Hello, this is an "original" work, I did it was to create a new story with the images of the original program, editing some images for use of the story. I would appreciate advice for future works.

...Why the fuck is the memories of that damn show coming back to me.

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can't draw? just poorly Photoshop the shit out of it!

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the story is alright for the most part also I would add that your going to get a little criticism for not drawing it and you can understand why it would make the story better because you wouldn't have to relied on taking poses and scenes from the show in order to get the point a cross but I cant blame you to much for using photoshop and I rather take ok photoshop porn then crappy drawn porn, if I were to change something it would is the shot of jane in the tree house, you might have been better off getting a clip from the movie which would more sense to the lore of the movies and show but that has its own problems so I again I cant blame you on that.

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