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[Taniguchi-san] HYÔIDE! Okawari (COMIC Unreal 2013-10 Vol. 45) [English] [Corivas]

[谷口さん] ひょういで!おかわり (コミックアンリアル 2013年10月号 Vol.45) [英訳]

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Posted:2019-03-14 11:35
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Language:English  TR
File Size:19.69 MB
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Posted on 14 March 2019, 11:35 UTC by:   Corivas    PM
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Hey, was asked in a translation I did months back to offer my take on this translation, so I decided to give it a go!

This is really my first kind of translation of this type, so any fallacies/inaccuracies just let me know and I'll see what I can do!

I used the original English translation by AdolfBrix as a base, but it wasn't really working out (a lot of stuff was translated wrong) so I switched to using the Korean translation as a base, but THEN I learn that that version was cropped a little differently than the original RAW Japanese version. So I tried editing things back to back making it seem good for the viewing eyes. Again, just let me know any bad stuff so I can improve!

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Posted on 14 March 2019, 08:09 UTC by:   shirohinota    PM
Score +20
You sir are a gentleman and a scholar and I salute you.
Posted on 14 March 2019, 09:23 UTC by:   robot115    PM
Score +20
Hi thanks for the translation! However I do believe there should be another page in between pages 7 & 8. If you can, check it out, thanks!
Posted on 14 March 2019, 11:36 UTC by:   Corivas    PM
Score +25
@robot115 Damn, don't know how that slipped through the cracks. Thanks for letting me know!
Posted on 14 March 2019, 18:53 UTC by:   John Darksabre    PM
Score +54
So er... I was slightly interested and checked the JP raws (https://e-hentai.org/s/900073dad0/647993-170). It's kinda off.

For example, the bottom right panel for page 1 is:

"Haa- There's many girls I'd like to enjoy with this possession drink"

The nuance is that he would like to enjoy their body instead of enjoy drinking with them.

Great work on the translation by the way! I think that there might be details lost in the double translation.

Thought it's leap and bounds better than the previous one.
Posted on 14 March 2019, 18:58 UTC by:   Corivas    PM
Score +73
@John Darksabre Interesting! Didin't necessarily know it was literal like that, thought he was going for a more playful/coy way of saying it.

Don't think I mentioned this earlier but I started work on this translation months back, I used the original english version as a base but then realized the translation was poo poo. So a lot of the earlier pages aren't necessarily my best work.

Thanks for the compliment though!
Posted on 16 March 2019, 00:40 UTC by:   awddaw418    PM
Score +19
Finally. A translation of this that's actually good.

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