Virgin Kissing vs Chad Blackmail Rape

Commissioned by lagg117

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"i'm sorry" no you're not. you'll be a slut by the end so it's better that he'll forget your ass slut.

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Oh, you just wait for the sequel. There's the real cuckery!

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草，这不是老早的本。。。。

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I’m not usually for rape in NTR, but the sequel is hawt sooo...

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Why does this look exactly like this: https://www.dlsite.com/ecchi-eng/work/=/product_id/RE218960.html

Base +7

This freaking trope about the blackmail in school by another student is fricking annoying!

Why dont the females say anything to her loved one and choose to go along with the blackmailer?

Dont take me wrong, i love the Cheating/NTR going one, the most hentai part of course, but sometimes it feels like the good old formula... and i need somethign that spice it.

Anyway! the girl is gorgeous, specially with her lovely blue eyes and majestuous breasts. Her ass is pretty but her moanings and climaxing must have priority over that.

Also her geniune ingeniuty about being alon with the guy blackmailing you... So gullible.

My best regards for the second part and Thanks.

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I will say, using the blackmail material, as "evidence" MH's boyfriend "raped" her, as blackmail to rape the MH? That's a new one.

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Since someone paid for this, it should be held to a decent standard of quality. I looked through the first 8 pages, though, and found quite a few glaring issues with the translation. I'll highlight the ones I thought were noteworthy here and provide fixed lines to show the intended meaning.

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[Page 2]

Do I... have to do this kind of thing...?
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I can't believe... this would happen...

[Page 3]

Huh~ Still in that mood.
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Ah, haven't felt like this in a while...

Well, it does feel like I'm playing hooky.
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Well, I guess I did play hooky for a while, so I get why...

[Page 4]

The double bubble in the center actually belongs to the guy, and should be reworded appropriately. The second half of the bubble should also say something along the lines of "we'll have to throw a congratulatory party" rather than what it says now about it already being planned.

Hehe... I'm really happy.
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Hehe... You're so nice.
{this line was also attributed to the wrong speaker}

[Page 5]

Looks like they're not gonna do it yet~
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Looks like they haven't even fucked yet, huh.

...Or do you not mind...?
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I guess I... don't mind...?

[Page 6]

Argh... And when I think of another guy's "junk", it makes me want to have her even more...
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Aah... Thinking about how she belongs to someone else makes me want to fuck her even more...

I'm definitely gonna fuck the shit out of this amazing body!
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I'm definitely gonna make that body mine and fuck it like crazy!

[Page 7]

I'll, at least, enjoy myself for now...
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Enjoy her while you can...

Huh...
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Hah...
{"sigh" would also be appropriate}

[Page 8]

Next time... we'll go... all the way, I hope...
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Next time... maybe we'll... go all the way...

Hm? Oh, I'm checking to see that no members enter the club room without permission.
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Hm? I'm on patrol to see if there was anyone doing anything naughty in the club room.

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And this is ignoring grammar issues altogether, not to mention there are another 26 pages I didn't even look through.

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@remembereverything Thank you for going through it, but it's hard to confirm if you dont know Japanese.

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Art is good. Same hentai plot line again where girl gets blackmailed from a picture then gets actually raped.

Base +10

Was it really necessary to censor the "1" in "17"? I mean what other age could a high school girl be? 7? 27?

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