My First Attempt at a scanlation. Added somes details because Why not, I did a bunch of protein before making it.

Thank you for the translation but can I ask you why you used the https://e-hentai.org/g/1223273/0a3ca4891b/ source with that horrible text in front of cover instead using the original https://e-hentai.org/g/1157912/835c79ec1f/ ?

If it was to use the already edited version of them to put english to have less work is one thing but you dont need to use also their cover and adding the same text they did in pic 2.... so if possible make it as close to original please.

Anyway, good luck on your future projects.

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I just don't get it. Why is translations like this ever exsist? Are those who do it have some mental issues or 47 chromosome? It's not like you need higher education to center the text or do font size match to speech bubbles.

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.......first attempt....... Might i suggest a stack of fonts that Oliver shared @ hentairules - https://www.hentairules.net/2014/04/20/im-sharing-my-favorite-comics-like-fonts-if-youre-interested/

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Looks like a rewrite to me. As far as quality goes, even for a first attempt this is pretty shit overall.

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Hahahahaha, I know its bad. Figure I go in head first without a clue what to do, then reflect on how to improve later. It's not the ideal method, but I should probably take some more protein next time.

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@Vormik you obviously can do better so why is your uploader page empty? It's better than this never being translated is all I'm saying

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@zONEv1 obviously anybody can do better, even you, because it's just VERY SIMPLE. My uploads empty, because i'm doesn't translate hentai, but i'm translate non-h manga, so i know what i'm saying. And this argument like "first you do something by yourself then complain about others work" is soooooooooo lame. So you never saying that some movie is garbage, because you doesn't film anyone?

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@Vormik I hope you don't do those translations in english, because your comments are pitiful to read. And I'd rather have thousands of shitty translators/scanlators than little fags like you that only complain without giving any constructive criticism

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@zONEv1
Technically, he did provide constructive criticism, namely: "center the text" and "match the font size to the speech bubbles".

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I’d recommend for the next time, don’t add a bunch of nonsense that wasn’t in the original text. Unless your goal is to make a rewrite, if so tag it as one. Also, why in the hell did you have her say her cum is falling out at the end? She’s pissing dude. Do you understand the difference?
On a unrelated note you sound like a -slightly- more verbose yoga instructor from Aggretsuko. PROTIEN.

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I do love me some PROTIEN!!!

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@zONEv1 no i doesn't translate in english. I can read english well, but not write or speak.
And i'm really love this "little fags", who's protects their rights to eat shit.

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I mean, the "translation" is pretty bad, but I understand the mentality behind it. This artist's work is criminally under-translated. I'd do it myself if I could.

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@gopha kierselph

Thanks ! Been looking for something like that because I plan to get in the scanlation thing !

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Everybody has to start somewhere. I'll recommend reading through the forums for useful information about how to start. I mean, I'm not really good or experienced myself about scanlation in general and especially editing but reading through those helps a lot.

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that is wonderful draw

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Thinking of re-translating this as I can see just from OCR the text that there is barely any speech bubble that has the right text in them... and the poor editing for that matter.

I don't know if the translated text is correct to it's source (which is definitely not the Japanese one), but making text centralized and fit within the a speech bubbles isn't THAT hard. Just as lazy of a job like all the "textless" re-uploads that keep on popping up...

Re-translated: https://e-hentai.org/g/1974053/7ae5d9e821/

Last edited on 01 August 2021, 14:20.

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If possible can you re-translate my other work too. That would be awesome.

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