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When you let people explore the other side of the fence for once...

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Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/1275732/096391dd58/

Translation is done nicely, good job on that. The bodysuits are nice, really shows of their bodies.

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In Soviet Russia, darling fucks you.

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Some corrections if you're interested in adjusting it (some other translation choices are kind of iffy, but they aren't really mistakes like the following).

P5:
"Come... closer..." -> "Stay away..." (な makes this the negative imperative form...)
"Would that kill you?" -> "I will kill you!" (よ? here can be dropped since it's like a "do you get that?" affirmation rather than stating it as a question)
"If you don't use your words properly, I can't teach you" -> "If you don't tell me (about it), I won't understand (what's going on with you)!" (教えて is more like informing than teaching here)

P6:
"You know what to do, don't you?" -> "Don't blame me for what happens (next // to you)." (not entirely sure how this got messed up, but 知らない in this context means "I don't care" // "Don't blame me" // etc)

P11:
"Ah? But it'll ache if I don't get off properly, you know?" -> "It'll hurt if you don't relax a bit // stop tensing up." (力を抜く is about relaxing / releasing tension in your muscles, basically she's telling him to stop clenching his ass if he doesn't want it to hurt)

P12:
This whole page is basically run-on dialogue so I'll write a basic summary of what it actually says from the second panel onwards (zero-two is essentially thinking allowed about the reason he wet himself):
"I wonder if your body was in shock because I really put my cock inside you. Or maybe... it was because you're a pervert who gets aroused from being penetrated, even though it's your first time."

P15:
"You know?" -> "Can you feel it?" (わかる is less about knowing and more about comprehending what's going on)

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Should this be "Franxx in the Darling" instead?

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Darling it's Franks

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Hiro's ass is even more fuckable than Zero Two's in this comic. Should I be worried or should I just go for both?

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@rqwrqw

Thanks! I do this as a learning exercise, so I appreciate your catching my misses. And yeah, a lot of stuff won't look perfectly accurate as I try to make it flow more naturally in english, but I'll go through tonight and fix those spots I messed up.

I translated P11 that way since I read that 抜く could be translated as 'to ejaculate' in some cases. That makes more sense.

I also could not tell who was talking in the last panel of page 5. It makes much more sense now that I realize it's all Hiro.

Last edited on 13 June 2019, 23:32.

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