TL: kappasa
commission by: anon
https://kappasa.blogspot.com/

raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/1204214/c373960dfd/

04: "happend". "ben Around"

07: "on heat" (you go into heat, not on heat) (also on p11)

08: "Her lips are grasping softly the stump!"

10: "throughoutly" (thoroughly? throughout?)

16: "Your breasts look in pain"

There's also a lot of missing commas throughout. There's similar issues in your other uploads as well. You should consider at least getting a proofreader.

You're also saving the output images as full-color PNG instead of greyscale or indexed color, which bloats the filesize. Notice that the raw is half the filesize of the translation.

Base +23, dj756 +6, kayza +6, user00 +8, oceansama +11, sonnytag123 +10, aaron_ +11, lazorboy96 +6, shaolan-kun +6, IncognitoMaud +6, BobDringus +6, Auglaize +9, DarkMel +8, and 2 more...

Thank you for pointing out the mistakes. Really appreciate constructive criticism.
I'll stop being lazy and run spell checks from now on (curse you photoshop for not having real time spellchecking!) and hopefully stop making such noob grammar mistakes.
I was pretty confused about the file size, will change the color format from now on as well~

Base +6, labematuer +6, sonnytag123 +10, dj756 +6, lazorboy96 +6, Mapleteal +6, trotrotro +6, IncognitoMaud +6, BobDringus +6, Teh_Red_Guy +11, Auglaize +9