Obsidian, flowers and scarlet - (english) (Ongoing)

Posted on 14 March 2019, 23:37 by: ESTE NO ES BUCKLER

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Posted on 18 March 2019, 04:49 by: Scrivner

Interesting comic, really bad translation.

Posted on 20 March 2019, 22:50 by: DarknessAttempt

Wow, first time I'd seen a teaser trailer on here.

Posted on 13 June 2019, 13:56 by: Alurker

Ok, I like the artist's approach.

Posted on 13 June 2019, 15:24 by: Despin

I like the artist character

Posted on 18 August 2019, 13:30 by: BrainPain

I don't know what this is, but I really want to set it on fire for some reason.

Posted on 18 August 2019, 14:03 by: Sakura⑨

Interesting comic, really bad translation.+39

Posted on 24 August 2019, 20:20 by: GrandAutismo

"Story in a game is like a story in a porn movie. It's expected to be there, but it's not that important." - John Carmack

Posted on 25 August 2019, 09:10 by: ESTE NO ES BUCKLER

@GrandAutismo, I should disagree in the name of InCase and Alan Moore, it depends about what you want.

Mr. Alan Moore have a better explanation:

"There is a brain-penis-blood ratio that tends to get in the way of writing intelligent pornography. If it becomes too intelligent all the blood rushes through your brain, you lose your erection. If it becomes too sexually exciting you are no longer in any state to appreciate it's aesthetic value. It is a difficult balancing act."

Posted on 06 September 2019, 16:36 by: lostapostle777

wow...artistic

Posted on 30 September 2019, 07:07 by: Lexander

The art is fine, the story is... unintelligible because of the translation.

Posted on 30 September 2019, 13:14 by: Sylvrwolflol

English- sorta. If they’d gotten someone who who actually speaks English to translate this, it could’ve been amazing...
But as it is now, it’s mostly just impressionistic art and jumbled words.

Posted on 02 October 2019, 17:49 by: klorklor

求出中文

Posted on 20 November 2019, 00:08 by: Jarvis_42

4 pages to explain why the cover was clickbait and beg for donations.

Posted on 20 November 2019, 16:13 by: Dos-Tree

A'ight little author avatar will my contribution will be directionally proportional to the number of smut pages.
Considering that number is currently zero I'm gonna keep not paying to view this.
Fuckin' blueballing me with the promise of a cute redhead with a firecrotch. If I wanted drama I wouldn't be looking for porn.

Posted on 10 December 2019, 21:18 by: pirokobo

Mods need to take action to block the artist from bumping this without new content.

Posted on 13 December 2019, 16:57 by: RodrigoRGM

Ohh i Like the new page, maybe will get interesting.

@pirokobo actually he add a new page.

Posted on 29 January 2020, 07:08 by: Revolvus

45% + 40% + 9% = 94%

What's the last 6? Socialist propaganda?

Posted on 11 February 2020, 14:36 by: Akamelia

I love it so much !
The drawing style is so awesome and the story looks to be as much as good !
I am so much looking forward for the next pages ^^

I saw mistakes in the translation (I guess, I am not fluent), but I had no trouble to understand the story. Maybe, as someone said, there is too much blood out of the reader's brain to understand English ^^ (that's a joke, don't be mad at me)

I even see a criticism about animal slavery (even if it was not the point of the author(s)), and I can only love to find such kind of deep thought in a document like this ^^
The filters I use on this website usually skip this kind of content, so I am very glad that I didn't configure it this time ^^

Don't let yourself pull down by the mean empty comments, they are just not the target audience ^^

And about the release frequency, if you need more time, take the time. Quality is more important than quantity, so... no rush ! ^^

Posted on 27 February 2020, 17:42 by: LinBeiMMP

niiiiiiiiiiiice

Posted on 11 April 2020, 04:50 by: singfreal

This's brilliant

Posted on 11 April 2020, 04:59 by: elarithon

inb4 it's softcore porn.

Posted on 26 May 2020, 13:24 by: L0LIC0NER0

TFW over year has passed and this is all we get...

Posted on 12 June 2020, 20:57 by: fenrir1208

How is it erotic when you can't even see what's going on? You went from barely making out what's going on to just a bunch of red, I guess a hand (that took me 32 seconds to make out), and no specified details on what's happening.

I'd hate to be a donor to this because I wouldn't even get my money's worth.

Posted on 19 June 2020, 15:18 by: ssj782

I tried this out because I see it pop up every now and then. I regret it.
It also needs a torture tag, which would have blocked it from my list automatically.

Posted on 19 June 2020, 17:23 by: misterchicken

This is the worst case of "muh style" I have ever seen.

Posted on 22 June 2020, 22:42 by: Albinoq

This shit gets a new page once in a blue fucking moon

Posted on 30 June 2020, 23:23 by: Razeluxe1

I can't even tell what's going on in most of these scenes. The art is so messy and all over the place.

Posted on 21 July 2020, 18:30 by: Mongrelwanderer

I don’t understand what was happening to the brunette at the end. Looked like lava leaking out from her ring, was she getting hot liquid poured on her?

Posted on 23 July 2020, 12:09 by: xbou

For those who are confused: she gets thoroughly fucked in the ass.

Posted on 23 July 2020, 16:25 by: fenrir1208

@xbou Well that's nice to know, but the fact that you still had to explain it to the others lets us know that this is devolving at a rapid pace. I shouldn't have to hire Vincent Van Gogh to tell me what it is that I'm looking at. Nothing about that is erotic.

I understand you want to focus on story, fine. I know you want to do a distinctive art style, go for it. I see that you want to set aside half for the story, %40 for the rated-R stuff, and then 10% of what people are subscribing for... shaky business practice at best but do what makes you happy I suppose. However, when people are paying you the first thing you should at least offer is some sort of draw that grabs the attention of the demographic you're trying to appeal to. And it's not great when your eroticism can be mistaken for tomato sauce spilled over a ham sandwich. Most of what we see right now makes ZERO sense outside of when characters are talking. There's hardly any definition between space and objects of focus in this comic, there's too little update for something that's offering so little of what the targeted demographic is seeking out, and there is no real rewards for our patience thus far. AND THEN HAVE THE NERVE TO START A NEW COMIC WHEN YOU HAVEN'T EVEN CLEARED THE FIRST CHAPTER OF THIS ONE.

If you want to only do SFW stuff, that's perfectly okay with me and many other people, but don't try to sucker in a few subs from the demographic of an area you clearly dislike and for the sake of a few extra dollars, while tossing them table scraps in comparison to the massive feast that is your portfolio. If you're going to do both, go balls to the wall with both. Don't give one or the other any less attention. All that does is piss people off of you.

I DO NOT SPEAK FOR EVERYONE, but I am sure there are some who can agree to some of what I've said.

Posted on 31 July 2020, 11:16 by: Khazakhil

What the absolute hell is this translation?

Posted on 02 August 2020, 04:58 by: FV_Pac

Sorry, I'm lost. I don't get the story, what's going on? For over eighteen pages, everything is completely dark and... A little bit confusing. Why the freckled red hair is there? Is she a prisoner? The guy from the beginning set her in that place? If it is, why? Who are the others? Like I said, I'm completely lost

Posted on 04 August 2020, 01:28 by: crap128

Were finally off that avalanche of nothing. Hopefully something...fucking ANYTHING will happen now.

Posted on 05 August 2020, 14:56 by: redmoth

i feel like these pages are a massive fucking waste of time. right now, what's up with just black page nonsense. she's getting rape and you choose the most boring unappealing way to show it?

each update i check on it just seems like i'm wasting my time here. it's too boring at this pace. maybe it'll be better in 10 years when more is done.

Posted on 06 October 2020, 06:59 by: megasean3000

This comic is an example of the flaws of “show, don’t tell”. It’s good for world building and character development, but when it comes to scenes where you don’t know what’s going on, it leaves the reader confused and have no idea what is happening. Tell us what’s happening!

Posted on 13 October 2020, 05:26 by: GTFODeathknight

i want to like it...but its just soo messy

Posted on 13 October 2020, 09:19 by: greatninja123

9% porn sorry but I don’t think black and red pages can be considered Porn.

Posted on 20 October 2020, 23:56 by: Yesman71

Either the tags bukkake, handjob, and masturbation refer to the author's verbal self-wank or y'all are seeing something I ain't. I couldn't even tell if they were actually fucking until page 46, and that's the only time I seen a dick in this whole comic.

Posted on 06 November 2020, 15:02 by: SSSdriver

What even are pages 48 to 58....

Posted on 06 November 2020, 19:54 by: fenrir1208

@SSSdriver
I think it's called Copy & Paste. What the artist did was copy one page, scale it down to a 4th, fill the page accordingly, repeat same process for next few pages like a Fibonacci sequence (1,1,2,3,5,8,13). When the artist wasted 7 pages on that alone, I knew this was just bullshit.

Posted on 18 November 2020, 18:58 by: OtleChip

This is in general just a bad set up if the goal is anything but quickly using up the slaves of the gallery (which if it is the case, could at least be said so).

#1 this will ruin their shoulders and arms and eventually lead to fractures and death as a long term thing. I'm willing to overlook that for the sake of lewdness but that brings me to my second point
#2 I don't know why that girl is bleeding from her wrists and torso. Either she is so absolutely loathing this to the point of inflicting self injury by trying to slice her arms through the cuffs as well as her torso, or the set up is intentionally made sharp to bleed and cut her. Which pretty much means either you are going to replace that slave, or you will use her up until she dies of blood loss or you're fucking someone while their spilling out their guts and blood

If the goal is long term sexual bondage, then you should avoid having your victims bleed with just a *single* act of sex.

In all though, I DO believe this comic has potential. I do like the concept of the story, the main characters, so I would definitely want to see more.

Last edited on 19 November 2020, 13:55.

Posted on 02 December 2020, 23:09 by: Krowler

Huge watermark, people pay for this?

Posted on 14 December 2020, 00:24 by: OtleChip

And honestly, despite all this, I genuinely enjoy the concept of the story and hope it continues.

A free spirited woman being made into a slave while her lover tries to comfort her and think about how to help her escape speaks to many of my fetishes. It works for both good and bad end.

Posted on 17 December 2020, 16:05 by: nameress

When is this ginger bitch going to get fucked???

wow, this gallery suddenly got worse.

Last edited on 24 December 2020, 00:53.

Posted on 29 January 2021, 13:11 by: Caroline4

is this still continued? the Line Webtoon side is gone

Posted:	2019-03-14 23:37
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Language:	English
File Size:	127.4 MiB
Length:	16 pages
Favorited:	1671 times

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artist:	este no es buckler
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female:	bdsm blindfold bondage bukkake cervix penetration defloration femdom freckles gag group hairy handjob harem huge breasts human cattle humiliation impregnation inverted nipples kissing lingerie milf public use rape sex toys slave small breasts stuck in wall sweating tall girl thick eyebrows thigh high boots torture very long hair
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Rating:		464
Average: 3.85