> Also reminder that itsuki a best and is the bride.

You were doing it so well right up to that point OP.

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Could definitely use much better typsetting. Excellent image quality, though being JPG you might be able to optimize file sizes by losslessly compressing with PNG. Great in-character doujin, referencing earlier chapters.

>Itsuki calls him "Uesugi" instead of "Uesugi-kun"
Immersion broken.

>Also reminder that itsuki a best and is the bride.
You misspelled Nino and Miku, v2 when?

@rhymeking5005
You could team with others for typesetting and editing.

Last edited on 20 August 2019, 21:20.

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@Seveutiel
Yeah, he went over and beyond good at that point. Such a great opinion.

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Yotsuba gang report in!

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Well done mate, this was translated so well and the quality is spectacular, thank you very much!

Also Miku and Itsuki for life.

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Thanks for this! It's pretty good, but you need to improve the typesetting some.

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Miku best girl, everyone else is wrong.

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This needs a proper editing.

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I want Nino to step on my dick

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"Also reminder that itsuki a best and is the bride."

Fucking cultured translator right here, fuck yeah Team Eatsuki

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*Yotsuba has joined the server*

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#TeamMiku here.

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Jeez, you people need to realize, that there is only one truth. And that is Everything or Nothing. He either gets them all, or gets none of them.

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"Both of you get out of the way! Now it's my time to punish him!" The words every masochist sreams of hearing.

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#TeamYotsuba here.

#TeamYotsuba here.

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Uesugi best grill

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Itsuki a best and that is simply a fact.

I realized my mistake on Itsuki saying "Uesugi" instead of "Uesugi-kun" so I'll fix that. However, this is literally my first attempt at typesetting so I probably won't be able to improve much of that right now.

As for image quality, GIMP detected that the "original" image from the Chinese upload was a 93% quality JPEG, so I saved the edited files as a 93% quality JPEG too.

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Itsuki is blandest genericfue, i like to call her "generItsuki"
Yotsuba best-girl, and Miku best waifue

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bad edit for this doujinshi

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Well, that was fun. Would've felt more realistic if there was less silly humor amid the sex though... this is Gotoubon, not Haganai where all the girls have zero common sense.

Also realistically Yotsuba would've cucked herself by just watching the rest of them fuck. I say this as a Yotsuba fan.

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Page 33 They're calling out his name just like in the opening theme.

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Even on ex you can't escape quintfag wars.

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Friendly reminder the Yotsubagang won.

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The translation, proofreading, cleaning, and typesetting are all a mess. Not to mention, the long-winded "translation notes" scattered throughout.

We need some sort of mod-level quality control, because the userbase can no longer be trusted to perform this task. I mean, 4.54 stars, for this shit? Are you fucking kidding me? How the fuck does this shit get 4.54 stars?

E-hentai users have no taste anymore.

P.S. I don't even give a shit about which one is supposed to be "best girl" since I never read the manga or watched the anime. I just hate seeing sloppily done work uploaded onto this site receiving a high rating that it doesn't deserve.

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The other translation got p15 bottom left wrong, see raw https://e-hentai.org/s/8c5de34c76/1485516-15
I take this one because I can't be sure what else he change

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