I hope my first edit+translate is up to par. Enjoy!

Done: https://e-hentai.org/g/1475919/37d627a1b0/

Last edited on 01 September 2019, 08:04.

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Precious Mashu...<3

Thank you for the translation!

Base +6, Fap might +3, firedragon89 +14, MechWarriorNY +9

Not bad for your first one. We've seen far worse here.
I can't judge how good the translation is but I can give you a little feedback about your editing.
You didn't make the popular mistake to use e-hentai's downscaled 1280s instead ot the original resolution images. Good job on that!!! The moans look good except for that A/A/AH! on page 12.
But you need a comic font for your text. The font reads good but it looks out of place. I recommend you get some comic fonts like Anime Ace, Wurmics Bravo, Wurper Comics, Komika, etc. You can download them for free at sites like dafont.com.

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I want to mashu the Mashu!

Base +7, firedragon89 +14, RepiL +6

Magical Portals:
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1465573/d83e94887a/
CHN: https://e-hentai.org/g/1465570/915341166b/
CHN (Decensored): https://e-hentai.org/g/1574222/ba8bd0b011/
KOR: https://e-hentai.org/g/1465954/9ad0024fb4/
VIE (+ Textless): https://e-hentai.org/g/1474464/3dc6a0a878/
ENG (Version 1): https://e-hentai.org/g/1475589/15b9848900/ (You are here)
ENG (Version 2): https://e-hentai.org/g/1475919/37d627a1b0/
ENG (Decensored): https://e-hentai.org/g/1756457/65322c89c7/
SPA: https://e-hentai.org/g/1767934/aeae634e51/

Base +46, Mayriad +38

OrangeMaru made a lot of Mash so I searched it. Searching Mash doesn't return everything from this circle. This is my gripe with the search system, like whats the point of putting shielder | mash kyrielight if you can't search Mash as tag?

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