judy to leave her and take him back, things escalate, Nick pushes Judy’s lover and Judy kicks Nick out????
Then she lives happily ever after?!
I feel bad for the Female Fox, if they ever adopt a child, I would be furious if she says to it, “I’ll love you no matter what.” Which is a huge contradiction as to how she was pregnant with a Predators child but she didn’t love it enough to go through with the pregnancy. Selfish.

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Oh my god! THAT's the end??!!
Holy cripes, this was just so hilariously cringe inducing! XD

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Forget what I say; TO HELL WHIT THIS STORY! It hurt's only read the last page.

Last edited on 28 February 2019, 05:50.

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This has to be one of the worst pieces of writing and characterizations of fictional characters I've ever had the displeasure of seeing.

I wish I could rate it lower than 0.5 stars.

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@SSnakezz

sir DO I HAVE GOOD NEWS FOR YOU!!!

@Toxicninja16

the worst part about Judy is she first voices concern about the whole hybrid thing but when Nick presses further her true color shows. She didnt want the baby because it would effect her career ie getting pregnant and being unable to do field work, having to take leave when the kid is born, and devoting more time to raising the baby effecting her work. what this means is that in her new 'happy' relationship they could adopt a kid and Judy wouldnt need to raise it. thats the kicker, she isnt against having a kid necessarily its just a bother to have HER kid but getting a 5-7 year old child and saying im your new guardian is far easier for her

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The first one was Borba's failed attempt to send a moral message. The one is Borba's cry for attention.

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e de suponer que es otro mundo paralelo ya que ni Judy ni Nick son a si... estos planteados en este cómic son egoístas con un toque de maldad...

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This ending sucked

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>Says she's "born to be alive"
>Says she deserves to live life anew
>Doesn't let her baby live even once

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I will be fair: the best drawings ever. worst story EVER.

This, sir, is the most well done piece of garbage i ever seen...
If you know these characters, you wouldn't give them such a story.
Make your own characters to your own depressing story.

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Congrats to the author, that was terrible just like the first story. Please don't attempt this again.

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>there will be a part 3
Bruh, pass the bleach.

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It's strange that they made the last chapter in color

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@FoxDemon1023
My guess is that since this comic is Borba's retraction of the previous one, it's to be the comic's focal point and a follow-up to the prequel's "slap page".

The color also makes sure people don't mistake girl fox for Nick, showing that Judy gets to be happy not only for aborting her baby, but also by replacing the man she slapped out of her life for daring to think that men get to have any kind of say when having a baby. Being the last page of the whole story basically says that all her choices were the right ones as it led her to this happy ending anyway.

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It's interesting to me that in all the carfuffle surrounding this stories "moral implications" that few of the comments seem to point out how poorly this fanfic is written. Personally, I couldn't be threatened or paid enough to care any less about how a rando furry artist chooses to portray the characters created by a trillion dollar company. In fact, while reading the comic, my singular focus remained "is the story being told going to be good?" I had the same thought going into my first viewing of Zootopia. Being the disgusting furry weeb that I am, I ended up reading several Zootopia fanfic before I had a chance to watch the movie. Many of the comments to those works mentioned how "effing legit it would have been if they had stuck with X, Y, Z." After watching Zootopia for the first time, all of that was pushed from my mind as I was left thinking "this is a great movie!" I didn't care about the "original story" or concern myself with what "could have been". All I knew is that I enjoyed the movie I watched. After looking into it's development I will concede that, sure, the movie could have been "so much more" if they had just done the "X, Y, Z". Yet still I don't care! The movie I watched was enjoyable, and emotionally evocative, and everything else is just a pipe dream. So it's kind of funny to me that the comments section of this comics is filled with opinions of the "moral ramifications" and "back-peddlings" of the artist, when all I'm left after reading it is "this comic sucked".

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Please someone make another Arby's version with this comic! It's the only way to save this shit show!

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Eh I kinda like it, mostly bc everything i've seen of zootopia is either judy/nick, nick/any male character or just plotless porn. so it's nice to see something different. also, yes, this is not how they would behave but, isn't this like an AU or something? fans create shit that contrast with the cannon plot all the time so what's the problem?

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Shit read to be honest

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@ BovineConfection

eh, that just means you chose not to engage with others beyond the general and superficial view of the comic. this isnt to say that your wrong or that what you did wasnt a valid decision because in the end you just werent interested much in a conversation about themes and plot points handled in the comic. when you looked up a comic on zootopia you were only looking to be entertained and thats were it ended for you. honestly i see abunch of shit that i dont like on this sight either because its just bad to me or it has everything i like bundled in with something i despise so i can no longer garner the same form of entertainment from such stories as i do others and in my case i chose to comment and converse about thing the story did well and things it did poorly in order to get something positive from that use of time.

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That new page~ If only she had that much emotion towards her unborn child

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This was poorly written, the attention to detail is amazing though. Borba should rent out his/her skills to actual skilled authors that lack illustration skils. This level of art with a good story would be a fantastic read.

Last edited on 14 March 2019, 22:01.

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剧情反转的也太快了吧，我要翻车了

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Later on that day in the news Judy will find out that Nick hang himself from a tree near Bunny Burrow and in his shirt pocket is a suicide note address to her

Last edited on 19 April 2019, 22:15.

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good on model art, high levels of autism, projection, and hypocrisy.

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This is the best Comic, if you like selfish, emotionally manipulative, whiney, overly-dramatic and abusive Assholes.

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The last of us 2 furry edition

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nut nut nut nut

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