The original story is by Black Demon and I received permission from him to produce an illustrated version of
a specific part in his story.

Full Story from Black Demon (http://www.blackdemonstories.com/forcedinforeclosure4.html)

Produce by me, Paro Gide

Illustrated by Cao Phong Phan

Ive got no issue with the story, it could be good, but the font you've used is crap. You really need to change that.

Base +9, Paro Gide -6, suapthickdick +7, Zo22y +6, sdibolcrif +7

I’m with that. The font is unreadable. Hit it up with larger, thicker text, none of that itslics stuff.

I know it’s based on a story, but the text can also be reduced about 40%to make it easier to read.

Base +6, sdibolcrif +7

Nice story, good lead into the action but for me the action was too short should have had more pages of dirty doings. I would change your font as has been mentioned before.
Over all I like it thanks for the work and the share
Over all 7 out of 10!

Base +6, Paro Gide +6

That font is killing my erection, dude.

Base +6, sdibolcrif +7