A retranslation because the commissioner thought it deserved better.

Edit: Oh fucking hell, something mustve went wrong with the batch jpeg.

Edit2: Welp, that was the scan I got pointed to. Can't do much about that.

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Commission info and archives at:
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Deserved better...well the translation and editing/typesetting is definitely better.

But why is this a fraction of the original RAW's resolution...

EDIT: I take that back THIS is the correct source used for editing: https://e-hentai.org/g/1406534/b0e9b341d1/ It's actually the Expunged doujinantena "RAW" not a resample of the HQ scan...

I don't understand how this is possible...the two were uploaded on the same day so the expunged one couldn't have been up for very long...

You can only pick one.
This TL upload: Good engine, bad car body
ALT TL: https://e-hentai.org/g/1409205/5db744b44d/ Mediocre (though tuned) engine, beautiful car body
ALT TL: https://e-hentai.org/g/1444666/8eba33a2d5/ Custom muscle car edition (Uses this translation with HQ RAW)

Last edited on 12 July 2019, 04:07.

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The second character tag should be yamato(大和), not Yamamoto(山本)

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who the fuck is "Yamamoto"....

Base +6, Teh_Red_Guy +10, Entei Nevermore +6, Hakrei +28, DJ_Puchuu +13, Ch3n9 +7, n00ps +6, firedragon89 +14, sakurasaku +6, lazorboy96 +6

Funny how only the retranslation had yamato's name wrong. Good thing it's fixed

Base +6

And then admiral died.

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Magical Portals
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1406719/d039a0f706/
KOR: https://e-hentai.org/g/1406722/b822f7876f/
CHN: https://e-hentai.org/g/1407133/5b5498b242/
ENG (Version 1): https://e-hentai.org/g/1409205/5db744b44d/
ENG (Version 2): https://e-hentai.org/g/1433928/7b86abfa6f/ (You are here)
ENG (Version 3): https://e-hentai.org/g/1444666/8eba33a2d5/
PRT: https://e-hentai.org/g/1422419/48f6537e57/
Textless: https://e-hentai.org/g/1444351/1377928e45/
Textless (Decensored): https://e-hentai.org/g/1676718/b1e3a2fe8c/
IND: https://e-hentai.org/g/1463647/4f04d99ab5/
GER: https://e-hentai.org/g/1465646/63113b79c6/
THA: https://e-hentai.org/g/1492515/aaac27d3ab/

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