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Posted:2020-03-21 02:09
Parent:1519721
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Language:English  TR
File Size:21.56 MiB
Length:28 pages
Favorited:79 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.67

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Posted on 21 March 2020, 02:09 by:   AClockWorkOrange    PM
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Comic about Tatara Kogasa and Nazrin during a rainy day
Posted on 17 November 2019, 02:49 by:   ADT555    PM
Score +45
Nice job on the typeset.

The person who did the translation on Danbooru is Levander, please add him to the credits.
Posted on 17 November 2019, 16:59 by:   mutopis    PM
Score +28
pg 23, "surprse more humans." -> "surprise"
Posted on 18 November 2019, 06:32 by:   Noni    PM
Score +46
Raw can be found here: https://e-hentai.org/g/855954/6e631827df/

Thanks for the typesetting, ACWO, and thanks to Levander for the translation! You must like that old movie a lot, I guess - a clockwork orange?
Posted on 18 November 2019, 08:57 by:   AClockWorkOrange    PM
Score +7
@DJNoni just a random name :v
Posted on 19 November 2019, 12:00 by:   onikamikun    PM
Score +36
Fair number of typos and such. Here's a quick rundown of what I saw.
Pg. 7: "You're on going" >>> "You're only going"
Pg. 9: "Wait there, huh..." >>> "Wait here, huh..."
"Looking we chipper, aren't we?" >>> "Looking chipper, aren't we?"
Pg. 10: "You had a sort of relationship?" >>> "You had that sort of relationship?"
Pg. 11: "Abandoned is that made you" >>> "Abandoned is what made you"
Pg. 14: "I perfer" >>> "I prefer"
Pg. 19: "I thought that was I should do" >>> "I thought that was what I should do"
Pg. 22: "Not just you desire" >>> "Not just your desire"
Pg. 28: [Nazrin's spiel] >>> "Until the end of the world, I'll make sure to never speak words of apology to you ever again."

And thanks for the translation, as always.
Posted on 21 March 2020, 03:10 by:   AClockWorkOrange    PM
Score +19
@onikamikun all done!
Posted on 03 April 2020, 19:40 by:   UF8    PM
Score +6
pg 3, "There's aren't" -> "There aren't"

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