I don`t play FGO so I may have messed up somewhere. Just tell me about it and I'll fix it up. Also, this artist has other untranslated doujins about FGO. Not sure if they share a narrative universe but they're there. More Okita and Raikou there, at least.

-Hive-san

*The 2nd cover is the digital version from the artist's pixiv.
*Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/1371375/d7c3343c77/
*Edit: fixed pg. 3,4,5, and 7.

There is a lot of soft flesh in this doujin. The dude's almost smothered! Thanks for this excellent translation.

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Look at all that Okita and Mama

LOOK AT IT.

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Thanks for translating this. Please pay attention when you're downloading the RAWs and ensure you always download the original resolution version. The problem here is you edited the translation using resample version of the RAW and as a result, every page has been downsized to 1280x resolution, while the original sized RAW has three times bigger resolution. This is a huge degrade to image quality, that didn't need to happen and could've been avoided if the correct version was downloaded and the edits were done on that version instead.

For your next project, please remember to click on "Download Original Archive" instead of "Download Resample Archive".
Alternatively if you download one page at a time, make sure you download using the "Download Original Source" link below each opened image in gallery.

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搜chinese的tag偶尔也会搜到旗袍tag呢

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Oh kintoki never change thou

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@klemun I'm aware. I'm not new. This is the original raw. I just resized it. I don't see the point in excessively large images. Most people won't care about having their hentai in 4030x6063.

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This is heaven, wish that were me

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@Hive-san
I can assure you there are people who care about the resolution of their henta manga, like me. That's one of the reasons why I started to learn how to edit manga. If they don't care about the res e-hentai already offers downsampled versions for them.
Even if you downscaled your images from the original res yourself instead of e-hentais downscaled images quality and details get lost.

And what is the point of having high res RAWs if you don't use them?

Last edited on 05 April 2019, 19:58.

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我说怎么搜chinese搜出来英文的...

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Rider Kintoki pretty much gave Raikou to Ritsuka in the game.

I think.

Raikou was called General and Ritsuka is called Boss or something.

I like Kintoki, he is really awesome and a Big Bro to Ritsuka.

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There's something about Raikou.

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that's a pretty weird pairing... I'm having a hardtime fapping here.

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I've been waiting for this to get translated,if nothing else would have waited til after GG3 happened on NA,so thank you very much~

@Hive-san

https://e-hentai.org/g/1371293/670f041ec8/ is the prequel to this one,given you talked about whether or not the other works of the artist have anything to do with this.

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Some fine, fine stuff here!
There's some oddities to this, but I can still get off to it.
Raikou and Okita Alter make for an interesting pairing with Gudao.
Still, I would LOVE to be involved with these two gems of ladies!
A quality translation!
Thanks, Hive-san!

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Swag gang 555555

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The faces Raikou makes in this one...

I can't get enough.

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Woman begging not to cum anymore... thatsmyfetish.pcx

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@Hive-san: Um, in page 7, the translation of the first speech bubble in the third panel seems wonky. You sure it's Gudao's line, and not Okita Alter's?

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Top 10 Anime Betrayals

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After reading the first few pages, does anyone else imagine Robin Atkin Downes (Kazuhira Miller's English VA) voicing Kintoki when he calls Gudao "Boss"?

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@Hive-san I'd say just don't export at 100%. Do something like 90% or so and you'll keep the details with a smaller file size. Unless your problem is something like having low screen resolution or being unable to edit excessively large images efficiently, can't help you there.

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Good stuff. Check the forums for more tips on editing, and yes, +1 to 'use the highest RAW possible'. 10 years ago people said the same thing, and tha's why old galleries barely render on a smartphone... 877 x 1238 is hardly impressive these days (and yes, some people use big screens, I have a projector on a wall that's like 4x3 meters...).

Oh, and don't downvote Hive-san's reply. Downvoting is not the way to tell someone they made a mistake, sigh.

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I love time lapse scene like these, wish there were more

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