This is my first translation project. My japanese is far from great, so there's probably a couple minor mistakes but I'm pretty sure I got most of it correct. Apologies for how messy some of the text cover can be, I'm definitely not an artist and there wasn't a textless version for me to work with

Base +6, schnitzel9173 +9, AhKai +6, czerkill +10, Dragendorff +10, Dunzard +9, Lostalgia +9, letoplel +19, Adamantcheese +6, x179b24 +7, Mabifica -6

Pregnant Noire best Noire

Base +7, Phantombet3 +6, hdhdjjd +6, letoplel +19, Encuilion +8, Sumitandord +6, x179b24 +7, Azriel_Satan +6

Good effort but the font used when writing over noir's hair was difficult to read.

Art 5. Plot 5. Sexiness 6. Translation 5. True to character 5. All out of 10.

Base +8