Rabbit Hole Translations
https://rabbitholetranslations.blogspot.com/

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1460505/a406937f14/ https://e-hentai.org/g/1460505/a406937f14/

First upload, I hope you guys enjoy!

Thanks for sharing this is quite good, classic Mind Control Apps.

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p.4 how come "Few days ago" become "Several day later"?

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kinda weak tbh

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Need More of this Artist my friends. Thanks.

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Nice clean art with characters standing out from the background? I want more of this new artist.

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Why did you left justify the first two pages? Other than that good job. A minor grammatical error I noticed:

P 4: "Though it [should] still be good for a joke, right?"

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Page 22, 4th panel "from her on everyday". I assume it should be "from here". Thanks for the upload!

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This was nice. Good job!

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Thanks for the feedback guys!

@Emphasis
@weedlayer
Sorry about those... I'll triple check the grammar after waiting a few days before uploading anything else!

@H0R0
I messed up that's how, Japanese is hard man! Thank you again for the feedback- I'll be more careful next time! And well spotted :)

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It's like a wannabe King's App.

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Good job on this.

Last edited on 27 November 2019, 13:02.

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personally not too big of a fan of the word "mama" when it comes to this type of manga but it was very well made, hope you keep translating in the future. I am curius though, how long did it take you to do the the translation?

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