Was wondering why the low rating. Gave it a read and yeah, guess that's a given. Looked good too. Also the guy is a talking penis.

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Sorry guy im still newbie in manga translate and also this is my first time translate hentai ,any correction can let direct mail me i will do the correction.
I'm a big fan of kawahagitei and I love his artwork so much, I do support his work and for those who love it can support at Fantia→http://fantia.jp7890.
Also can support me in https://twitter.com/MrRedpost.
For now Im planning to translate his latest work currently finish(60%),will upload again

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raw:
https://e-hentai.org/g/1596331/ff2ccc9a9f/

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For future reference, when labeling your upload, it should go (as a standard):

[Group Name (Artist)] Title (Series) [Language]

The series can be left off if it is an original work, or you can just right (Original) there.
If there is no Group/Circle, you can just place [Artist] at the start instead.

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*edit
You should also add (Incomplete) at the end of it if you didn't upload a finished thing. Since it looks like the original has 235 images and this only has 163... you're missing 72 pages.

Last edited on 29 March 2020, 11:56.

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@kentassy: I really don't even know where to start; the whole grammatical structure of the sentences is bad

please ask on the e-hentai forums for proofreading

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Thank you for your efforts in translating this. It might be flawed. But i appreciate someone trying. And at least i have some idea of whats being said. It's better than havingno translation at all. Please keep up the good work :D

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Thank you @blackkat101 for all the reference you give it to me,i will take note and try to make it better in future,yes is still 72pages still in progress.
Sorry@tomato86,that I make you disappoint, I hope there a better translater willing to translate it.Gomenasaii
Thank you@idiotmonkey as a fan of kawahagitei, I always waiting for someone to translate his work but only a few. T.T. I will try to improve it for the next work.

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Okay, I know from experience how hard it is to make a translation without having a firm grasp on the language, but you would want to be more thoughtful, question your every assumption and (sometimes quite literally) quadruple-check everything.
For example on the page 8 you wrote something about scalpel, but this word "mesu" also means female animal. When applied to a human, it assumes somewhat derogatory tone. Online translators don't catch those nuances, you gotta work it out by yourself.

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As others have said... There's SO MANY errors, both in translation and grammar. I'd highly recommend either a proofreader, or just commissioning it by someone that can give a good translation. While it's nice you want Kawahagitei's stuff translated, many works get "crossed off" translator's lists if it's already been done, even poorly, so a bad upload lowers the chances of a good upload.

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Everyone has to start somewhere. Please continue studying, and I hope you are willing to improve. That is the most important part. Seems like you have an understanding that this needs improvement, so that's a good start. No one starts off a pro, remember that.

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Say what you will about the translation but page 58 is something special

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Yeah i agree with what others have said, stuff gets "crossed off" too easily. maybe try translating something that's already been done before or posting to a hentai discord until you get it down pat. I don't want to discourage you since more translators is always a good thing, just want to make sure that everything gets a quality translation in the end. (unless your willing to redo these in the future, in which case full steam ahead my friend!)

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Thank you@Ropensel will check again on that part,look like im still need to learn a lot about it
Thank you@ HKSpice really appreciate your, will try my best,arigatou .
@dabrhe page 58 ,banana special?
Thank for the info @Goretanton,will try to redo it and a minor mistake on it.

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The TL might not be the best, but im really thankful that you actually done it. As long as i understand whats going on, i dont really care much about the grammars and so, as it beats reading the RAW since i dont read JP. Wish you would continue this soon

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