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Align the text to the center next time.

Base +25, Tamaki-Kousaka +8, elwendys +5, slimedog +9, SCSS +19, WheldrakeX +16, ManlyMustacheMan +6, NeBuR1997 +6, White Joker +23, amt +8, somercet +8, Chileandude +6, George642 +9

Yeah, you need to set your text alignment to centre rather than left, mate. It just doesn't look right otherwise. Great choice to release though. Fukken love Hasebe's art style and femdom themes. The mother/son theme is just the icing on the cake hnnngg.

Base +6, elwendys +5, slimedog +9, WheldrakeX +16, Faulks +7

this kid is going to develop a disorder and probably kill himself later in life. the psychological aspect in hentai like this always overwhelms any kind of horniness for me

Base +7, Kittel -9, Arlinath -6, Brego1 -6, SonicGTR -6, Fanservicefan +16, swagmeister1337 +6, Krazylec -6, 8thPlanet +6, sordos +6, howshi +6, DaxterSpeed -9, naughts -6, and 48 more...

"A tale of a supportive mother encouraging and helping her son in exploring their sexuality. A bold tale tackling the post-gender based nuclear family dynamic transgressing a heteronormative matrix and inviting reflection on the composition of concepts such as identity while capturing the still evolving Generation Z zeitgeist. Reportedly partially based on Desmond Napoles' life. Rave reviews by Variety and the Guardian are expected."

And yeah, please centre the text next time, especially in big speech bubbles which have little text in them.

Base +22, Werefoofle -6, Feladrance +6, Krazylec +6, WheldrakeX +16, bloogtar +11, ManlyMustacheMan +6, NeBuR1997 +6, Accdump +6, patokite91 +9, Addictorator +10, Soldier A +6, Nam0 +6, and 28 more...

I... don't know what to say... there is definitely something to work with here, if only there was more space for the story and less explicit scenes, don't get me wrong it's good but I think it could have been better.

Base +6, somercet +8, Kittel +9, lolxd23 +8, Pffffffft -5, moeeno -6, Adeen Dragon +6, ButterLettuce +7, Noxmare +6

I don't know why but this is kinda sad.

Base +6, karlus113 +8, somercet +8, Mirallon +6, Night Star +6, serenitylzy +7, xburner337 +6, Kearnsae +6, lolxd23 +8, Leon_26 +7, Elias85 +6, Pffffffft +5, DBAV +6, and 26 more...

This isn't going to end well for either of them

Base +6, somercet +12

An interesting concept with good art.

Art 7. Plot 6. Sexiness 6. Translation 5. All out of 10.

Base +8

heh, reality based

Base +7, Mr.Baum +6, Yaguix816 +4, somercet +12

These characters are fucking nuts, in only the best sort of way. I love it.

Base +6