RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1289257/11ea96ce81/
Pixiv: https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=70779706

My second translation so far, again I used machine translation to get a rough idea of the story and then polished it into proper dialogue. I also mirrored the pages so it reads from right to left now.

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And try to find the center align button in your graphic program. Left aligned text is bad editting style.
Maybe you should read a typesetting tutorial like this: https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/main

Otherwise I appreciate your effort and that you admit that it's still just a machine translation. Not everyone does that.

Edit:
The artist is probaply korean (?), so that's why same reading direction as western (?). I was confused when I read my first thai doujin bx xter. Was hard to go back to western reading direction due to drawing style.
Make a short TL note for the reading direction on the top of the first page would be my advise. Mirroring not only affects the reading direction but also other things like the dominant hand of the characters, All lefthanded turn into righthanded and ohterwise.

Last edited on 15 October 2019, 21:13.

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Thanks for the advice, I`m still kinda new to editing.
I will change the text to center alignment and take a look at the tutorial.
Also I mirrored the pages because for some reason they read from left to right (like in western comics) and it isn't immediately obvious that they are supposed to be read that way, so I changed them to the way manga's are usually read (right to left)

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My opinion is that you shouldn't mirror the pages, leave it as the artist intended. People aren't stupid, they can pick up on reading direction.

That being said, it doesn't take away from the art or story, I appreciate you putting in the time to translate regardless.

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Thank you very much for translating Era's works, they're my favorite artist ever since I discovered them on pixiv some time ago.

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She gave up too quick.

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not really, ^ she was a sex slave from years ago, and also happens to be a bunnygirl, so it makes it easier to believe shed fall faster than normal. that being said, this is hentai. some girls fall within seconds of seeing a dick so eh.

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