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[Amuai Okashi Seisakusho (Kurimoti Tiduru)] TS-Flashback CH.1 [English][Corivas]

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Posted:2019-09-17 15:14
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Language:English  
File Size:15.01 MiB
Length:4 pages
Favorited:262 times
Rating:
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Average: 3.74

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Posted on 17 September 2019, 15:14 by:   Starwind08    PM
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Translated by the dashingly handsome, Corivas (Taking commissions!):
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Posted on 17 September 2019, 16:45 by:   unread    PM
Score -23
what a story? just short story and too many plothole
Posted on 17 September 2019, 20:57 by:   bloodyred    PM
Score +19
too short :/
Posted on 17 September 2019, 21:50 by:   The Goat is Watching    PM
Score +97
I love a premise like this, but ending immediately after doing nothing but establishing it feels kinda pointless. Ah well.
Posted on 17 September 2019, 23:36 by:   KiaraKitsu    PM
Score +5
As much as I agree it is annoying how it ends so abruptly it also makes a bit of sense if it really is such a world shift... still would LOVE to see the trouble they would get into.
Posted on 18 September 2019, 05:53 by:   Senkoau    PM
Score +26
Did he screw up the guy's life because they bumped into him at a resturant?
Posted on 18 September 2019, 06:36 by:   The Goat is Watching    PM
Score +16
@Senkoau There's no way to tell. I don't see any glimpse of the screwer in any of the memories, or in page 1.

Either they're just some nothing character put there to trigger the story, or they're somebody intended for wherever the story would have gone if it didn't get cut short. Who knows.
Posted on 18 September 2019, 08:58 by:   yearhyearh    PM
Score +33
How was the life even screwed up? it's more like they killed that person an replaced them with someone that also had an okay life.
Posted on 18 September 2019, 10:01 by:   0psi    PM
Score +26
@Senkoau The translator should have really translated the banner in the first panel; this is a junior high class reunion.

Side note, who is Director eeeh, maji?! :^)
Posted on 18 September 2019, 13:51 by:   maverih345456    PM
Score +15
You forgot the last page
Posted on 18 September 2019, 14:52 by:   Striborg    PM
Score +49
The text in the last bubble is wrong.
It says "What am I doing, thinking about old times like that?"
Posted on 19 September 2019, 03:16 by:   Starwind08    PM
Score +9
@maverih345456
Didn't know there is a last page

@Striborg
Hmmm, kind of agree. It would make a stronger case that the GB guy's memories were remolded.
Posted on 24 November 2019, 08:32 by:   3is    PM
Score +16
*reads thouroughly*

i cri

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