Finally done with it. Since i did use CGrascal's version to crosscheck some stuff, i guess i should call this one as 'alternative translation'?

Just in case if anyone's confused, amatsukaze was referring to this in page 7, not to the one in book 5:
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/3111116

CGrascal's version: https://e-hentai.org/g/1459572/1ef3235ce2/
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1444458/b49ffaf35f/

Anata no Yami Chinjufu 5: https://e-hentai.org/g/1459985/9fe6895980/

@ keronos

Not sure why there is so much noise and bleed through on only the first 7 pages but I cleaned them up for you.

https://imgur.com/a/0vk7JcC

Great to see more of Your Dark Naval Base, BETEMIUS is awesome.

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@ADT555

holy crap, thanks for the heads-up. no wonder i can't shake off this feeling that i forgot something. i'll update them later.

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LOL I noticed Kasumi's side ponytail being on the wrong side on page 9 and couldn't unsee, then ended up rereading the whole thing again just to pay attention to Kasumi. She appeared in pages 4, 9, 13, 16, 19, and 20 with her side ponytail all on the wrong side, but in her final appearance in page 21 it went back to the normal side (heck, I wouldn't even think that was Kasumi if not for Mutsuki explicitly calling her name since before that point her side ponytail was consistently on the wrong side LOL)

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