Maybe a bit messy in some places...

But I do hope you'll enjoy this either way. This was a special request from someone.
I did my utmost best to stay as true to the original text as I could.

Happy reading!

I think you did a good job on this

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I though that the disfaithfulness of Sakura and even Sasuke's own daughter was an illusion by the Sharingan, like a long nightmare from Sasuke but... It doesn't seems to be what the author had in mind.

... I don't really undestand what's going on but i was quite happy to see young Sakura again.

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Mind translating the author's notes ?

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Another awful artist that fails to draw the characters as they really are.. Her tits are too huge and ugly her for her. Awful crap work.

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@molitar GET THE FUCK OUT OF MY IMAGINATION REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!

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Farewell Penis, it was a real pleasure knowing you!
Excellent as always, I'm really not tired of Sahara-sensei works. Thank you PhantomsJoker !

Edit: check @iambobokay comments.

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Awesome job

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RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1482268/e2fe748878/

Thanks for the translation.

@molitar: Why hello there opinion (which you are entitled too) but no need to be sour about it.

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Time to BEAT the s*** out of my DICK !

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For some reason I'm itching for him to create a Kakashi Rin Obito gangbang back in their youth's

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Would have preferred you translate all the moans too just for completion sake, but good effort

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Sasuke's face though...

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I don't understand the plot. Are they fucking while Madara is casting the IT? Or did Sasuke get trapped in the IT despite his Rinnegan? Or has the IT already been cast and they're fucking because they have nothing else to do, although Naruto and Saauke should be able to undo it?

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"Maybe a bit messy in some places"

...That is an understatement if I've ever heard one. There are quite a lot of parts in this that are just flat out wrong. Here are some of my highlights:

"Guess I'll look around a bit. I'm going to have to be cautious..." - "Alright, just like we discussed earlier, I'm going to take the lead now..."
"Ah, so that explains her recent change in behaviour. I was wondering what she was all acting strange about." - "Since me and Sakura were acting seperately so much recently, I didn't have anyone to blow my load into, after all."
"Anyway, we have plans to keep going until the lights go out" - "We have to wait until that light vanishes anyway, so it's perfect timing."
"Aaah, this feels too good to pull out." - "Man, I was so backed up, it won't stop shooting out!"
"Oh, you were here too, Sasuke...?" - "Sasuke, come over here too!"
"Who knew you were actually a really huge masochist, Sakura?" - "Your pussy really is the absolute best, Sakura!"
"Aahh....That is..so fast...That's.... So, how is it? Having both your holes stuffed at the same time?" - "Please...don't move...so fast...otherwise...I can't...use my mouth...properly..."

As I said, these are just some highlights. There are a lot more mistakes and I would encourage you to redo this translation, since these kinds of deviations are not creative liberty anymore.

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Thanks for the translation. It seems it's harder to find people who want to translate naruto hentai these days. I'd rather have a translation with a couple errors, rather than no translation at all tbh.

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So this was just a poor translation? Alrighty. Judging from Iambobokay's corrections, it takes place while Madara is casting the IT; I was thrown off since I didn't see Sasuke's Susanoo anywhere.

Seems like a pretty convoluted plot, tho. It'd have been better if it took place after Kaguya's defeat; Sasuke prepares to start his revolution, but after seeing Naruto and Sakura bang, drops it and joins in. That's what I thought the doujin was about when I read the raw.

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The running theme with this author seems to be that Naruto and Sakura bang each other for no, any, and all reasons, so I didn't really need a solid one there.
Kinda weird that Sasuke was into it, but again, whatever.
The only part that confuses me is the end with Kakashi. I can only come up with two theories to explain it.
1) As Rin was the only girl on her team, maybe Kakashi sees her in Sakura? I dunno. Maybe he and Obito gangbanged her as well, so it feels familiar?
or
2) Ino, having been obsessed with Sasuke for just as long as Sakura, but being unable to get near him consistently, has gone INSANE, and her lust and broken mind have fused to create a new doujutsu that is both totally immune to the Sharingan, and a thousand times more powerful. So she shrugs off the IT, takes over Kakashi's body for a closer look, but then gets distracted by the gangbang, and just faps all over Kakashi's picture of Rin. Hence the "forehead girl".

...obviously I prefer the first theory.

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@imabobokay
I also noticed that a line on page 30 seemed to contradict the page before it.
Naruto has trained so anal sex feels good, but she's just now giving Sasuke her anal virginity? While technically possible, that still seems odd.
サスケくんのケッ穴童貞ももらっちゃったあ
Just roughly using Google translate it definitely seems she says she's taking Sasuke's "anal virginity", in the sense that she's going to be the recipient for his first time having anal sex.

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his art quality seems to becoming worst as he goes to pure digital, kind of stiff. i loved his early works, but i am burned out of Sakura every time, specially when his Ino and Tsunade were great.
But for people that loves Sakura, this artist will supply them forever.

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@ilovethishit
That "stiffness" happens to a lot of artists during that medium transition, though it's something they usually adjust to with time. Honestly it's not too bad here, save for a couple cases with the boobs.
Also I had the exact same exhaustion with their subject matter, but years ago. I totally tuned them out for a while, and now I'm just binging all their stuff since then like one big doujin.
Though it's still sort of depressing that I get the impression they keep drawing the exact same thing because they're scared too rock the boat at this point.

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Rin's doujin when ?

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This author really hates sasuke and sasusaku. Skip.

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Karakishi Youhei-dan's magnum opus.

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@Iambobokay would you say there’s enough of a divergence from what a correct translation would be to warrant a “rewrite” tag?

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I hate you karakishi fanboys, go kill yourselves.

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This definitely needs to be classified as a rewrite, it's a shame that people are reading this thinking it's the correct translation.

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I love how Kakashi's fapping to Rin at the end.

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Wasn’t there a more accurate translation of this? Where’d it go?

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