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(C91) [Ishikawa Pro (Ishikawa Naoya)] Kuttsukiboshi -Ai no Suzukuri- | -Building a Lovenest- (Kuttsukiboshi) [English]

(C91) [石川プロ (石川直哉)] くっつきぼし -あいのすづくり- (くっつきぼし) [英訳]

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Posted:2019-06-13 08:29
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Posted on 13 June 2019, 08:29 by:   WheldrakeX    PM
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Translation: Goggled Anon
Editing: Wheldrake

Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/1429205/4783f4cc9c/

Update: Fixed some lines on pages 4, 12, 19 (Thanks Ichigo69)
Posted on 11 June 2019, 16:44 by:   Noni    PM
Score +102
Excellent licking action on p.13 - wonderful yuri stuff! thanks for sharing this translation with all of us here.
Posted on 12 June 2019, 18:05 by:   Ichigo69    PM
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Hey, Wheldrake. I put some corrections on the /u/ TL thread, but evidently you started typesetting it before they could be added to the pastebin. Here they are:
p4
>You can put the stuff in that box on the bookshelves.
(there's nothing wrong with this line the way you had it, it's just that this flows better)

p12
>Whose fault do you think it is that I'm like this...?
(same as above. Flows better)

p19
>It's darker inside the room, so it should be fine.
(this line was translated incorrectly. The "darker than inside" should just be "darker inside". 部屋のほうがからたぶん大丈夫)
(Even if you can't read the JP, you can't see inside dark rooms if where you are is lighter outside simply b/c physics. The japanese line implies as much, too)

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