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[Asera] Elven Subtlety

Western
Posted:2020-02-23 06:47
Parent:1571880
Visible:No (Expunged)
Language:English  
File Size:19.72 MiB
Length:16 pages
Favorited:663 times
Rating:
153
Average: 4.61

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Posted on 27 January 2020, 03:12 by:   thecronosone    PM
Score +12
This one is really nice but it feels like it's missing some pages.
Posted on 03 February 2020, 07:03 by:   porno-mancer    PM
Score +34
based orcs
Posted on 03 February 2020, 14:32 by:   Runeru    PM
Score +112
Nice art, but damn that dialogue is all over the place.
Posted on 09 February 2020, 08:50 by:   zlsun16    PM
Score +1
i don't like this type,maybe it's only my view
Posted on 14 February 2020, 06:53 by:   thekiller2413    PM
Score +0
There's definitely an ending missing somewhere.
Posted on 27 February 2020, 16:32 by:   IHavoc    PM
Score +34
@Runeru
Some people don't seem to grasp that sounding fancy =/= abusing a thesaurus. You need to take into account connotation and sentence structure, it shouldn't just read like a regular ass sentence with some words swapped out for synonyms. But most importantly it should just not sound stilted - which is a bit of a harder criteria to define. But fortunately there's plenty of examples out there for haughty characters.

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