[Proxer] The Dancer's Reflection [Ongoing]

Posted on 13 February 2019, 13:44 by: Unknown Ausdric

Can someone fill me in on what is going on? I have reread this around 5 times, yet it still makes no sense to me?

Posted on 13 February 2019, 15:31 by: Caesar Czarson

@Unknown Ausdric

Basically, glorified human trafficking and prostitution against one's will.
Oh and the guy is going to take the place of the 2 other guys who were already whores for a while now.

All coated in kinda hot furry smut, pretending to be a "fetish" while being a fucking abomination on humanity. Seriously, how can enslaving someone and changing their sex organs against their will be hot to anyone?

Watch the comic drop from 4 stars to 0.5 stars

Posted on 13 February 2019, 16:34 by: mintypolo

This is the godamn best story my eyes have ever rested upon in this hellhole of a site. Bravo!

Posted on 13 February 2019, 16:40 by: Majorfoxy1990

wow ... that went from great to shit (for my personal preferences) pretty fast. :(

Posted on 13 February 2019, 19:18 by: Cain Dreemurr

This guy has real talent in drawing but he is wasting it, how something like that can excite anyone?! Gender and race change is the most depressing and most horrible thing that can happen to anyone, and i want to kill that dragon handed bitch with my bare hands...

Posted on 13 February 2019, 20:04 by: Perri2G

5 star smut. Love the gender swap turnabout. I'm honestly surprised people didn't see it coming. Panel 3 is pretty much the give away.

Posted on 13 February 2019, 20:42 by: Nimbus21

I'd like to se the bitch get torn apart one limb at a time. Unfortunately that will not happen.

Posted on 13 February 2019, 21:06 by: tchubert

To be honest, it's not the transformation that really bothers me, but the boring invincible villain angle.

Posted on 13 February 2019, 21:14 by: Cain Dreemurr

@Nimbus21 me too bro... Me too...

Posted on 13 February 2019, 21:43 by: Morgath the Depraved

I knew this was a possibility given the artists other galleries, but at the very least he should've been transformed into a MALE!!! stripper, or even a Dick-girl, Stealing someones manhood is just sad, As a plot device it's good for getting comments and you will remember that story, but its just distasteful.

Posted on 13 February 2019, 22:11 by: IronHide77777

Depending on how this ultimately plays out, it could be realistic and cool (as realistic as magic can get in a story) or just boom this is a thing and there is nothing you can do about it. (Like total mind control no more story, main protagonist is mind dead totally controlled end of story. Booooooooooooooooooooo!)

Posted on 13 February 2019, 23:51 by: Sylvrwolflol

Gender Bender, Mind Break, Mind Control... all these tags exist on the site because there are people searching for them.
And here you lot are bitching about their existence because it’s not your cup of tea.
I don’t go into futa, loli, and NTR galleries and just bitch away about how I’m not about it... why don’t you stop being such miserable cunts and let other people have theirs?
Click off this gallery, go look at other stuff. Don’t downvote something to hell just because you don’t understand the appeal.

Posted on 14 February 2019, 01:33 by: catsithx

Well not to say i didnt see this coming. Though it makes me wonder about his "friend" who brought him here. Was he in on it and what did he get out of it.

Posted on 14 February 2019, 11:22 by: Onyxia1986

so this is how it turn out eh? Even with transformation you could go with a nice story around but oh no it had to go the "forced transformation and sex enslavement route" ... sigh.

Posted on 14 February 2019, 13:19 by: melekain

shit, i like this kind of thing, but the story honestly pisses me off.

Posted on 14 February 2019, 17:56 by: Caesar Czarson

@Sylvrwolflol

The thing wasn't exactly advertised as those extreme fetishes.
Until that part it was actually DAMN hot.
Then a massive ball buster like that makes maaaany people dislike this comic.

Posted on 14 February 2019, 18:29 by: The Goat is Watching

@Caesar Czarson

I've seen the next couple of pages on Proxer's Patreon, and the girls weren't both guys. I don't know about the griffin girl, but the unicorn complains when the new TF includes her getting a dick (which she didn't have before).

@melekain

Right?! I love TGTF stories, but this one feels needlessly cruel in ways that really get under my skin. It's honestly nightmarish.

Posted on 15 February 2019, 00:02 by: bloodyred

this is a pretty complex story

Posted on 16 February 2019, 01:19 by: Darlumina

Well this is my stop I think I'll be getting off. I'm all for a lot of things but gender bender isn't always one of them especial when it is against the will of the one getting their gender swapped.

Posted on 17 February 2019, 14:34 by: IronHide77777

This story could still turn out as a good one in the end if handled right.

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Posted on 19 February 2019, 17:40 by: nuggistrike

this is just fuckt up ! wonder if his frind also get turn to ! or if he was in on it ! cant waith for then end ! still wired !

so this 3 has to work together ? well that gonna be a fun storry ! sin this 2 turn him ! i hope there wil be a ryal ass whopping !

Posted on 19 February 2019, 19:58 by: ThePerverted

Well... The plot twist made the story from "near perfect" to "average boring" :|

Posted on 19 February 2019, 22:33 by: Sylvrwolflol

@Caesar Czarson

Really? Furry on human with quadrupeds and lamia, and TF is where it gets too weird for you?
I wouldn’t be calling out the rabbit hole here, Alice, ‘cause you’re already in Wonderland.

Posted on 19 February 2019, 23:02 by: IronHide77777

Sylvrwolflol
The TF itself is not the weird part, the immersion breaking TF mind break is.
If this magic user can break minds and TF people 100% no counter, then WHY THE FUCK BOTHER WITH THE CONVOLUTED SETUP by supposed friend INTRIGUE BS!?!
That kind of immersion breaking crap ruins it.
After all the build up, if that is how it ends, all that build up is wasted.

Posted on 20 February 2019, 21:06 by: jrgrj206

@IronHide77777, it doesn't seem to be a mind break per se. It looks like he fully is aware of what'as going on, even there something actively suppressing his ability to recall his name.

Posted on 20 February 2019, 21:20 by: FarkyMac

It IS mind break. His mind is actively breaking. He's having his very identity removed. This isn't sexy, it's horrifying.

Posted on 20 February 2019, 21:52 by: knolden9

And this comment just went down the toilet. BLECK

Posted on 20 February 2019, 22:03 by: IronHide77777

Wow, this story's rating has gone from 4.80 STARS something to 2.76 STARS and falling really fast...
Guess this story is about to die due to main character mind break and OP invincible villain shenanigans. :(

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Posted on 20 February 2019, 22:16 by: PringleDringus

and it started off so well...

Posted on 20 February 2019, 22:39 by: hoigoigoi

I was able to pitch a tent for the giant bird lady and her multi boobs even though it isn't my thing but turning into a woman because of fucking her isn't for me

Posted on 21 February 2019, 04:11 by: escaper

When the eroticism becomes horror, I feel as though I've been set up.

If this is the intention of the author, I must say bravo.

Posted on 21 February 2019, 15:49 by: Caesar Czarson

My expectations were extremely low, but boy am I feeling disgusted still.

Posted on 21 February 2019, 17:08 by: NapalmFlame

from 4.8 to 1.66, a masterclass on how to trash a perfectly good comic

Posted on 21 February 2019, 19:19 by: Morgath the Depraved

Now I'm confused, from pages 1 and 2 at the start of the comic, It seems like the "Witch" is friends with the MC, longstanding friends it seems, so my question is why would she, as his friend be doing this? it seems like one of those comics that won't make any sense until the end it seems...or it might have an unsatisfying explanation at least.

Posted on 21 February 2019, 19:20 by: JuankiMan

FFS, pg.27 is fucking nightmarish.

Posted on 22 February 2019, 06:23 by: castlebravo

I don't care what anyone says, while this might not be arousing unless you are psychologically deformed, this is so horrifying that it broaches the profound.

Posted on 23 February 2019, 21:49 by: Maroot

yea this story is horrifying and i love it, but i'm pretty messed up for me stories like this are pallet cleansers to make me appreciate "safe" stories all the more.

but don't get me wrong i like this too in a twisted and fascinating way, and it's far from the worst one i've actually enjoyed.

but i do hope the "evil" lady gets what's coming for her sooner or later, i like horrible stories but i prefer good endings.

Posted on 24 February 2019, 05:21 by: IronHide77777

JuankiMan
I agree.
"FFS, pg.27 is fucking nightmarish."
Avian TF half or partially completed and/or not done correctly can and in this instance become nightmare fuel.
Fortunately (taking a gamble here) the artist is good enough to make a sexy avian... I mean it is a mind broken avian for an erotic gentleman's club?
Really would not make any sense for an unsexy avian to be working the main walk.
Assuming the TF dose not get interrupted or fail for whatever reason, could be an opening to get the story out of the corner it has been written into?... Maaaaaybe?

[Edit] Nope, I was wrong. :/

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Posted on 28 February 2019, 01:19 by: leogamer00

ook geeting very creepy, i wanted porn but i get some soul stealing set-up BUT I FUCKING LOVE THE PLOT TWIST
and the song oh boy the song
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EpjpRm606h8

Posted on 28 February 2019, 02:56 by: FarkyMac

Literally body horror. That's what genre this is.

Posted on 28 February 2019, 04:49 by: liga.618

Never mind what the man transform to,I like the quality and the style of the works.

Posted on 28 February 2019, 16:31 by: The Goat is Watching

"Avian TF half or partially completed and/or not done correctly can and in this instance become nightmare fuel."

Forget the TF, the mind suppression is what makes this horrifying. Someone having that kind of power over another person makes my skin crawl.

Posted on 28 February 2019, 18:16 by: Flots

Maybe the artist's true fans (patreons and such) knew what was going on. But going from a mid 4 star to a 1 star can not be great for this artist to be known.

Power to them for creating quality work, but I am stepping out. This is no longer enjoyable to look forward to

Posted on 28 February 2019, 22:37 by: Dragoon 2502

look at these 2 links that I'm going to leave ok are 2 new pages of the comic Artist Proxer

https://yiff.party/patreon_data/24997141/Gryphoness_Audition_Pg_29_POST.jpg
https://yiff.party/patreon_data/25006443/Gryphoness_Audition_Pg_30_POST.jpg

Posted on 01 March 2019, 18:05 by: Grimrabbit

The artist should have set up that ending better. Nothing other than being a long time fan of said artist would warn you of that ending and it seems rushed. The tags were there, but its hard to know how they'll come into play or be used by the artist. Proxer if you read/see this, which I highly doubt, try to introduce your characters more towards the beginning, let the reader see where its inevitably going to end. I still love the quality of your work but this leaves me wanting a continuation.

Posted on 03 March 2019, 06:59 by: Pantswithoutpants

bad end/Nightmare fuel isn't my bag.
hard pass

Posted on 05 March 2019, 03:45 by: Dragoon 2502

https://yiff.party/patreon_data/25027656/Gryphoness_Audition_Pg_31_POST.jpg

https://yiff.party/patreon_data/25035274/Gryphoness_Audition_Pg_32_POST.jpg

Posted on 06 March 2019, 14:38 by: lordofpony

I theoretically love content like this, horrifying mind control and forced transformation and all, but I will fully say that it usually helps if the victim is at least kind of a dick, and not a seemingly pretty decent guy who gets pushed into this environment by his ACTUALLY sleezy friend. Hard to not be left with a bitter taste when the hotness is left fighting with a sense of righteous anger.

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Posted on 09 March 2019, 18:07 by: Majorfoxy1990

I liked the comic till all that crap with forced evolution began...

Posted on 15 March 2019, 05:49 by: GrayJaeger

You people are all just softies. This sadistic shit is the stuff fans of forced TFs dream of. :)

Posted on 15 March 2019, 08:57 by: Maroot

this one does not deserve it's bad rating, it's well drawn and everything.

now i get it's not most people's cup of tea and i respect that, but if it's not your interest, just don't rate it rather then tank the rating, if its themes are things you enjoy and you think it plain suck due to being badly drawn, boring or something like that i can understand killing the rating but this is just brutal.

Posted on 15 March 2019, 21:08 by: AngelFred05

That's horrying, and I liked him as a cunt boy.

Posted on 16 March 2019, 14:59 by: The Goat is Watching

@Maroot That's not what the rating system is for. People come to galleries like this because it matches tags they're interested in. And if they don't like it, they can give it a poor rating to show this. That's why the rating system exists.

The later pages in this story were a huge mood killer for a lot of readers, and so the ratings have gone down. That's how it works.

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Posted on 21 March 2019, 08:22 by: soluminas

It has me invested: I'm still rooting for the underdog (...griffin...corn) to some how turn the tables and come out on top. Can't really have a good story without a dramatic element and a challenging obstacle to overcome.

It might just wrap up being a "bad end" type unwilling servitude deal though which would be a bummer.

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Posted on 22 March 2019, 14:24 by: The Goat is Watching

@soluminas Nah man. The protag is completely fucked. His humanity has been swapped for a goofy-ass hybrid body, and the dancer persona is in total control of him. He literally can't even think for himself anymore, after what Claire did to him. And the other two girls are just fortunate to get the hell away from her and go back to their own lives.

I mean shit, one of the girls even had her vajayjay taken away so the new guy could have one, leaving her stuck with his package and effectively the body of a MtF transgender woman, and that's after she was forced to basically sell out a bunch of people to Claire to earn her freedom. Just, what the fuck.

Also @GrayJaeger I LOVE forced TF, but I despise suffering. And this comic became complete misery once Claire got to work. It went from decent to horrifying, and it never went back.

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Posted on 26 March 2019, 21:52 by: DJjames

Mindbreak and mind control are two things that REALLY make me uninterested in stuff. I mean like, if your fetish is to break someones mental state, you're a pretty fucked up person inside.

Posted on 27 March 2019, 23:20 by: dittomaster

I thought this was going to be wholesome, i didnt sign up for traitorous life stealing, or straight up human trafficking, it was a great twist sure but not what im looking for in a fucking tf yiff comic

Posted on 28 March 2019, 05:01 by: Thehellion115

Good song choice

Posted on 31 March 2019, 14:25 by: Gemini_Woods

Beautifully done and interesting story. Not really my cup of tea but I still kinda dig it. Would like to see some revenge later on.

Posted on 01 April 2019, 02:06 by: MitchellTF

...You know, if he's getting money for this, he could actually legitimately be sued for using that song...it happened to Sluggy Freelance!

Posted on 07 April 2019, 11:04 by: Fenriswolf90

This went from very nice to absolute bs very fast.

Posted on 09 April 2019, 08:31 by: GrayJaeger

Anyone got the newest pages?

Posted on 12 April 2019, 20:33 by: CaptainRum

@hoigoigoi

Yeah, exact same man, leaning that far to the animalistic don't usually float my boat but the design was good and I liked the set-up. Then the whole transformation thing happens and...yikes. Griffin girl didn't get off and neither did I. Don't begrudge the people who are into this, but I hope the artist does something a little more tame in the future.

Posted on 19 April 2019, 12:54 by: The Goat is Watching

Hey, that bit I mentioned before? About how the 2 girls are at least lucky enough to get to go on with their lives? Turns out I was incorrect! Claire is really mad that her new dancer is basically useless, and is keeping the girls under her employ until they find her a ANOTHER replacement dancer.

She even tries to guilt them over the state the guy-turned-monster girl is now in, even though that's HER fault.

This story really doesn't end well for anyone involved. lol

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Posted on 20 April 2019, 10:26 by: badabimmbadabumm

I feel bad for the patrons that pay for this.

Posted on 21 April 2019, 21:59 by: Eccentricchimera

Huh, reduced to an empty shell that can't even retain sentience without a song playing nearby...

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Posted on 22 April 2019, 21:30 by: pepancho

why is she harping of morals when they all transformed him into that?

Posted on 23 April 2019, 00:03 by: Krowler

Edit: Whoops commented in the wrong thread... Ignore this comment.

Posted on 23 April 2019, 03:10 by: MitchellTF

For those asking? It's not a matter of MORALS...it's a matter of "I can't use this dancer because she's worthless." Which...just...yeah. Twist kills my interest. It's too "SUDDENLY GRIMDARK".

It also kills dramatic tension. (And gives a sense of 'worthlessness' to the story.

Posted on 23 April 2019, 07:09 by: boogiewoogiewoo

why couldn't it have stayed with just some nice basic sex

Posted on 26 April 2019, 09:42 by: DROGONDOLDOS

>read the first 12p and wonder what the fuck the ratings were about
boy did I learn fast, what the fuck happened

Posted on 26 April 2019, 19:52 by: SirDouche

Was loving the human on furry till the transmog shit. Damn.

Posted on 30 April 2019, 18:15 by: bigblackD

While the plot could use some revising, the TFTG part is fantastic!
I understand the reason why people dislike the turn of events, but I don't think this comic really deserves this low a rating... I mean, I'd switch places with him anyday.

Posted on 19 June 2019, 13:37 by: FarkyMac

So the guy doesn't even matter to the story. He's just a plot device that they're about to discard into the background. Why spend so much time introducing him, then?

Posted on 19 June 2019, 16:49 by: Frost_Virgo

等待着大佬翻译，orz

Posted on 19 June 2019, 17:48 by: GlassFortress

I had a lot of high hopes for this comic. Because of the artist's nature I had a good idea how it would go. "Okay, he will get tricked into joining the club somehow and get turned into one of them and definitely will get tits at some point." Then the great reveal happened....art is good, at least. This is just needlessly cruel and jacked up. All well, much like other comics that are good up until a point I will just pretend this one will be forever never continued.

Posted on 04 July 2019, 13:28 by: Dadlir

There was a continuation!

Posted on 13 July 2019, 18:47 by: MitchellTF

And the new characters aren't INTERESTING, because they have very little 'real' character, other then "Well, we're stuck with a dragon".
"Deal with it?"
Or
"Protest."

Posted on 13 July 2019, 23:06 by: zhopa

>why couldn't it have stayed with just some nice basic sex

Damn, I would've been fine with TF too, art is great if horrifying at times, but the whole plot throws to shit any chance of getting my pp hard. I mean, it's half mental and I can't be aroused with that mess of a plotline. For shame, because it started soo good.

Posted on 14 July 2019, 01:48 by: The Goat is Watching

It's like every page things just get worse.

Posted on 19 July 2019, 22:23 by: Doger122

I find the story very exciting.

Posted on 23 July 2019, 22:33 by: nuggistrike

wonder if she turn them in to a femal hydra ? well 2 heads and 1 body !

Posted on 13 August 2019, 19:34 by: Cain Dreemurr

Just end his suffer please...

Posted on 16 August 2019, 20:43 by: Hypel Hentai

I don't mind mental changes if there's an implication of it being reversible... Considering the purple griffon mentioned that she was very loopy at the start (and is now fine), y'all can have a little more optimism about the VIP guy being "killed."

Also who the hell complains about transformation when there's a tag to avoid reading transformation?

Posted on 20 August 2019, 08:26 by: inuyasha1950

Looks like there is a little more going on in that feathery head than we were originally led to believe!

Posted on 25 August 2019, 20:04 by: byakkoya

Arts good but the story is just depressing

Posted on 27 August 2019, 19:09 by: Cain Dreemurr

And the suffering still continues...

Posted on 27 August 2019, 22:27 by: Genoshia

Okay, I think I've figured it out;

The author is some sort of meta-sadist who gets off on pissing people off with this. All of us insulting this comic and saying how painful it is, we're just giving the author what they want.

This is internet trolling taken to its logical extreme!

Posted on 28 August 2019, 11:05 by: Psychotic Pastry

If you have mind control, corruption, bimbofication, or anything else similar in your favorites, and hate this - well, I understand that. It delivers a little too much reality.

Clair is just those whimsical characters who initiate the plot exposed for the sadistic monsters they would be in real life. The agonizing destruction of the main character's identity is drawn out and focused upon, and the sex-obsessed new identity is exaggerated to the point of being disturbing.

If this didn't so obviously exist to indulge the fetish I'd call it a brilliant deconstruction.

Posted on 31 August 2019, 19:54 by: biznizz

Alright, so this has been a very disappointing read (to this point of posting). When this first started, it felt like you knew what to expect, especially with the artist's other works: guy gets seduced by the griffin dancer, then takes her place until "she' pays off her debt and gets another person to taker her place. Plus or minus a bit of mental pacification/adjustment.

But the guy turning into a barely functioning (mentally and physically) hybrid under the thumb of generic all powerful Villain Sue, while the two women who screwed him over don't even feel bad for essentially turning him mentally challenged. And this shit still isn't finished. I started reading for a bit of nice TF fun, but now I'm just here watching the dumpster fire burn.

Posted on 09 September 2019, 22:36 by: P-dog

Weirdly enough with the latest page, I kinda like that his friend wasn't in on it? Like, all the bad stuff still happened, but at least he wasn't planning on turning his friend into a stripper.

Posted on 10 September 2019, 05:45 by: The Goat is Watching

@P-dog This actually seems almost more sad, at least judging from Ginny no longer looking the way she used to look as a human, because it means the original protag will probably never go back to his original form and his friend will never know what happened to him.

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Posted on 10 September 2019, 21:04 by: Psychotic Pastry

@The Goat is Watching

Gauging from Proxer's usual writing style, and hazarding a guess at how this whole thing might end, I'd say the friend does eventually find out what happened.

After coming back to the club in a few years and buying a VIP pass to meet the new star dancer.

Posted on 15 September 2019, 18:25 by: The Goat is Watching

@Psychotic Pastry

It looks like the friend is Claire's next victim, so you're probably right.

Posted on 15 September 2019, 23:18 by: Psychotic Pastry

@The Goat is Watching

Only along the lines of "the friend gets victimized too". This is a lot faster than I thought it'd go. I was expecting more an ironic Twilight Zone twist ending, but that's probably because I was still in the mindset I had from thinking about The Invitation.

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Posted on 17 September 2019, 15:23 by: nuggistrike

transforming both men now in last pannel ? cant have a luse canon asking for questions now ??? so dual kidnapping now ???

Posted on 20 September 2019, 02:28 by: The Goat is Watching

Claire is a menace, and she needs to be stopped. lol

Posted on 21 September 2019, 20:51 by: nuggistrike

i hope this 2 men and the 2 girls will get reveng over this dragon cunt in the end !

Posted on 30 September 2019, 22:36 by: JuankiMan

Soooo, what was that whole "You girls owe me two dancers" bullshit? Aparently Claire can pick up whoever she damn well pleases off the fucking street.

Posted on 30 September 2019, 23:31 by: Genoshia

Wow... I know it's been said, but this is just a train wreck. It's terrible, but I keep watching despite myself.

I mean, porn comics don't make sense, because they don't have to. That's the point. This makes no sense at all, but that's not what's wrong with it. It's allowed to not make sense.

What I don't get is why this is a thing at all. From what I can tell, even the people who are in to transformation scenes don't like this. I'm pretty sure even forced transformation is a fetish, but despite the good art, reasonably interesting dialogue-the characters feel real, if not like able-and unique plot, this still isn't developing any kind of fan base.

On a side note; How is it that, in a world with enough perverts that a night club with mythical creatures for dancers can make a profit, the owner needs to Force people to turn into dancers for her? She'd make a fortune just by opening a business that transforms people into stuff, because people would pay absurd sums of money to get turned into stuff!

Posted on 01 October 2019, 00:19 by: Psychotic Pastry

@Genoshia

It's like zombie fiction. There's no such thing as zombies so the characters can make all the stupid mistakes people who knew what zombies are wouldn't make. There's no one who actually wants to be turned into a furry so the characters can be mentally reshaped into wanting it by the obviously superlative pleasure of being turned into a furry.

Not that either of those are inherently bad. All stories toss out inconvenient elements of real life so the plot can go down like it's supposed to.

Posted on 01 October 2019, 03:19 by: The Goat is Watching

@Genoshia The problem is 90% Claire. She's very manipulative and abusive in a way that reflects real life abusive people. This is showcased in places like page 34 where she acts concerned about the new dancer, when it's obvious that she's just using that as an excuse to chew them out and doesn't care about what he's going through. This is in addition to threatening to make their lives hell if they don't agree to keep working for her after they've already fulfilled their part of the agreement they made.
Or page 27, where she bullies the 1st protag who is not only being turned into a replacement dancer under Claire's control but is 100% aware of what's happening even though he has no control or even the ability to think for himself anymore.

One reason this is a problem; queer folks face more abuse on average, and furries (who are the biggest TF enthusiasts) have a much higher percentage of queer people than most groups do. So the response from Proxer's audience has been mixed, to say the least. The 1st protag being aware that they're being forced to be someone else is almost certainly going to rub some trans people (who deal with folks forcing them to be someone they're not) the wrong way.

One big example of real life abuse is the position the two girls are now stuck in. They've been forced to work for Claire for so long that they don't have homes or jobs to return to anymore. This is on top of neither of them actually getting to look just like they used to. Ginny says she looks nothing like her original human self. And the former unicorn girl still has a horsey face, and a dick she didn't used to have. So they have no jobs, homes, friends or family to go back to. So.....they're completely isolated, and have no choice but to live at an apartment Claire controls. It's that or become homeless and completely on their own to survive.

And this is 100% a popular tactic abusers use; cut your victim off from anyone they could turn to for support and make them dependent on you, so they can't get away. It's fucked up in a very real life way.

Of course, if Claire ends up actually suffering for this, and her victims get some actual closure, then it could have a pleasant ending. But so far, the comic has been the "Everyone is abused by Claire, and can do nothing about it" show.

Edit: Also, It'd be very different if the characters were obviously bad people or something. Karma stories are a whole other thing. But it's harder to get on board when it's innocent people.

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Posted on 07 October 2019, 04:57 by: biznizz

Oh, and now the other friend is being turned into a (probably) mentally challenged slave girl. How the fuck does this woman stay in business when she literally stabs everyone in the back like this?

Posted on 12 October 2019, 16:04 by: Caesar Czarson

WHY
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Posted on 20 October 2019, 03:17 by: Cain Dreemurr

I have never wanted the death of a fictional character in my life as much as I do now... An ordinary death is just not enough now... This must be brutal, and i mean brutal in DOOM terms, i want that bitch smashed to death with bare human hands, i don't accept any other punishment...

Posted on 20 October 2019, 07:22 by: Psychotic Pastry

I think we've reached the point where if Clair becomes any more malevolent, the scales will tip and she'll hit that threshold of being so excessively villainous that her horrible actions will be impossible to take at face value and turn comedic.

Posted on 20 October 2019, 12:31 by: oorsmeer

The dislike for this comic is confusing me a bit. I don't enjoy this gallery much myself but a good portion of the shit I see on this site is way worse. Most of the arguments I see in this comment thread don't work. Like @The Goat is Watching, I can't really believe people on this site are just so concerned with the lived experience of queer people. And @tchubert, you gotta see that the "invincible villain angle" is exactly what makes sadomasochistic stories work, right?

So what's the problem? Is it just that people went in looking for nice vanilla furry porn but then ran into something else? Why are they being such whiny bitches and one-starring the gallery for it?

@The Goat is Watching
"That's not what the rating system is for. People come to galleries like this because it matches tags they're interested in. And if they don't like it, they can give it a poor rating to show this. That's why the rating system exists."
That's absolutely not how it works. The rating system is to indicate galleries of poor quality. If you dislike a gallery merely because of your subjective disinterest in it, you add appropriate tags.

Posted on 20 October 2019, 15:08 by: Psychotic Pastry

@oorsmeer

I legitimately want to know where you've derived that understanding of the ratings and tags system.

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Posted on 20 October 2019, 19:53 by: MitchellTF

The issue is that there aren't tags for "Sadomasochist fantasy" and such. A gallery can be lowered for being a poor quality for what it's advertised as.

And...Clair hit that point for being so villainous it's comical a WHILE back. At least there's something HAPPENING now...

Okay, something that I want to explain...as a 'humiliation' comic, or a "Sadomasochist" comic...it's not even that good?

The issue is there's no real character to 'focus' on, who actually enjoys herself in the first bit. The victim is mind-wiped and turned into an animal, so they basically become a living prop. Which, some people can be interested in. But...the two minions are also not given what they want because they screwed up the ritual for ill-defined reasons.

The MISTRESS doesn't get what she wants, because her dancer is explicitly worthless. So someone can't even focus in on the Mistress' pleasure. (NOt to mention, the Victim is SUCh an everyman, that there's nothing to latch onto)

Finally, what REALLY killed it? Is the multiple pages over the course of months, that just deconstruct the setting and show how ANNOYED everyone is. (At least nine pages) It's not until the Kobold TF that it really got on track with the fetishism. And the characters/setting just don't have enough depth to keep things going.

That's why it has such low ratings. It's poor quality in the WRITING. Most people can't fap to that.

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Posted on 22 October 2019, 12:25 by: The Goat is Watching

@MitchellTF Yeah, I actually think the Kobold TF is actually pretty good. If we had a comic of just that sequence and nothing else, it would work just fine.

And while I don't usually like TF'd characters being trapped and humiliated, I can still enjoy it if it's well done for what it is. Corablue has pretty much built their brand on humiliation TFs and they're quite good at it. They even use the "antagonist TFs people for fun and profit" trope in Arcadia, but it works better there because the antagonist is presented more like a force of nature to be feared than an actual person.

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Posted on 23 October 2019, 19:17 by: Onyxia1986

This started of so nice and then we came to the first transformation and it went downhill from there, fast, in a burning truck full of bullshit fast.

Posted on 30 October 2019, 21:13 by: Psychotic Pastry

Ah, lovely. That'll be both starting protagonists dead as of page 50. I actually thought things couldn't get much worse than Molly the brain-damaged chimera, but then Chad here gets turned into a literally named-by-their-number emotionally dead menial slave, looking back at page 44.

Posted on 31 October 2019, 01:02 by: JuankiMan

Where's a Dragonlance when you need it...

Posted on 31 October 2019, 02:24 by: ThatStrangeDoll

Jesus Dancing Christ reading some of these comments of people complaining how this isn't their fetish is beyond mind-numbing, if only a bit amusing.

Posted on 05 November 2019, 12:45 by: Corrupted_Mind

I mean I'm only following this now to see if Clair will have a HORRIBLE death.

Can we summon some eldritch horror to toy with this pathetic dragon?

Posted on 11 November 2019, 08:09 by: biznizz

And with Page 50, this trainwreck threatens to continue. But I think I'm going to finally get off of it here.

I'll see you guys on a Proxer comic that isn't a complete chore to read.

Posted on 11 November 2019, 09:13 by: GrayJaeger

Has nobody here ever heard of BDSM?! If you don’t like BDSM then stop complaining about the comic and stop reading it! It wasn’t made for people like you!

Posted on 13 November 2019, 22:53 by: Caesar Czarson

@GrayJaeger

Uhh, not to burst your bubble there but BDSM is actually done with consent of both parties.
Otherwise its ACTUAL LITERAL RAPE.

Posted on 13 November 2019, 22:58 by: Faerone

Jesus fucking christ.

These comments are insane.

I don't see you whining in any shindol's comment section and its way darker than a dude that gets turned into some weird shit in a goofy way.

It's like going on a gay porn video and complain aabout the fact that the dude is fucking another dude instead of a chick. You must litterally have nothing else to do.

Posted on 14 November 2019, 00:51 by: ThatStrangeDoll

@Caesar Czarson

Oh no! Rape and other non-consensual elements in my porn comic?! What are we gonna do?!?!?!

Btw, what was added? Last update also ended in page 50.

Posted on 14 November 2019, 01:09 by: Riff Dealer

I can understand if people just want to nut or if the content is reminiscent of traumatic experiences, sure that would suck but to completely ignore the skilled writing and illustration aside from that is practically criminal imo. Sure, I don't know how this is going to end. It could become a total shit-show, end abruptly or be abandoned altogether at some point. However, so far it seems pretty ambiguous and I feel it's too soon to really tell how it'll play out and people are just too quick to judge what's really going on here.

Claire is 100% a devious, manipulative cunt who should be impaled and burned, that's the whole point of the character. You're SUPPOSED to hate her and what she's doing. You can see examples in popular media everywhere of the same kind of character writing and it pretty much always has a payoff, whether it be justice/vengeance or something a little less predictable but possibly more intriguing from a literary standpoint.

Either way, I feel like there's a lot more story to go, and I'm eager to see where it's going.

(Also I'm not even into TF, Mind Control/Breaking, or any of the rapey/abusive shit at all, I put my dick away the second Claire walked in on page 21)

Posted on 14 November 2019, 05:18 by: Ghalen

I always wonder how it appears that no one in it really care about the fact that people are disappearing.
Is the world they are in that bad that it is common, or something worst?

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Posted on 14 November 2019, 08:30 by: The Goat is Watching

To those wondering what's changed; The images in the gallery are a much larger resolution, now. The file size for the gallery is over 5x bigger than before.

Posted on 17 November 2019, 08:29 by: GrayJaeger

If BDSM elements like forced servitude and behavior modification aren’t your thing, please stop complaining and just let those of us who like that kind of stuff enjoy the comic in peace. Jeez. :P

Posted on 18 November 2019, 08:52 by: misterxcxz200

The story is directionless, annoying and boring. Half of the pages don't depict any kinks, just character bitching at each other about unrelated crap. None of the characters are very likable, and most are just annoying, because they are flat, boring, have no clear interesting goals and bitch at each other whenever the story isn't depicting porn, and often even when it's depicting porn. Two girls complain about a stingy dragon, a stingy dragon complains about dogs, dog complains about having to take care of a gryphon, they all just look unhappy, bitter and irritated with life whenever they aren't pretending, and not in the kinky way, and let me tell you, that is not sexy. The story takes itself seriously despite being stupid, and is also completely unfunny. There is barely any redeeming value at all.

On top of that the main character is a red herring and disregarded soon after the start, and the main villain is only introduced 8 pages in and also in the most boring way possible. Both the protagonist and the antagonist (if they can even be called that) are extremely boring and pointless.

Is not a good comic. Also the face of the girl who was transformed back into a human still looks kind of like horse face even after she's supposedly a human.

Posted on 18 November 2019, 10:07 by: The Goat is Watching

@misterxcxz200 It probably would have wrapped up a lot better if, instead of becoming a prisoner in his own barely-functional dancer body, he becomes a functional replacement of Ginny and is stuck working for Claire for now and then it ends while he's dancing on stage or something. Instead we got some nightmare fuel mental shenanigans, and then it transitions into other scenes that just drag things out and aren't nearly as compelling as the initial story. I wouldn't be surprised if Proxer switched to the other characters last minute to try and salvage things.

Posted on 19 November 2019, 18:11 by: Dos-Tree

Man how can you start with such a good premise and just shit all over it like this?

@grayJayger Yeah how could I have know that once he started to fuck the stripper it'd go to mindbreak and enslavement of the guy? Might as well introduce a Fat Ugly Bastard while we're shitting all over everything.

Posted on 05 February 2020, 23:34 by: pandapanda3

can y'all let the story finish before you complain holy shit some of you are sensitive

Posted on 09 March 2020, 12:54 by: NovStar

Will there be a sequel ?

Posted on 19 June 2020, 15:27 by: scaryted

A bit to much plot to be genuinely fappable, but enough sexy stuff to be a turn-on. And on the plus side, that plot happens to be well-made and quite interesting. Even after I stopped using this as fap material I kept reading just because I wanted to see where it was going. There is some good character building and even some world-building. How it ends up will be a big factor in the enjoyment level, but what is here is already intriguing enough for me to read on if it continues.

Seriously, major props to the author. I do hope the dragon gets her comeuppance; I agree with other comments that never having her face karma would make the story to depressing to truly enjoy. But the story does have setup for that with the two girls saying that whatever they do they don't want Claire to get what she wants. Since running and stonewalling would clearly never work, that means to succeed they will need a wrecking ball. There has to be some force out there that would counter a dragon, otherwise Claire wouldn't be hiding herself away. I'd love to see the girls get a happy ending together after breaking Claire's cover and ending the club.

Posted on 10 May 2021, 23:51 by: sjupl

I get that some readers might be bothered by the ending but this comic DOES NOT deserve a 1 rating

Posted on 13 December 2021, 11:41 by: copperpup

Everyone on this site is fine with mind break, extreme body modification/transformation, sex slavery, body horror, human trafficking... as long as it's being done to underage girls. But it happens to ONE shitty guy and they all have a meltdown.

Posted on 14 December 2021, 18:38 by: s8018572

glorified human trafficking lul, there's tons of rape stuff on this site,theres no one crying about glorified rape ha

Posted on 17 December 2021, 12:11 by: MasterZeroFlash

I havent read the story yet, but when it comes to comics (especially furry ones), Ive often seen a lack of actual forced content (that isnt just making someone into a mindless horny slut who 'wants' everything done to them, which does kinda happen here too after a certain point), though in any case it has to be said, with all the different flavours of questionable content on this website, the reaction to this one piece seems extremely overblown, and I feel like I have to read it now to see what all the fuzz is about.

EDIT: Having read it (or at least skimmed through it) I am kind of baffled, firstly I dont see anything in this that is worse than most other things on this website (and elsewhere) and secondly I dont really see any problematic content here at all? (Except maybe multi-boobs, but thats because it is just not my thing.)

EDIT/ADD: Or is it the fact that it is done to a male making it a little too easily imagined for what I assume is the majority demographic of this website? Maybe it is because it includes furry? That's usually a decent way to generate undue hate as well, from my experience.

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Posted on 31 May 2022, 08:04 by: newey_

lmaoooo I'm so fucking confused why is this getting so much hate on an e-hentai site when I've seen 50x worse shit get 4.5 star rating???? I am absolutely baffled.

Posted on 09 July 2022, 02:00 by: Eurogic

@newey_
Its due to a number of factors, but the main one that pissed the fanbase off was Proxer pulling a bait and switch...
Now, that might be extremely harsh to say, but its the truth.

What started as a standard porn comic had several tone switches and story changes (mind break, extreme body modification/transformation, sex slavery, body horror, human trafficking, and all that stuff were never in the script originally and were later additions) midway through development (As admitted in a patreon post that he changed stuff on the fly just because and didn't plan it out well) to the point the readers following it as it was releasing were confused and upset due to the lack of warning that it would go in this direction.
Add the fact he released what people wanted as a single photo (the image, "No Hard Feelings", which seemed to be Proxer mocking the audience by most people with the two mains transformed happily without the dark stuff (Just seeing the feedback that came from the post that were deleted as an outsider looking in) then kept going silent on releasing pages (mainly a problem with chapter 2) due to personal issues (and the sketches showed more of the same causing the patreon to tank during this time) and its no wonder why despite decent art it became a disaster.

Thats why its got a bad rating.
In a nutshell, Proxer changed what the story was midway through several times without a solid plan, had a image that seemed to mock those who didn't like the story, and kept taking a long time to even release pages (especially for chapter 2).

Honestly, while it might not be the worse on the site, I can say its the most mismanaged. How do you plan a story, then turn it dark without a solid outline or plan? Even Tinder Date for its faults was upfront about the dark twist from the first page's description. Thats just my opinion, and if you disagree with others and think its amazing. I have no issues with you or your opinion. I just wanted to say what happened as someone who did support his patreon at one point and found out some behind the scene information that might be informative to those who have no idea why the rating is so poor.

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